so sad! :'( But I love the chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you for your review,Ginny_Weasley_LOL.
I wrote this chapter remembering the funeral of my father-in-law. I'm getting into the habit of writing fanfiction. I wish you'll enjoy other chapters. Report Review
Um... I thought the Peverells were distinct in the male line? Whatever. I liked Ignotus Peverell though...Author's Response: Thank you again for your comment . I set up a little gimmick. If you read through to the end , you'll find it. I wish you' ll enjoy the story. Report Review
WHAT?!?! Hermione came to Canada without coming to Toronto?!?! WHY DID SHE GO TO HALIFAX AND NOT TORONTO?!?! OMG I just missed the chance of meeting Hermione Jean Granger! I feel like hitting my head on the wall like Dobby. Just kidding. GREAT STORY!Author's Response: Tronto, yes, that was one of my choice when I was writing this but finally I chose Halifax which was one of the biggest navel base port in the world. Maybe the movie 'Titanic' gave me much influence.
Anyway, Frizzy Haired HP Freak,thank you for your comment. I'll describe Hermione more in "Harry Potter and the Daughter of Druid". Report Review
I WANT MORE ITS REALLY GOOD!Author's Response: Thank you KT for your review!
While I updated this story banner I deleted Chapter1 and Chapter2 thoughtlessly. I 'm really sorry for deleting some reviews before February 12,2013.
I recontributed Chapter1 again. Chapter2 "Funeral and Reconstruction" will be soon validated. After that I will recontribute next Novella "Harry Potter and a Daughter of Druid" that is a sequel to "Harry Potter and the First Mission". Thank you! Report Review
Love it xx more please :DAuthor's Response: I'm trying to set another story about Harry's second mission. Please come back to read.Thank you, Dani. Report Review
OMR ! Really enjoying reading this xx Hope you write some more xxAuthor's Response: Thank you again, Dani . I'm writing chapter12 now. Thank you for your encouragement! Report Review
Great job, as always! I like how you kept the tension high between Harry/Ron and Draco. Hermione seems to hav eaccepted him, which I guess is her choice. Keep up the good work!
10/10Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging words! In my story Hermione is trying to be a liaison between Muggle-born and Pure bloods as the same as a liaison between house-elves and wizards. Report Review
This chapter is probably one of your best so far! You've got a way of keeping me interested..I think a little more Harry/Ginny romance would do you well, but hey, it's your story. Nice work!
10/10Author's Response: Thank you again, hpffisawesome for your honest review! Many good authors wrote about Harry Ginny Romance, so I feel like awkward to describe about it, but I'll try in the recent future. Report Review
Great chapter! Looks like we're starting to get somewhere. Just a couple errors I spotted:
"Your girlfriend is the most cleverest girl in Hogwarts, Said Anthony --- "most cleverest" is a double positive. Remove "most" to correct it.
No, thank you. We are on duties, said Harry. --- "duties" should be duty. Just doesn't sound right your way.
There are probably a few more, but I just wanted to list a couple. Keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thank you again, hpffisawesome! I missed to check sentences you spotted. I'll rewrite those parts, it will take more days to be updated though. Report Review
Another great chapter! Keep up the good work! Feels like you are still trying to set the setting...I'm interested to see where you take it.
10/10Author's Response: I like the image of Harry at work in Auror Headquarters. I wish J.K. Rowling would write details about Harry's career. Thank you for your words of encouragement! Report Review
Great chapter! "Harry felt like a gleam of light in the distance turned into bright sunshine," ; that's my favorite quote yet. Very creative.
10/10Author's Response: I love modest Harry, his awkwardness. I would like to describe his character like that. His magic is very powerful , but he always behave discreetly, I think. Report Review
you need an editor.most of your sentences don' t make any sense!Author's Response: Thank you for your comments, grammargrandma. I reckon you seem to be good at grammar. I'm not a native speaker , so sometimes my compositions may be based on my own language. Please give me examples you couldn't understand next time, if you have extra times. Anyway, thank you for your comments. Report Review
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