Aw :). I loved this fanfic because of the storyline. So cute!! Good job keeping in with JK's characterization. My one complaint was that there was sometimes odd formatting, or bad spelling. With a little more polishing, it'll be perfect :).Author's Response: Hey, Thanks!
I'm having it polished and cleaned by my amazing beta at the moment. It was one of my first stories so it took some practise. I think I'm getting better at it all, but I still need some help with it.
I personally love the characters the JK created and I don't want to change them, so I try to stay close to them while writing.
Thanks for the great compliments, that really makes me happy!
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I really like how the story is progressing. I enjoy reading about all the magical aspect about being pregnant.Author's Response: Thank you so much for your replies and compliments!
I hope my grammar mistakes don't bother you, I have someone who is beta reading it for me.
I had to do a lot of research on normal pregnancy for the story and then transform it with how i thought in would be if you added magic. I hope I did a good job with it.
Thanks again! I hope you keep enjoying the story!
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Another nice chapter.Author's Response: thanks! It's graet to hear that! Report Review
Another good chapter, a good start to the story so far. Curious to see how the family will take the news, I bet they will be excited and happy.Author's Response: Hey, well who wouldn't be excited? another Weasley to ad to the mix. That's always fun!
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I liked Ron's reaction to the news that he was going to be a father. I like how Hermione is a bit freaked out and reading about pregnancy right away, it fits her character.Author's Response: hihi, yeah I like that bit a lot myself. It was fun to write!!
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Cute start to the story. I love how you reference/use more magic in other stories I read.Author's Response: I loved to write those little bits of magic, that what I love about this fantasie world! Report Review
I liked the theme and storyline. Character development was good. Could have fleshed out Harry's depression, more interaction w Mrs Granger, her memories of her magical pregnancy, and what did Ron and Ginny do w the paparazzi photo of Hermione and Harry?
Some issues tho, child, you need a proof reader. You can not spell. Grammar is terrible. Het instead of her, safe not save. So many poor spellings or typos. Did not attempt to correct on each page. I like to read through the whole story. Also, in labor, you push not press the baby out. Trust me, it is not an ironing experience. You want that kid out of there! Also it is not a navel cord. It is an umbilical cord which when cut at delivery results in the navel or belly button.Author's Response: Thank you for your relpy. I have to admit that English is not my native language but I try as hard as I can. If you have time to beta read it for me I would really like that. An other reader said she had taken most of the errors out, but I understand she overlooked some.
If you have time I an willing to send you the document...
I hope you liked it nevertheless. Report Review
I loved it!!! Oh my goodness I read the whole thing in one night and couldn't stop. You're a very talented writer :)Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I love it when a story is so nice I can't stop reading. I love to hear my story did that for you!
Thanks for the amazing compliment!
Yes dear to answer your question you email them to me before you post them and I fix your errors if you have any such as puncuation or spelling then you can post them (I'd jsut be an editor of sorts). I would also be willing to edit past chapters for you too- that way the whole story is nice and polished.
It's sad to know it's almost done :(
LLGAuthor's Response: Well, every story has an end...
I can send you the past chapters one by one.
If you want to I could sen you a chapter from a story i have not posted yet. I don't know how I want the story to go from where it is now. keep an eye on your mailbox.
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A really really good and hooking story, just work on spelling and grammar! Well done :)Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I hope you enjoy the end of it.
It's now completed! Report Review
Hey! uk sillylion? Yeah this is me- my other account.. I just have to say sorry the wrong comment went on the wrong chapter. I'm glad Ginny will get better and I cant wait to read more of this. Your really moving quite along with it..
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Such a nice christmas chapter! this story is deffinatly picking up... Report Review
Another fantastic job I must say... (I coomment on every chapter by the way) Report Review
This was another chapter I feel terrible for not reviewing on at once... I enjoyed the tantrum ;) Report Review
Another lovely chapter- I caught up but forgot to leave my reviews.. I believe to get a beta you can click on the forums, get an account through that as well and then you request for one that does all of your editing after you type. I will offer to help since I see you are very passionate about writing..
If you don't wish to use a complete stanger I understand but best of luck and continue your magical journey!Author's Response: I would surely like you to help me out.
Do I e-mail you my chapters before I post them, or how does this work?
it's not that many chapters til the end...
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This is a great chapter. The story is really moving along isn't it? Well I bid you goodnight and happy writing :)Author's Response: I really like it that you like it. It makes me want to write more. Thank you for reviewing.
Just een short question, how do you get a beta? I am kind of new here you see...
have e great time with the upcoming chapters the next is one of my favorites!
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Quite a nice chapter dear.. I cant believe so much was written in my absence... I'll try to catch up but I have two books I have to read by thursday... Joy. Anyways I will catch up and write for every lovely chapter... My suggestion is to look for a Beta or an editor possibly to help bring this story to new heights :) Report Review
I went to review this chapter before and I realized it hollered saying I needed to review. I'm honestly proud of you in an anonmyus writers prospect just for writing this since English isn't your first language. I could never do anything this grand or lengthy in French. Don't mind my nitpicks on spelling because I make more mistakes then you have! Please keep writing :) Report Review
This was another really good chapter! I'm happy to say your spelling has improved :)
I cant wait to see how the Grangers take the news..
till next time,
slAuthor's Response: Thank you for your reviews, I really try to work on my spelling, Englisch is not my native language so it's not that easy. Please don't mind the errors.
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Another good Chapter and I hope for more... Just please look over the spelling...
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A lovely second chapter! All I can harp is please look over for spelling errors. Don't get discouraged though... usually mine is worse ;)
~sl Report Review
Wow. Lovely Ch 1! I shall catch up and read the rest... I hope you dont mind me pointing out the spelling errors yo u have in here- I would sujest editing with a once-over for spelling. De instead of The. Also I reccomend looking over the paragraph under the Green; congradulations your pregnant. I hope you dont find this harsh but I think the simple mechanic fixes will make this read all the better
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