god this is so sad but it a great storyAuthor's Response: Thanks, I try to have enough emotion in it and I guess I was successful! :D Report Review
When will you write the next chapter?!?!Author's Response: Very soon ;) Report Review
Just finished the next chapter! You probably will hate me for saying this, but I think maybe you should make the chapters a little longer! Readers like reading stories that have at least 1000 words! Also, I'm not sure about other people, but I normally click on a story that has a banner! If you request a banner at The Dark Arts, more people will read your story!
I'm sorry and you probably hate me now! Whenever somebody says something like that on a review, I feel a bit annoyed! But anyway, Update Soon!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Yes, I am trying to work on the length, thanks for the feedback! And I was thinking about getting a banner, now I think I will! :) Don't worry about it, I love getting suggestions, so thank you! I will update soon. :D Report Review
Wow! Very intense, but I like it! I wonder why Draco killed Luna? Maybe he thought she was somebody else? I doubt it though! It might have been for work? But that makes no sense! Anyway, I'll just go read the next chapter, shall I!
WildCatAuthor's Response: Mwah ha ha, I guess you'll have to wait and see! >:) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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