What a disappointing end to a promising story. It seems as if the author just decided to abandon the story...and call it "complete" when it was anything but complete.

The story has a beginning, and part of a middle, but nothing resembling an end. I feel cheated, that I wasted time reading a story marked "complete". It's a shame, because the author was doing a good job until he or she simply gave up.

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really good story different but I like it cant wait for next story now :D

Author's Response: matthew
I am glad you like the story and I hope you continue to follow my work and review. I am currently working on the next story which is sort of a alternate universe beginning the summer before sixth year.

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I really like your writing style. Very promising start, I need to keep reading :)

Author's Response: JDH
Thank you for your review I hope you are enjoying the story and hope you continue to review and follow my work. I am working on a second story currently and hope to start posting soon.

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I will be looking for the new story.

Author's Response: harryhermron

thank you for reading my story, I hope you enjoyed it and hope you continue to read my work. I am currently working on a new one.

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Super!! Amazing!! Loved it!! Yea!! Can't wait to see your new story!! This is so sweet and such a good story!! Love it!!

Author's Response: Ginny_Weasley43

Thank you for reading and reviewing my story I am currently working on another which is a alternate universe sort of. I hope you continue to read my work and I hope you enjoy.

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Rfrymanjr,
I am sad that you have ended this story. But I am excited for your next. As a final chapter it was a bit soft. I can tell your head is already into the next story. What I did like is that Harry and Emma are finally bonding. So how soon will the next be up?
FoM

Author's Response: FoM

Thank you for all of your reviews through out this story and sticking with me. I do agree that the final chapter was weaker than I had hoped for and I may edited it some. Currently I am working on another story it is a little different and Alternate Universe slightly. Thank you for all you reviews and support.

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Rfrymanjr,
Wonderful chapter! I believe Hermione is correct (she usually is). The Bond won't allow harmful spells, I don't think it would have any effect on helpful ones, (drying, cleaning, dressing, or protection charms). But it's good for them to know. I had to chuckle, Harry's prolonged tickling of his sister, was just making up for lost time. Now for young Mr. Lestrange. If he were Riddle's son, which as Harry pointed out would be logistically difficult, I don't think he would name him Tom, a name he himself hated. I also wonder if any of his younger DE's (Bella, Rodolphus, Lucius, Goyle, or Crabbe),even knew his birth name? But I'm still wondering just who this little snake is? I look forward to the next chapters.
FoM

Author's Response: FoM

Thank you for your review as always it's very welcomed and appreciated. As of Mr. Lestrange we may find out soon, does he even know who his parents were/are?

Sorry its taken a while for the next chapter to be posted been extremely busy and haven't had much opportunity to write. Hopefully I have something completed by the end of this week to post.

As always thank you for taking the time to leave a review, I am glad your enjoying the story.

rfrymanjr

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Best post Hogwarts story I have read in a long time. There are a few typos but tbh who cares

Great work keep it up :)

Author's Response: Katie,

Thank you for the review I am glad you like my story and yeah I am prone to a few typos lol. I hope you continue to read and review as they are all appreciated.

Thanks
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This was very good. I think you should add in part of a chapter devoted to Emma bonding with Harry, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione. It could be individually or all together. But I think emma and Harry should get some time to talk some things over, (childhood, Harry's past 7 years , Emma in America etc.) they havnt been talking together a lot and i want to learn more about emma and maybe Ginny and Emma could also have some more time to talk alone. I like that in the beginning of the chapter how you did that. Please continue.

Author's Response: Ginny_Weasley43

Thank you for your review it is greatly appreciated. I promise there will be a chapter or two dedicated just to Emma's bonding with the others. I can't however promise it will be chapter 16, but possibly 17 or 18. Thank you for taking the time to write a review and for reading my story as all of the views and opinions of my readers help me shape the story.

Please continue to read and review and I hope you like the story.

Thanks for your support,
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Thought the whole thing was brill, will there be more? Ie the Wessing.

Author's Response: Tommie328

Thanks for your review there will be more I am working on chapter 16. I am glad u like it so far and hope u continue to read and leave reviews as they are greatly appreciated.

I am not sure what u meant by "Ie the wessing"?

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Rfrymanjr,
Well sometimes you need to "prime the pump" to get results. So this chapter should do it. I need to ask why did Harry greet Ginny and the rest of Gryffindor with a "Good Morning" when it was lunchtime? I liked Aberforths teaching advice. Harry is going to need it with the new first years. I must ask, as I'm sure at some point you'll tell us just who Tom Lestrange is? I shudder at the thought that Riddle and Bella procreated, eeeuwww!!! So I expect you to put fingers to keys and start the next chapter. Please!
FoM

Author's Response: FoM

In my haste I later realized that I have a few details that need editing and will fix them. Tom's secret and reason for such open hatred towards harry will become know in the next few chapters. I working on the next chapter and hope to have it uploaded soon. As always thanks for the review and for continuing to read my story and look forward to your future thoughts.

Thanks
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This is really good. I really like how made Harry have his sister Emma. There are a few things that confuse me though. Does Emma already know about Voldemort and what Harry has dealt with? I would like to see Emma and Harry bond more in the next chapters. I really like your story. Please continue.

