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Review #1, by Julia X

15th May 2013:
Awesome story... I'm guessing it's Malfoy's Gryffindor brother.

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Review #2, by smrw X

14th May 2013:
I unexpectedly fell for your story. I was looking for some light reading to get my head out of exams for a few hours. Came on HPFF to read about my new addiction (ScoRose). Came across your fanfiction. Is it mean of me to say that when I read your story description, I had already decided that I wouldn't like it? I started reading other fanfictions before coming back to yours (in search for something different). I started chapter 1, so sure that I would dislike it, and I ended up reading the whole story in one go. Now, I really need to go back to studying (unfortunately) but I can assure you that you'll see me around as soon as Uni get out of the way.

I don't know how to define your story except by saying it is unexpected, different, addictive. I like Rose's character, which is strange since I normaly don't like that type of characters. She is so intriguing. The more I get to know how she thinks, the more I want to know about her. I also like most of the supporting characters (I don't know how to call them otherwise), especially Lily, Albus, Dom, Louis (though we haven't seen him that much), Will, Pr Zabini and so many more.

Scorpius? I don't know yet. I'm still a little wary around his character. I absolutely like Rose but, him, I'm not sure yet. And, from the moment the character of Faye was mentioned, I knew she would bring angst/drama so I don't want to give my impressions yet about these two. Your story made me learn that I shouldn't be fooled by what meets the eye.

Finally, the last intriguing character for me is...Bethan March. That sounds stupid, right? There are so many characters with secrets/things I would want to know more about (James, Pollux, the Malfoys in general, the Granger-Weasleys...) and I choose her! Maybe I'm seeing too much into it but I wonder why she changed her attitude towards Rose from hostile to distant.

Well, there are so many things I want to comment about and I somehow want to compensate since I know I won't be able to come back for a few weeks but I guess this will do.

Oh! Before I forget, I have a question for Rose. Can I ask it here? I'm a little lazy to go back on Tumblr to ask there --by the way, this idea of a tumblr is just BRILLIANT and it's great to know more about your characters thanks to it. So, my question:

@Rose: "how far are you going to pull the pay-me-to-kiss-someone? If someone pays you to kiss him (or her lol!) for other reasons than testing faithfulness/breaking a couple, will you do it or do you think it will cross the line?"

That's really it now and sorry for this long, long comment.

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Review #3, by Allilipsie VI

13th May 2013:
Haha, just really quickly, i think 'Hugo' in the above photo looks a bit like Charlie McDonnell (he's a really funny and brittish youtuber)

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Review #4, by TheSortingHat X

9th May 2013:
Well, I may be the only person who was honestly not shocked at all by the ending of the chapter. Nevertheless, a lovely twist!
And of course, that fantastic Aura Elixir will no doubt come in handy over the next few chapters. :)

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Review #5, by Rachel X

7th May 2013:
Eek! So good! Please update again soon, this is my favourite story at the moment :D :D

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Review #6, by Crescent Moon  X

6th May 2013:
I loved this chapter!
For some reason I don't think that the father is Scorpius, I'm probably completely wrong but I just don't know... I'm thinking maybe the Malfoy in Gryffindor?
Anyway, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.

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Review #7, by AriesGirl40 X

5th May 2013:
Malfoy and a Hufflepuff? I suppose that could happen. Though now I feel sorry for Malfoy. I can't see Rose being very forgiving of a Jerk father to be.
Great chapter, kept me distracted :)

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Review #8, by Relapsody X

5th May 2013:
I just found this story today and read all the chapters in one sitting! It is such a great way to pair Rose and Scorpius- they both have lots of mystery and secrets. I really want to know what happened with Dave (did he cheat on her back then?? why does he act like he didnt?), and was Faye talking about Scorpius? (because she said the guy was messing with her head for a year but his older brothers already graduated). Anyway, so far its awesome :]

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Review #9, by Kat X

5th May 2013:
Loved this chapter:) though I knew it would be scorpius. keep it up!!

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Review #10, by Julia X

4th May 2013:
Really-really good! Keep on writing! :-)

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Review #11, by EarthsTrueGreen X

4th May 2013:
First of all Faye lies! Now that i'm done being a baby I am going to say that I think it might be one of his brothers and not Scorpius, at least that is what I hope. If not then I do think that it might be someone else, the only reason is because Scorpius is that Scorpius is very public with his relationships, Rose has kissed him enough times to know that so it wouldn't make sense for him to hide Faye, he seems to date the entier school. So thats what I'm thinking.
As for the begining I loved it, it would seem that Rose Weasleys world is starting to crumble a little bit wouldn't it. She is starting to feel...slightly, and she knows it, the fact that Scorpius was even able to hurt her says a lot. I also think that before he called her a distraction she was on her way to possibily developing something for him, although thats just a guess.
I would really like to read a chapter from Scorpius' perspective, his mind seems so priviate and control and I would love to know his take on all these little moments.
Anyways great update lovd it. Please updat as soon as you can because that was a evil little cliffhanger that you left.

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Review #12, by BBWotter X

4th May 2013:
Well crap... that's my basic reaction to that last word, I really can't say anything else except that I really like this story :) x

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Review #13, by Lucy IX

19th April 2013:
What a way to end the chapter!!! I am DYING for the next one, please please pleasseee update as soon as you can :D I love this story, so thanks for writing such a unique ScoRose

Author's Response: Hello Lucy,

I'm afraid I do love my cliff-hangers... as you will see in future chapters as well. The next one is in the queue so please don't die! Thank you so much for a lovely review,

Irish Myth.


