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Review #1, by MissMdsty

6th November 2012:

And the plot is starting to take shape. I really like how you take your time to develop everything and you don't rush your characters into anything.

I've noticed a few type-os here and there but nothing so drastic that it makes the story hard to read.

Is this your first story?

See you next chapter!

XoXo

Author's Response: Hi again! :)

Yes, the next chapter is more informative, and shows where the plot is going. Is it that obvious that this is my first story? ;d It probably is. Ah, well, I'll improve with time. I'll go back and fix the typos I see, I'm sorry there are there at all but at least they don't make it hard.

Thank you for reviewing again!

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Review #2, by MissMdsty

I'll always be there

6th November 2012:

Hello!

I liked the first chapter. It is a good, strong beginning, showing us a bit of the relationship between Anna and her family and Anna and her school mates.

I also really like how you did not rush into giving us all the details on Anna but rather let us discover it step by step!

I'm off to read the second chapter now!

Author's Response: Hi! I'm so glad you like it. I do want to show more of my character's backstory before I start anything else. It might be a bit tedious but that's how I like to do things - I'm glad you like it. I'm so glad, and thank you for the review ;*!

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