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Review #1, by LittleLionGirl Mundungus Fletcher

25th July 2013:
Wow. This is really well written. I like how you had made stealing in his actual nature. It is very believable. I find it interesting he "stole" his best friend's girlfriend. I am not a big fan of the character but I love how you portrayed him and you kept me interested up until the very end.
XOXOXO,
LLG

Author's Response: Thank you! You really make my day with your kind words!
I wanted to have Mundungus always being a thief and I imagined that if he wanted something that nothing would be able to stop him from taking it, no matter who it was he was stealing from.
I'm not a big fan of him either, but I wanted the challenge of writing him. :D
Thank you so much for your wonderful words!
XOXOXOXO


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Review #2, by heartjily4ever Mundungus Fletcher

23rd July 2013:
Wow, i love this story, I really do. I've never really thought about Mundungus but this story is a whole other side to him that I never thought about. A love life. And incorporating the stealing in with it is brill. I really like this.

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad that you love this story. I've been thinking of maybe expanding it to a few more chapters or into a novel?
I always imagined that he would have stolen from a young age, so I wanted to include him stealing a lot.
I'm so glad that you liked this :D


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Review #3, by The Misfit Mundungus Fletcher

17th July 2013:
Oooh, this is really interesting! I've never read something that features Mundungus Fletcher, so this instantly caught my eye! I like how you started his compulsion to steal; a lot of kids always want what their friends have and you can tell he's just a normal kid then - but then the adrenaline rush. It's fabulous that you portrayed him as not wanting to sell things on (at least not at such a young age) as I've never thought he started stealing out of malice. The Magpie nickname was so cute, too ♥

EEEK HE STOLE HIS BEST FRIEND'S GIRLFRIEND. (Side note: I love your headcanon of Mundungus' history - it's very similar to mine! :D) I don't think the poor boy had many friends after that :( I'd really love to see what happens when Michaela realizes what Mundungus did - if you ever write that, let me know! ;)

I did spot a couple of typos: making sure he was around to over her comforting advice - over should be offer. ;) Also, in your summary and the last line of your story, you use the word "has" which is present tense, but the story is written in past tense, so it should be "had".

Apart from that, this was a fabulous read! You did brilliantly capturing Mundungus' character in so few words ♥

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you enjoyed this story, I have never read anything about him either and it was definitely a challenge to write about him. I'm glad that you liked that, I wanted to show that he was a thief from a young age and that he developed his skills since then. I'm glad that you liked that nickname, it was the only one I could think of that would fit in with the stealing.

Yep, Mundungus would steal anything that he could get his hands on. Oh wow! Look at us with similar headcanons! *highfive* I don't think he did either. I might have to write that, I'll see if any ideas come to me and then I'll let you know. :D

Whoops! Thanks for pointing those out, I shall go back and edit those. Thank you :D

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond to it.


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Review #4, by TheHeirOfSlytherin Mundungus Fletcher

16th March 2013:
So, I thought it was so amazing that you're reviewing my stories that I had to review yours.

Ooh, a Mundungus story. I've never read a Mundungus story, never even really thought about him as a character other than the guy who stole Regulus' locket and fled when Moody died. But this just stood out to me, I had to read. I love the backstory, how he became a thief and everything that led up to it. It was just too good to be true when he stopped for school and sure enough, he kisses his friend's girlfriend. It wasn't the type of stealing I expected, but it totally fit.

Great story, Tammi. I really enjoyed this. :)

Sam.

Author's Response: Aww yay! I'm so glad that you're readin my stories :D

I have never felt the urge to ever write a Mundungus story before but it was for a challenge and I knew it just had to be about his theiving.
I always imagined that he would have always been a thief and that it would have started at a young age.
I'm so glad that you enjoyed this, even if he did steal his friends girlfriend :D

Thank you for reading and reviewing Sam!! :D


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Review #5, by someone___1 Mundungus Fletcher

12th November 2012:
That was kind of cute! Bad Mundungus! Lol. But I liked the idea of him not just stealing material objects. Really puts a spin on what a thief is.

You did have one little grammar error that I caught. You put "he's" where have been "his"... I think. I kind of got too caught up in the story to remember a grammar mistake.

Author's Response: I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this, I'm terrible!
I'm really glad that you liked this story, I shall go back and change that "he's" :D thank you for pointing it out to me.
Thanks for reading and reviewing :D


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