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Review #1, by LadyL8 Til Death Do Us Part

8th July 2014:
Hello There.

I was reviewing for the House Cup, when I saw your story. I loved the banner and summary, so I knew I had to read it. And I'm glad I did. This was so heartbreaking, and I felt so sorry for Addy.

I liked the little dialog between Fred and Addy before the Battle begins, where he tries to say goodbye and she doesn't want to think that it could be goodbye. The dialog was so real and believable, and you managed to create a good relationship that readers (or at least me) can believe in, feel and cheer for. And that's really important, since you obviously wants the readers to feel sorry for and maybe even relate to Addy. And you did that.

Your description is flawless. I could see the Battle in my head - see Addy's face when she realized Fred was dead. And it was so heartbreaking. But I'm seriously jealous of your talent when it comes to description. I really wish I was that good at creating images.

So to sum up, I really loved it!

- Lotte

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