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Review #1, by Marauder_Weasley The Telling

13th December 2012:
great story update soon

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Review #2, by BKL8008 The Secret

8th November 2012:
Nice touche with Hugo, but I am bit disappointed to see that it looks like the 'cousins' aren't going to like this.
I do like the idea of Scorpius as a nice kid. It can't have been easy for him at first, with so much to overcome.
Again, you're a bit rushed. Slow down and bit and savor a few details. No one will mind!
Note about spacing: each time you hit ENTER, this site (HPFF) will add a double break. It may make your copy hard to read at home, but...hit ENTER only once and it will come out nicely here.
Again, good story idea and I look forward to seeing how you resolve it all.

Author's Response: Thank you for your feed back


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Review #3, by BKL8008 The Confession

8th November 2012:
I always enjoy reading about this idea, and what will happen with both dads find out. Of course, the cousins would all be in uproar - or would they? By this time, I'm sure there's enough unwritten backstory on Scorpius for them to decide. I note that Albus is his friend, so it makes me wonder if it will be that bad.
2 critiques - it reads a bit rushed. Don't be afraid to add more to it.
Next - how did a Ravenclaw First year get to Hogsmeade, unless he/she lives there and had to go home for an emergency? You have to be 3rd year, I believe.

Author's Response: Now that Voldy has gone Moldy
Everyone gets to have fun


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Review #4, by Arianna1018 The Secret

8th November 2012:
If you give 5 reviews i will post the next story

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Review #5, by Lavender nwayn The Secret

6th November 2012:
Good job I officially loved it

Author's Response: thank you so much

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