So, I thought it was so amazing that you're reviewing my stories that I had to review yours.
Ooh, a Mundungus story. I've never read a Mundungus story, never even really thought about him as a character other than the guy who stole Regulus' locket and fled when Moody died. But this just stood out to me, I had to read. I love the backstory, how he became a thief and everything that led up to it. It was just too good to be true when he stopped for school and sure enough, he kisses his friend's girlfriend. It wasn't the type of stealing I expected, but it totally fit.
Great story, Tammi. I really enjoyed this. :)
Sam.Author's Response: Aww yay! I'm so glad that you're readin my stories :D
I have never felt the urge to ever write a Mundungus story before but it was for a challenge and I knew it just had to be about his theiving.
I always imagined that he would have always been a thief and that it would have started at a young age.
I'm so glad that you enjoyed this, even if he did steal his friends girlfriend :D
Thank you for reading and reviewing Sam!! :D Report Review
That was kind of cute! Bad Mundungus! Lol. But I liked the idea of him not just stealing material objects. Really puts a spin on what a thief is.
You did have one little grammar error that I caught. You put "he's" where have been "his"... I think. I kind of got too caught up in the story to remember a grammar mistake.Author's Response: I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this, I'm terrible!
I'm really glad that you liked this story, I shall go back and change that "he's" :D thank you for pointing it out to me.
Thanks for reading and reviewing :D Report Review
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