Reading Reviews for Daughter of Earth
  
21 Reviews Found

Review #1, by RoseWeasley7 Friendships Forged.

17th June 2013:
Great story please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! And I'll try :) x

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Review #2, by WolfPatronus Friendships Forged.

16th June 2013:
oooh cliffie! Don't leave us hanging for too long ;) xx

Author's Response: I'll sure try! Thanks for reviewing! ;) xx

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Review #3, by WolfPatronus Secrets Revealed

16th June 2013:
I love the concept of the earth magic, and this story is seriously developing well, great so far xxx

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wasn't sure what the response for the elemental magic would be and it was great that the response was all positive so far :)) xx

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Review #4, by PatronusWolf  Life as we know it.

16th June 2013:
This is great! I love this, it's so awesome :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I'm glad you liked it xx

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Review #5, by LilyLou Friendships Forged.

10th June 2013:
Wow. I think this story is definitely going to be worth following throughout the writing process. Its absolutely amazing so far! I can tell that you do, in fact, love Scorpius. You portrayed his character sooo well, I think he's one of my favorites so far. So animated! Good cliffy, it makes me anxious for the next chapter! I want you to update soon! Please?! Oh, and I'm about halfway through chapter seven of The Life of Anni Powells!

Keep writing!

~ Janelle(:

Author's Response: YESSS!!! I got a review for this chapter and I'm just so so so happy >.< Im super duper glad that you liked it, since I really admire your work :D I was worried that people might not like Scorpius the way I wrote him, 'cause in a lot of fanfictions I read, he's portrayed as mysterious and brooding, really intense like his dad, but I never really saw him that way :)) I'm halfway through the fourth chapter, and it might be up soon but I make thee no promises ;) AAAH THE LIFE OF ANNI POWELLS IS SO AMAZING I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE! xoxo
asdfghjkl thanks so much for this review xx


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Review #6, by fan Secrets Revealed

23rd April 2013:
please get chapter three written because i cant wait to read more of your writing

Author's Response: It's nearly done! :D I'm really glad you liked it, hehe, hope you carry on reading :P x

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Review #7, by LilyLou Secrets Revealed

21st April 2013:
This is amazing. You are an amazing writer, and to see that you love my story 'The life of Anni Powells' so much makes me so happy. This story is truly amazing, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

Author's Response: EEEP! Thankssomuch! You are so amazing, I love your story to bits and just asdfghjkl thaaanks!! Chapter three will, hopefully, be up soon, so keep your fingers crossed ;) xx

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Review #8, by Hazel Bludger Secrets Revealed

7th April 2013:
Ally is interesting. I'm curious to get to know her.

Author's Response: I'm glad you find her interesting. More about her character and the way she deals with things, as well as her abandoning her reservations towards social contact will be revealed through out the story. I just hope you'll stick around long enough to get there! :D
BB xoxo


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Review #9, by Hazel Bludger  Life as we know it.

7th April 2013:
Um. I have a McGonagall complex. I am ridiculously jealous that she's being raised by her. Like...stupidly so. Haha. I like what you did here, I liked the back story. :) One thing I would say is to try and show me rather than tell me...does that make sense? Overall, good!

Author's Response: Hey, I have a Fred II fetish, you have a McGonagall complex, who am I to judge? ;) So you don't think the back story is too dramatic or anything? And yeah I get you, I should stop waffling and get down to what's actually happening without thoroughly explaining it first right? I'm super happy you liked it :D
BB xoxo


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Review #10, by RavenclawGirl11 Secrets Revealed

7th April 2013:
Another great chapter, please update soon x
~Macy x

Author's Response: Thanks!! I've nearly finished chapter 3, so I hope to see a review soon! ;) hehe. Your reviews really give me confidence in my story so thanks, Maybe you could check out Mistletoe and Extraordinary and tell me what you think? :D xx

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Review #11, by willow1 Secrets Revealed

4th April 2013:
please write more! this is amazing and it demands more!

Author's Response: Asdfghjkl thaaanks >. < I'm writing don't worry. I'm just stressed about exams ugh. I've started the third chapter and I have the next few chapters mapped out in my head :)) xx

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Review #12, by Candyfloss Unicorn  Life as we know it.

