This story is amazing but please update soon.I've been waiting for ages!.Author's Response: I'm so caught up in work at the minute, exams are looming and I have to redo coursework! So bad. But I'm busy writing now, so expect to see an update soon. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
cant wait for the next chapterAuthor's Response: Glad you're enjoying it Report Review
Very much worth the wait! Love this story - and your last one
Update ASAP! :)Author's Response: Really glad you're enjoying it! I will do, but I'll probably update my other one first, the War Generation. Report Review
Nice little chapter and don't worry about the length of time it took to update, you are far more prompt than I am. I feel your deadline pain!Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
Deadlines are horrible! Fortunately, I've only got to finish my second draft for language and I'm all done for the year. Report Review
Nice chapter, I was really surprised about Draco going to Dudley for help. And we all understand about not having the time to update, or chapters being deleted. Trust me, it took me two months to finally update my story. Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next chapter!Author's Response: That was the idea, I'm glad it shocked you ;) Chapters being deleted really is the worst thing ever. Hope you keep reading and reviewing. Report Review
Love it! I really enjoyed the car chase.Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm glad! Surprised by the reaction to it in all honesty, I thought some people might hate it! Report Review
I loved Harry playing with Teddy, along with the Muggle car chase! Fantastic! I thought the part with Harry explaining to Teddy about Remus and Tonks was heart warming, can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Have to say I was worried about how the car chase would go down, but it seems to have been pretty well received, which I'm glad about. Pleased you enjoyed the parts with Harry and Teddy, I felt like I had to establish Teddy and Harry as an important part of one another's lives, as well as giving Harry that all important Dad experience.
Thanks for the review, and keep reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
I don't usually review until I complete the story however, you have another good one going here and I am totally into it.
I also wanted to say sorry about your grandmother, I am starting to realize just how short life really is, I am 66.
RiverAuthor's Response: Glad your enjoying it, thanks for the review and your condolences. Life is short, but we have to do all we can to make the most of it, and remember, To the well organised mind, death is but the next great adventure :) Report Review
Well I have to say I never thought I'd read about a car chase in a HP fan fic. I'm pleased Harry hates VW Beetles - nasty ugly horrid cars that they are. Really good chapter again, looking forward to more as alwaysAuthor's Response: They truly are hateful aren't they?
I've always wanted to write a car chase, and I thoroughly enjoyed writing it. Glad you liked it, and keep an eye out for more :) Report Review
So good to see a new chapter, its been a wee while. Enjoyed reading it and look forward to the next one. Hope you had a Happy Christmas!Author's Response: I know, it's been ages! Next chapter's already written so it'll be up as soon as the current chapter of War Generation is validated. Report Review
i love your stories cant wait for this one to be finished
:DAuthor's Response: Glad you like them, and nice to see a review :) this chapters taking forever to put up, but I'm almost done, so look out for it in the next few days. Report Review
Another great chapter, hope you update soon!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again!
P.S, in the last reply I meant through not few haha Report Review
Hey, had a bit of a break from HPFF to deal with a number of pesky deadlines, but am back now. Really liked the chapter, especially Hermoine's commando style escape. Only criticism is that there are a few formatting issues about, missing line breaks and that sort of thing. Its quite small and I know from my own stories that these things can just pop up when you copy/paste the story in.
I look forward to reading on!Author's Response: Ah, Deadlines, the bane of our lives!
I'm glad you liked Hermione's escape, I was worried it might be a little far fetched.
I'll do a read few soon and change the bits I've missed, thanks for pointing them out! Report Review
Hello its me, your favourite critic(/fan)! Really lost for words-the story so far is absolutely brilliant; desperately waiting for the next chapter! Really love the way you write and how you've taken the story so far-love the villain. I really think you should write at least a trilogy-(maybe even send a copy to j.k.Rowling-get her thinking about writing some more books.) So long for now and cheers againAuthor's Response: I love a critic, and I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, it's been really really fun to write as well, so a win win situation-Butterbeers and chocolate frogs all round
I plan to do a trilogy, so I'm glad you suggested it. As for sending the copies to Queen J.K, well maybe, if she wrote more books because of it I think that makes me King Potterhead, right? Haha.
Thanks for reviewing, and again I'm pleased you like it, and really glad you came back after you were a little disappointed with the last ending-I promise I'll make it up to you! Report Review
Wow, great chapter! Really enjoyed it, things starting to hot up hereAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it, and I hope you enjoy the new villain, because I'm loving writing him :') Report Review
I really love your story so far. I can't wait for the next chapters. Thank you :)Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Good work as always. Keep it up!Author's Response: Thanks, I will do! :) Report Review
Hello its me, Nathan.again!! no criticisms this time just to say thanks so much for writing TWO new stories! Heven't yet read the story about the marauders but this one is absolutely brilliant!!! loving all of it and im sure the rest will be just as good as the first few chapters! still can't get over how you've managed to capture the characters so well unlike other fanfiction stories that I've read and how you come up with such good storylines and how you don't contradict the books but actually fit into them! thanks againAuthor's Response: I couldn't forgive myself if I got the characters wrong, or messed up canon.
Glad you're enjoying the story, your words mean a lot, and I have a sneaky feeling you're going to enjoy what I've got planned ;)
Hope you find the time to read the Marauders story, and I hope you keep reviewing too :) Report Review
I'm really interested in the way the story is going right now, I can't wait for now! I'll be looking for the next chapter!Author's Response: It picks up pretty quickly, hope you keep reading and enjoy what you see! Keep reviewing, I appreciate it so much. Report Review
Nice chapter, can't wait for the story to really get goingAuthor's Response: I hope you like it when it does-trust me, it's not long. Report Review
I thought I'd have to wait a few more weeks before you started the next story! Good start, though there are a few formatting issues here and there. Can't wait to see how the story pans out!Author's Response: Ah, I couldn't stay away! I started it a while ago to tell you the truth, as soon as I finished Forgotten Enemy, but there isn't that much done since I kept changing the first one.
I'll have a read through and check for mistakes, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I love the story already:)Author's Response: I'm glad-trust me, it's going to be faster, more action packed, more mysterious and twisting than the last. I hope you enjoy it! Report Review
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