Author's Response: Ginny Weasley43

Thank you for your review I am glad you like the story so far. As what Emma knows yeah I think it would be safe to assume she knows a version of the story. I do agree that she and Harry needs to bond more and hopefully I can figure a way out to accomplish that, if you have any ideas I would love to hear them. Thank you again for you review it is greatly appreciated and welcome.

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I am actually quite offended by how you portray Australia and Australians. First of all 'Sidney' is actually spelt 'Sydney'. Second, I have no idea where you got your so called "Australian slang" from because absolutely no one talks like that here. Seriously, we don't say 'yoos' or 'Sheila' or 'tucker' and I don't even know how you thought 'cook' means 'wife'. Third, even if there are people that talk like that, although I have never met one, I highly doubt that the leader of the ministry would talk that improperly. I also doubt that a respected auror would talk like that. If you had actually visited Australia, you would already know all of this and I wouldn't be sitting here writing this. Please stop generalising about Australians as I personally think it is racist and very generalistic.

Author's Response: Australian Citizen

Firstly I would like to apologized for having offended you. You are correct I have never been to Australia and have personally never met anyone from there. As for the generalization of the Australians that wasn't done purposely. The slang was received off a website and if you were willing I would welcome you to edit the chapter(s) in which offended you and perhaps that could be eliminated altogether. As always opinions and comments are welcomed and I hope we can work together and fix this issue.

Thank you for taking the time to bring this to my attention and I hope we can fix this and that you continue to read the story.

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Rfrymanjr,
There was so much, it's difficult to decide where to start. I was a bit surprised that there wasn't more involving Emma. We can't automatically assume she'd be a female Harry. I would have loved to see more of her reactions to her trip, the arrival at Hogwarts, did she see the Thestrals? How was the reaction to her? I am speechless with the announcement of Augusta's death, (she had after all fought off a group of DE's before the battle), and Neville and Luna's engagement. You really are going AU.
I loved the humour that Minerva interjected. And the addition of Aberforth as the DADA Professor is a good one. This aught to be a very interesting year. I look forward to both your edit and the next chapter.
FoM

Author's Response:
FOM
Thanks for your review and after I reread the chapter I agree I think Emma needs to be involved more as it is her first time seeing Hogwarts, as for the Thestrals she wouldn't be able to see them as she hasn't seen no one die. I think I was kind of rushing and not paying attention when I made Augusta die and I think I want to change that part for sure. I was racking my brain for who would be the DADA Professor and after awhile the only person I picture that would take the position would be Aberforth. I am working on the edited version hopefully it will be finished soon.

Thanks again for your review and look forward to reading more of them. Thanks for following along with my story thus far.

rfrymanjr

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good one!!please continue

Author's Response: Tanya,

Thank you for your review it is greatly appreciated. I am glad u enjoyed story so far.

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You threw in surprise. I had wonder if Harry
had a sibling. Good reading. Enjoying the reading.

Author's Response: harryhermron

Thank you for the review. Hope you liked the surprise, and I am glad you enjoy the reading so far. Once again thanks for the review hope to see more.

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Rfrymanjr,
Outstanding! It did bring up a couple more questions. How is it that Emma knew Remus, yet wasn't alotted funds for school and other needs? There had to be a way for James and Lily to have funds in place for her, even anonymously. How long did Emma know Remus? I guess there is a third question. Why was the Owl salesperson acting strangely? Things to ponder.
The rest was great. At last you have given us the answer to the mysterious locket. Very Interesting! Now we also know why it affected Harry so. I do question you having Professor McGonagall addressing the group, as "you lot". I know that is an informal English slang term. However I can't see the new Headmistress using it.
Hurry with the next.
FoM

Author's Response: FoM
I haven't exactly planned out how much Remus actually interacted with Emma and I believe that they would have with held the funds due to them placing her in an orphanage. If it was known that she had a large amount of gold in a bank it could have caused her to have been adopted by horrible people or the administration at the orphanage could have misused her wealth for their own advantages. Even if the money was put aside for her anonymously she could have been used or manipulated for the gold. I felt that by having the goblins know of this and having already split the gold prior to Harry knowing was a good solution for this. I know it sucks that Emma also grew up with out a lot of things just as Harry did but I feel this just gives them something else in common and another thing they can use as a foundation for their bonding.

As for the Owl salesperson I don't believe there is anything that is terribly strange. I was just trying to portray him with owl like characteristics as he has most likely been selling owls since before Harry's birth.

I will also look through this chapter and do some editing, thanks for your advice with McGonagall I will edit that part for sure.