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Review #14, by LittleMissPrincess IX

20th March 2013:
i like what the story has come to (:

Author's Response: Hello LittleMissPrincess,

Thank you, I hope this chapter cleared a few things up for you. The next chapter is in the queue, sorry it has taken so long to update/reply,

Irish Myth.


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Review #15, by LittleMissPrincess VIII

20th March 2013:
so there are two other malfoys? elder to scorpius?
and whats the deal with james and rose? why was she so mad when he was outside her room?

also, what was Castor Malfoy doing in their house on christmas?

Author's Response: Hello again LittleMissPrincess,

Scorpius does indeed have to elder brothers. Oh James, he is a complicated character which is explained in more detail in the next chapter... As is Castor Malfoy. Thanks for the review,

Irish Myth.


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Review #16, by LittleMissPrincess VII

20th March 2013:
OMG LUCY IS SO ANNOYING. And that was so rude of her to do that! why is she being like that?

Author's Response: Hello LittleMissPrincess,

She is a bit, isn't she? I think right now she is just hurting from Dave's betrayal but it was still unfair of her to do what she did. Thanks for the review,

Irish Myth.


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Review #17, by aidanlynchrox IX

13th March 2013:
Ok so I just started reading this story, and I love it, it's so different than the standard next gen plot lines, without being waaay too angsty and overdramatic. I really enjoy your portrayal of rose and scorpius' relationship. I'm really interested to see how things progress and can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Hello aidanlynchrox,

Firstly, thank you so much for leaving such a great review! The next chapter is in the queue, so I hope you like it, there is some definite Rose and Scorpius interaction...

Irish Myth.


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Review #18, by AriesGirl40 IX

10th March 2013:
Interesting. Is Rose beginning to care about what she is doing?
I believe Scorpius might be very good for her.

Author's Response: Hello AriesGirl40,

We shall see, we shall see... Chapter Ten is in the queue and it might very well give you a little more insight into Rose's sparse emotions. And it may be Scorpius' fault... Thanks for another lovely review,

Irish Myth.


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Review #19, by sunchine daisies IX

10th March 2013:
Love this story! cant wait to see more of Scorpius and Rose there both such complex charachters but i think they work soo well together! can wait for the next update:)

Author's Response: Hello sunchine daisies,

Thank you for the lovely review! There is definitely some more Scorpius and Rose action in the next chapter which is in the queue and should be validated shortly. Thanks again,

Irish Myth.


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Review #20, by EarthsTrueGreen IX

9th March 2013:
So you were right it was better than your last update and a little insightful as well but I'm hoping that the next chapter will have more Scorpius. Partially because he is a complex character and I like to read about him. Anyways James seems to be fighting an enternal battle and I could see how it would bother him to know what Rose was doing and he probably still care for her. As for the Malfoy twins they seem very different. Pollux seems much more reserved and uptight where as Castor seems more lade back, Scorpius seems to have a litle bit of both of that.
OVerall it was a nice update but I am happy that she is back at Hogwarts.
Please update soon, I know your busy but when you get a chance. :)

Author's Response: Hello EarthsTrueGreen,

The next chapter definitely has more of the complex Scorpius... But you have been warned, it may not all be good. James is certainly fighting a very tough internal battle, he was/is very protective over Rose and it kills him to know that she does what she does. At the end of the day, even if they aren't friends anymore, they are still family so he does still care for her.

The Malfoy twins are polar opposites. Which probably has something to do with why they were sorted into different Houses. Scorpius is indeed in the middle ground although he does tend to drift more to Pollux's side as they are both Slytherins.

Thank you so much for another lovely review and the next chapter is in the queue as we speak (or type) so I hope you like it! Sorry it took so long to update/reply,

Irish Myth.


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Review #21, by soapman333 I

9th March 2013:
Woah, I don't usually read stories like this, and I don't know what force made me click on your work, but I'm glad I did.

I'm immediately drawn in to your story :0

I'm just letting you know, so that you realize that this first chapter is AMAZING!

Thanks,
soapman333

Author's Response: Hello soapman333,

Well I'm glad you did to! Thank you so much for such a great review, means a lot and I hope to see you around,

Irish Myth.


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Review #22, by GrangerDanger76 IV

9th March 2013:
Ooh! This is getting so intense!

YIPEE! :)

Author's Response: Hello again,

The intensity mounts...

Irish Myth.


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Review #23, by GrangerDanger76 III

9th March 2013:
Oh goodness... drama is stirring.

I just love Rose and Scorpius because really, we both know they are totally ment for each other. ;)

I am just loving this story! :)

Author's Response: Hello again GrangerDanger76,

Drama most certainly is stirring. They most certainly are... If life decides to let them. Thank you so much for reviewing again,

Irish Myth.


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Review #24, by GrangerDanger76 II

9th March 2013:
Whee! Another great chapter! I looked at your blog for the story and it is a really great idea! I'll be there often!

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Hello GrangerDanger76,

Thank you! I'm so pleased you checked out my blog, I hope to see you there,

Irish Myth.


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Review #25, by GrangerDanger76 I

9th March 2013:
Oh goodness! This is fabulous! I was a bit weary reading the description, but this actually like a really quality story.. :)

Great Job! I loved it!

Author's Response: Hello GrangerDanger76,

Thank you so much for reviewing! I hope you like the next chapters just as much,

Irish Myth.


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