I decided not to leave a review on every chapter before I caught up so here is a sort of uber-review.
I'm really liking the story so far, the characterisation is good and its nice to see Robards in a different setting. I think you have each character doing the right things and the atmosphere of the whole story is very nice. Look forward to reading more!Author's Response: I don't blame you, that's a lot of reviews haha.
Thanks for the compliments, it's difficult to get it all right I have to say, but I'm enjoying writing it so far :') Report Review
This chapter was much better than the last, really liked it. Nasty chilling moment at the end too (nasty in a good way obv). Super jobAuthor's Response: It was chilling, wasn't it? I'm a big fan or foreshadowing. Report Review
Finally got round to reading your other story. Enjoying it so far, good job Report Review
Wow... I look forward to your updates... I like that this story is about the Marauders from the first year itself, instead of just concentrating on the Lily-James romance in seventh year... Wonderful!Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it!
There's a lot more to the Marauders story than just James and Lily, and I wanted to explore all of it. It's great fun to write as well :) Report Review
Wow. That was really good! i can't wait to read your next chapter!! :)
10/10Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, hope you come back! Report Review
I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: I just finished writing it today, so I'll probably put up another Knights chapter first, that way I can proof read chapter two. Glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
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