Wonderful is the only word to sum up the story and the chapters so far.

You are an excellent writer and skill for narrating the story is wonderful. I could actually visualize while reading - Hermione standing out side Slytherin common room and demanding Salazar to open the door. :) enjoyed the story very much.

Waiting eagerly for new chapters.

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Ooooh tensions arise in the carriage! :D Loved it! Such a good chapter, albeit a little short. Just something I found a little odd--Hermione calling Draco "Mr. Malfoy" isn't canon-compliant--it would seem more natural for her to call him "Malfoy" instead. That's all I've got for you now, update this again soon! :) xx

Author's Response: "Mr. Malfoy" refers to Lucius Malfoy (maybe I should have said "Lucius" instead but as she was talking to Professor Snape at the time I imagined she'd be more likely to use a formality.) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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You have skills. Thank you for this story. Keep on writing it please, can't wait till the end.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I really appreciate the review. I'm going to keep on writing till the end, don't worry:) Almost done with the next chapter.

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Yeah, wouldn't want to be looking unattractive to Malfoy ;) Great chapter, I love the frustration she's feeling with her elemental powers and now Ron/Lavender getting together. It'd be cool to have a scene with her and Harry talking things out (like in the book/movie) soon. :) I want to know what happens next and what Malfoy will say when Hermione says she wants to help Lucius! Keep up the good writing :) xx

Author's Response: Ha, ok I'll try to have a conversation with Harry and Hermione thrown in there...it may have to be remote because Christmas Break is upon them:) Thanks for sticking with the story and reviewing!

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WOW. WOW & WOW.

Fantastic chapter. it was worth all the wait. You are an excellent story writer and you give the right amount of suspense and END the chapter . Not Fair... but honestly its one of my favorite stories and I keep looking out for updates.

Looking forward to an update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. Thank you & thank you;) I really appreciate these reviews because it helps me know that you folks like where the story is headed! They also push me to keep writing...I'm hopefully going to have a new chapter up this next week or the one after. Thanks again!!

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So I realized I've missed the last few chapters--sorry!! But the fact you made them elementals is so cool!! The story is really developing well and so are the characters. Such a great last few chapters!!! :D I'm excited for the next one :) xx

Author's Response: I'm going to write the next chapter in a day or two, so it'll be up soon! Thank you for reading and reviewing:)

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such a wonderfully written story. a treat to read.

Author's Response: Thank you so much:) Really appreciate your feedback and glad you're enjoying it!

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Great chapter please update soon:)

Author's Response: I will! Thank you for reviewing!

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A very well writen chapter please update soon:)

Author's Response: Actually updating as we speak:) Hopefully they approve my new chapter in the next few days! I'm trying to make up for taking so long to update this last chapter.

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Fantastic Chapter, short but really good. Its a wonderful story line with the right amount of mystery to keep us glued to the story and not too much of OOC.

Will look for an update early, so please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks again for reading and reviewing! I'm hoping to update within the next week, we'll see if my schedule allows...

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Ah ah ah ah i loved this chapter but i really need to know what happens next, so please update soon.

Author's Response: Will update as soon as I can, thank you for sticking with it:)!

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What how could blaise do this i really hope draco walks in and saves her or something, this chapter was so intense and i absolutly loved it. Please update soon i realy need to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!! I think the next chapter should be up within the week:)

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Powerful chapter. Can't wait to see what unfolds in the next one.

This is a very unique story, away from the predictable Dramoine stories. None of the characters are too much out of character.

Wonderful way of writing. Do update soon, the suspense of what Hermione does is .

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for reading and reviewing. This chapter was written by my good friend and former roommate (the next chapter will be her contribution as well)...so glad you liked it!

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It's great! : D

But pls update

Author's Response: Thank you and yes, I do need to update I've been lazy! Work and everything else has been incredibly crazy this last few weeks. I promise I'm going to try and write the next chapter within this week (so it'll be updated in about 5 days I'm guessing)...

