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Review #1, by Solana Year One, Part Two: Everything Will be Alright

16th May 2013:
Aww, come on! Don't have Rose just obeying her parents without question when it comes to friends! Eleven is young but she's not little, either! How much more interesting if you have her using her own judgment. That's part of growing up. Otherwise, I love your story!

Author's Response: Solana,

I'm sorry that I dissapointed you with Rose's submission to her parents, but it wasn't like she never questioned it. She qaurelled with her father, and if I recall correctly, she stood up for her best friend before being shut down by Ronald snarling at her. When her father said that Scorpius deserved the bullying, I feel that Rose might've taken that as a slap to the face. Shocked and speechless.

And eleven. That's the thing. She is young. She is innocent. I agree, she isn't a baby, but she is naive. They don't live in war and darkness like her parents. They weren't born to fight. In my story, Rose isn't fiery and vicious...she keeps things inside and in the end the frustration eventually comes out. She isn't hot-headed and rash. Stubborn, yes, but rash no. She does make her own judgements, I promise you, Rose isn't a doormat.

Don't worry, I'm not making her submit to her parents. Her and Scorp eventually make up. They WILL become friends, despite everything, but this is their first trial. Their first obstacle course.

I thank you for reading, and hopefully I might see you again for the next chapter...


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Review #2, by fizzingwizzbies Year One, Part One: It Just Takes Some Time...

11th March 2013:
Aw love this story so far, loving the not so typical Rose/Scor romance. I really like how Scorpius isn't some cocky, arrogant popular kid as he is so often portrayed. Can't wait for the next chapter! Yay

Author's Response: fizzingwizzbies,

Hello there, lovely! I'm glad that so far you've enjoyed this story, and I feel terrible that I haven't updated enough for you to read. And the usual Scrose shipment...I had to agree, it was time for something different. And cocky Scorpius. I don't envision him cocky. I don't think 19 years would've healed the bitterness of the Wizarding world towards his famil--considering the amount of damage both his grandfather, Lucius, and Draco had done, therefore in my eyes, I've always envisioned Scorpius as an outcast. Sort of looked down upon. Now don't get me wrong, snarky Scorpius is good too!

And I will update. I promise. I know I haven't updated in a while, but the story will go on! Just give me a little more time, I'll get there. :)

PhoenixPulse


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Review #3, by Jasmine Year One, Part One: It Just Takes Some Time...

11th March 2013:
This brilliant! I am getting so bored of th love/hate relationship, and feel that a popular 'heartbreaker' Scorpius is quite unrealistic considering his parents backgrounds! This has quite a realistic start - well done! I love Rose's insecurities as well, gives her more depth! Love it!

Author's Response: Jasmine,

Hello there, I'm so glad that you found this as a refreshing piece of ScRose, in comparison to many others out there. I could totally relate to the usuall perception of Scorpius, he appears too snarky, to popular, when in reality his family was one of the most hated families in the Wizarding world. I don't think 19 years would've been enough time to erase the cold hearted bitterness between their worlds. And Rose needed some insecurities as well. I'm glad that you found her character had depth.

Thank you for the lovely review!

PhoenixPulse


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Review #4, by AriesGirl40 Year One, Part One: It Just Takes Some Time...

12th November 2012:
Much more realistic than other first chapters I'v read about Rose and Scorpius. The closest till now, they grew up together as friends then their horemoans kick in and they suddenly realize their in love. So far, I like this beginning alot. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here.
We'll settle back and get cozey for the winter, just writing and reading, well... maybe a little school work should be involved too.
see you next chapter :)

Author's Response: AriesGirl40,

Well, heller there! I'm glad you found this realistic in comparison to other Rose/Scorpius fics. I wanted to try a different spin to the usual cliched story, so hopefully my experimenting will turn out okay.

And I really do need to update, but right now I've been so busy with school! Next week though, I will post up chapters 2 and (hopefully) 3. I've changed my mind about the story being 14 chapters, do to the fact it will have gaping holes in it, but I don't exactly plan for it to drag out.

Can't wait to see you around, and thank you for reviewing.


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