2nd April 2013:
This is a really good start; It makes me wanna read more :) Please update soon!

Author's Response: I'll try! ;) The second chapter is up now! :D

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Review #13, by RavenclawGirl11  Life as we know it.

24th March 2013:
Add a new chapter now. I do not like to be kept waiting.


Nahh jokes, I really like this story as It is U N I Q U E so add a chapter pwease? Xox
~Macy x

Author's Response: Haha, you scared me there for a sec! ;)
I'm working on it though! I'm already part-way through chapter 3, but my editor takes long, but she's supermegafoxyawesome so it's worth the wait. I'm really glad you like it, and I'm gonna try and get it up by the end of the week, I'll really try! ^.^
xx


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Review #14, by PorridgeWomanEndings14  Life as we know it.

2nd February 2013:
This was good, and I LOVE stories about Elementals. Spacing was really weird and hard to read, but from what I can tell you're off to a great start. Update soon!

Simone

Author's Response: Hey second chapter is up! Is the spacing still weird do you think? Thanks for taking the time to update :)) xx

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Review #15, by yerawizard27  Life as we know it.

26th January 2013:
This is a really good idea, and a wonderful start! Although maybe you could include some spaces every so often so it's a little easier to read? Either way, I loved it and added to my favourites :D

Author's Response: YAY FAVOURITES! And yeah, I know what you mean about the favourites :) I'll get onto it ASAP :)) Thanks so much for the review!
BBWotter :) xx


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Review #16, by R o s m e r t a  Life as we know it.

23rd January 2013:
Oooh, intrigue! I love your interesting twist with the elemental magic. I also like that you take the time to describe the setting and whatnot--that's something I never seem to have the patience for when I'm writing, and reading this just made me realize that I realy need to work on that, haha. Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: AWH! Thanks so much for this :) It's taking a while for me to get the story going, but I'm trying!! :D I'll update as soon as I can :D

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Review #17, by Mrs James Potter  Life as we know it.

23rd January 2013:
hey! i really enjoyed reading the beginning of your story! please keep on writhing, because im hook already hahah :D but please do keep on add to the story :) xoxoxo

Author's Response: Awh! Thank you! I'll keep on writing, omg you wrote writhing, hahahha, sorry okay yeah thanks :)) xx

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Review #18, by fizzingwizzbies  Life as we know it.

28th December 2012:
Really like the idea for this story!! Ally is great!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D I truly appreciate it!
BBWotter xoxo


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Review #19, by LittleLionGirl  Life as we know it.

19th December 2012:
Well dear. Good Job. All I have to say is there was no grade under DADA. Oh and I think the word you would rather have is comely or home like (Homely means ugly actually) But otherwise Lovely job and I hope to see more!
XOXOXO,
LLG

Author's Response: Oh my goodness thank you! This truly made my day, but unfortunately tragedy has struck! :( I wrote three more chapters for this and they all got deleted somehow so now I have to re-write them, which will unfortunately take me rather a long time, so don't expect anything new for a long time, and I'll go and change the mistakes right away.
Thanks again!
BBWotter xoxo


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Review #20, by Someone in your school! =)  Life as we know it.

18th November 2012:
omfg it ez soo kewl!!111one!!!111

No, but seriously it's good. The writing is very paced but the poetic nature makes it a tad sentimental.

From,

Author's Response: Okay, who is this? :P lol, siriusly :) Enkuku?
So I was thinking should it be done in third person or.? and I don't know where to go with this. Death Eater Rising or just typical teenage drama thing?
TELL ME WHO YOU ARE! hahah xoxo
danke for the review!


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Review #21, by Hannah  Life as we know it.

15th November 2012:
LOVE! Thank you for writing this. Seriously. Please don't ever stop.

Author's Response: AW!! This is AMAZING for a first review! I'm not planning on stopping, hehe. So you don't think it's too detailed or a little strange with the Elemental magic and all? This actually made my day! I was SO scared that my story was going to be a total failure so. Thank you! :D


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