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Wow

10/10
-Dasha

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I know the introduction of elemental magic was a big (unexpected) step that I was hesitant to take, but I think it'll fit perfectly as I round out this story. I didn't want to add anything too unexpected and take away from the plot I have in mind, but it'll all work out I hope:)

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Ah i loved the way hermione talked back to snape and ah i cant believe they both can do elemental magic... please update soon i need to know what happens.

Author's Response: I'll write the next chapter this week if things aren't too crazy! Thanks for hanging in there...

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Awww poor draco hes got the mark:((( please update soon i really want to know what happens next.

Author's Response: I appreciate your continued support! I'll update as soon as possible:)

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OMG!!! :D Absolutely LOVED how FANTASTICALLY you wrote the scene where Draco gets the Dark Mark! It seems like what would have happened (although for real time purposes it would have been in the summer before 6th year). The fact that Ron doesn't notice Malfoy's change in behavior but Harry & Hermione do is classic and fits perfectly with the real story! Good job, you're doing well! :) xx

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I'm starting to write the next chapter now, hope it doesn't take longer than a few days, but between work etc. it may:( I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks for hanging in there!

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Aw i really feel for draco, i hope him and hermione will get back together. The prank was hilarious and i loved the fact dumbledor had known when they pulled the prank. Please update soon, i cant wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you for your support!! I'll update as soon as I can; things are coming to a close and I'm just as eager as you are to see how it pans out. I have a vague idea...but I'm writing by the seat of my pants for the most part:) Draco and Hermione WILL get together in the end, however. That is a known variable!

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Hello again! Even though this chapter was shorter than usual, it was still very good! Fred & George's prank on the Slytherins was funny and seemed like something they would actually do. I'm curious to see whether Draco will go to the Dark Forest as he's been told to or not. Excited to see where this goes! :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Yeah, it was shorter than usual; this story is circling to its end so I'm cutting off certain chapters when my gut tells me to for maximum impact. Everything's going to come together (including Draco and Hermione, after a bit more strife:)) Can't have their relationship feel unnatural or forced, right?? Even though this is only a Fanfiction...Thanks for continuing to read and review, it will all be worth it at the end (I hope!)

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This is one of the best story I have ever read that says a lot since I'm really picky on what I read.
But why must you hurt me like this leaving me hanging not cool.
Keep on writing cause this is great I'll keep waiting but don't tourture me ok

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'll be posting the next chapter soon, stay tuned:)

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Poor Draco! All alone and not getting the support he needs! A rather short chapter, but it's building up to something bigger, yes? Excited for the next one! Write quickly! :)

Author's Response: Yes, it is building! I'll write it as quickly as I can; it'll probably be up towards the end of this week...

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Well draco really is messed up. I really hope him and hermione make up and i really wonder what blaise is going to do, so please update soon.

Author's Response: Draco and Hermione will definitely make up, it's just taking some time! I'll update as soon as I can, thanks for reading.

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Oooh tension between the Slytherins is rising! I really like this story, and the progression and setbacks of Hermione and Draco's relationship really grounds everything. Blaise is actually of my favorite characters, so I'd love to see how things work out with him. Update again soon, loving it so far! :)

Author's Response: I agree, Blaise is definitely one of my favorite characters too. I think he's going to have to remain bad for this story though. Maybe I'll write another one after this where he's the protagonist...but someone from Slytherin has to keep up an evil tradition, and I decided to make Theodore, Pansy and their friend Dareon Balthazar good so the unfortunate lot fell to Blaise. We'll see how it all works out! I'm taking every chapter as it comes so far with a pretty minimal outline. Thanks for reviewing!

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Hummm i have a feeling something big is gonna happen next. I liked this chapter but i really hope draco and hermione makee up. Anyway please update soon.

Author's Response: Don't worry, they certainly will! I am leading into it, so sit tight...have to make it realistic:)

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