Reading Reviews for Fate's Path
  
67 Reviews Found

Review #1, by AppreciativeReader Turning Twenty-One

19th June 2013:
WOW. Lots of happening in this chapter. Poor Hermione, wonder what is in store for her.

The chapter was worth all the wait.

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Review #2, by LOVING THISS Turning Twenty-One

16th June 2013:
I WAS UNAWARE THAT THERE WAS ANOTHER CHAPTER BEFORE I REVIEWED, BUT HONESTLY THIS IS SO INTERESTING. LOVING THE DRAMIONE ACTION! DON'T EVER STOP.

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Review #3, by OH MY GOD THIS IS AMAZING The Day Before

16th June 2013:
I LOVE THIS. DON'T END IT. EVER.

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Review #4, by young_lana_witch Turning Twenty-One

16th June 2013:
AWESOME! can't wait to read the next chapter it should be really interesting!

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Review #5, by MissesWeasley123 Turning Twenty-One

11th June 2013:
Yaaay! It happened! I noticed one mistake, and that was when Harry goes to look for his "girlfriend", but then later you say Ginny starts dancing with her "husband".
Cannot wait for the next chapter!

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Review #6, by HermioneSpencer (not logged in) Turning Twenty-One

7th June 2013:
This story has just got SO much better! Thank you!

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Review #7, by jmv555 Turning Twenty-One

4th June 2013:
AH DRAMIONE LOVE! Just your style of writing kept me on the edge of my seat:)

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Review #8, by SlightObsession Turning Twenty-One

4th June 2013:
nawww'' Dramione action! Woo! This is a really good chapter :3 Cant wait for the next one!

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Review #9, by MadiMalfoy Turning Twenty-One

3rd June 2013:
Well that was unexpected, to say the least! I was rather excited to see what would go down at her party and it didn't fail to impress me. Just a few grammar/spelling errors here and there that can be fixed with a quick proofreading. A lot of stuff happened in this chapter, but it was very good! Great job with it, anticipating the next one! :) xx

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Review #10, by amartin0507 The Day Before

22nd May 2013:
I really like this story... I keeps showing up as updated but there is no new chapter.

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Review #11, by tia Andrew Russo

22nd May 2013:
Ding dong, the witch is gone!

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Review #12, by hpfan22 The Day Before

19th May 2013:
I can't wait any more!!1! Please hurry up with the next one

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Review #13, by obliviate14 The Day Before

29th April 2013:
This is going well. Can u pls post the next chapter, I'm really
intrigued to know what will happen!

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Review #14, by MadiMalfoy The Day Before

24th April 2013:
Even though I'm just now getting into this, this is very well-written so far, even if you say you had troubles with this chapter. :) This is definitely a different take than usual--but I like it! I like how you even kept up with Emma Watson's physical appearance--it makes it that much more interesting! I'm excited to see how the birthday bash goes down and what will happen with Draco/Andrew and Hermione and that potential discord. Great job! :) xx

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Review #15, by AppreciativeReader The Day Before

23rd April 2013:
You have to update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Oops!!! can't wait to read ... :) :)

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Review #16, by Paula Welcome Back

26th March 2013:
I'm enjoying this so far!

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Review #17, by Donnie Giovanni's

26th March 2013:
Draco seems so cocky ;)

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Review #18, by Paula The Day Before

26th March 2013:
I'm starting to hate Astoria more and more.

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Review #19, by A Fan Welcome Back

10th March 2013:
this was a great chapter

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Review #20, by Mel The Day Before

9th March 2013:
This was so good! I've been waiting for another chapter! Ugh who is dracos date?!

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Review #21, by young_lana_witch The Day Before

7th March 2013:
Interesting first 7 chapters :) I like how you are not making them fall in love at once. This is great so far and I hope to read more soon!

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Review #22, by I.M.Noone The Day Before

6th March 2013:
This is really good! Please keep writing! :) xx

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Review #23, by Jeanie The Day Before

5th March 2013:
I'm really enjoying this story so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

You're a fantastic writer! Keep up all the great work!

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Review #24, by megthechef43 Welcome Back

21st February 2013:
Lumos Nox,

I'm here with your review finally. I'm ashamed with myself for the length of time you had to wait for it. By here it is finally.

I love that you used the current Emma Watson to model the Hermione in your story. I think Emma looks absolutely beautiful with a pixie cut. She is one of the few people in the world that can pull it off.

I truly wish to slap the crap out of Ron for the way has been acting in this chapter. Though I believe that is what you were shooting for. :) I can't believe he would cheat on Hermione but he was always the selfish one in the books and cheating on Hermione is very very selfish.

I really like the little intro into Astoria and Draco's relationship. the way you discribed Astoria's outfit is how I always think of purebloods. Dress to Impress. I hope to see more on Draco's feelings about his relationship. Is he happy with her, is he just staying with her because it is easier than breaking up. He said she would only make it worse but I wish there was a little more elaboration on this statement.

Great Job on this first chapter!!!

Megthechef43 aka Meg

Author's Response: Hello Meg! Haha it's okay about the wait, I don't really mind.

Yes! Emma Watson looked absolutely gorgeous with her pixie cut, she definitely rocked it!

Please don't hate Ronald! He's my favourite Weasley, and though he's kind of the bad guy in the story, I still love him. And eventually we do learn more about Astoria and Draco's relationship.

Thanks for revewing Meg! xo


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Review #25, by granger_ Andrew Russo

10th February 2013:
Haha loved this chapter update
soon please :D x

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