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Rfrymanjr,
I really enjoyed most aspects of this chapter. You gave a hint as to magic attached to the ring. My question is three parts. First, I'm assuming Harry had access to his parents estate. Why didn't he use his mothers ring? Next, why didn't the witch who sold him the ring mention anything? Last, when will Harry and Ginny understand the connection?
As much as I enjoy your story, I now have to look at it as AU. I would like nothing better than Harry to discover some blood family. A sibling would've been wonderful, but totally impossible, especially a twin.
I look forward to what you come up with next.
FoM

Author's Response: FoM
Thanks for the review once again I appreciate that you took the time to write one. I felt Harry's mother and father being so much in love would have been buried with their rings on and that Harry and Ginny would find magic in their own set of rings. There may be some magic in the ring Harry chose. Perhaps the witch who sold the ring didn't know much about the ring herself. I am going to go back over this chapter again and perhaps edit it some. As for Harry and Ginny's connection I believe it will become more clear as they are pressed into different directions perhaps with school or maybe their careers afterwards. I hope that me adding that Harry had a twin in this story doesn't prevent you from continuing to follow along. I have always thought Harry had to have some sort of family out there that he would/could be close with other that the Dursleys. I really appreciate your input and look forward to more of them.

Rfrymanjr

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INE SENTENCE LINE 3 THE WORD BODIES SEESM TO BE USED A LITTLE TOO MANY TIMES, THINK OF MAYBE REWORDING ONE OR TAKING OUT A PHRASE. IN SENTECE LINE 10 INSTEAD OF CLAMBERED IT SHOULD BE STUMBLED. AND IN LINE 19 INSTEAD OF GROGGILY WHICH ISNT A WORD IT SHOULD BE DISORIENTED AND THEN A COMMA.

Author's Response: HollyG

Thanks for the review I will look into the grammatical issues that you have pointed out. I hope u enjoyed the story so far and looking forward to future reviews.

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love this story! i wonder what happens next?

Author's Response: 808born

I am glad you like the story. Thank you for the review it is appreciated. The next chapter is coming soon and contains some surprizes.

rfrymanjr

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love the stories so far! keep it coming!

Author's Response: Hawaiian808

Thanks for the review it is appreciated. I am glad you like the story so far.

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I am liking your story. It is a usual story. I like
unusual stories. you keep me on the edge of my chair. I am looking forward to the next chapter. You got me curious about the metal necklace and why are the Death eaters so strong.

Author's Response:
harryhermron,

Thank you for your review they are greatly appreciated and welcomed. I am glad you like the story. I little more will be revealed in the next few chapters about the locket and Death Eaters strength. I also have another twist or two I am debating rather or not to include.

Once again thank you and I hope you continue to read and leave reviews.

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Rfrymanjr,
What a chapter! The chat with Draco was very interesting. Unfortunately he wasn't able to shed any light on just what was so special about the locket. I have to say I felt the Healer trying to stop Harry from seeing Draco, struck me as being a bit dodgy. That Harry and the rest were attacked so soon after leaving the hospital leads me to suspect him all the more. I do ask that you allow Kreacher to be healed. I don't think Harry could stand another death, also Kreacher was just beginning to enjoy his life with Harry. How cruel to take that away? It does sound like the DE's do have another weapon. Could it be that they are using Muggle explosives, or they found some old unused spells? Whatever it is I beg you don't make us wait too long for the next.
FoM

Author's Response:
FoM
I am glad you lik this chapter, but I have edited it and chapter Ten and I am still waiting for them to update. Hope you get a chance to reread them and let me know what you think. I am currently working on chapter twelve and should have it posted soon, it's been a little delayed with the revision of chapters ten and eleven. There may be a plot with the healer or he may just be a healer that takes his job very serious. As for Kreacher I have an idea with what I want to happen but we'll have to see how it goes. There could be a weapon of some sort or possible just another extremely powerful witch or wizard that has rallied the death eaters. we'll see. I can tell you that they are not using muggle explosives, for they are purebloods and wouldn't consider using anything muggle.

Once again I enjoy your review and look forward to more, thank you for following along with me so far.

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Rfrymanjr,
That was an exciting, as well as a disturbing chapter. The locket sounded similiar to the Slytherin Locket that housed Riddles soul. It certainly had magic within. I have an idea why Draco was there. It certainly wasn't to help his father. He did step in front of Ginny, willing to take an AK. Perhaps he thought/knew the locket would protect him Still he took a chance. That certainly isn't the Draco we know and distrust. I do have other theories, but I'll stay mum for a while. I do hope you have the next chapter ready to go. I can't wait to see what Draco has to say.
FoM
PS The Dementors Kiss is something no one should be subjected to! Lucius need to be put away, not to become a empty human figure.

Author's Response:
FoM

Thank you for your review it was great appreciated. I was rereading this as I have been working on chapter 11 and I am planning on some editing to this chapter. As to Lucius I have always pictured him as a man with so much hate and no soul anyhow, I feel that the only difference in him will be the fact that he is mentally unable to cause havoc in the magical community and less likely that other Death Eaters would attempt to rescue him from Azkaban. As for Draco we'll have to wait and see. The locket does hold some magic but not in the same sense at the Riddle's locket.

Once again thanks for the review and please keep them coming.
rfrymanjr

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Nice xx I'm loving the way this is going !!! Next chapter please :D

Author's Response: Dani,

Thank you for review and support I am glad you like the story so far I am working on Chapter 10 and hopefully have it finished soon.

Fryman

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