PEEEAAARRRLLL I'M SO SORRY I SWEAR I THOUGHT I REVIEWED THIS! D:
Also, I haven't heard from you in a while, I'm hoping everything is okay?! Or are you on holiday like I was? :D
Anyway, on to the review.
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! It was so sweet and bonding and adorable! No, I don't care if that doesn't make sense. :p
Anyway, I loved Freddie and his obvious crush on Denny. :D
And the rest of the family! But HUGO! He wins for being the best! :p
Loved, loved, LOVED this quote:
"And my hormones are on steroids, higher than Merlin himself!"
"Just because you're gay, doesn't mean you have to go around the house spreading your gayness to everyone you see."
All in all, I LOVED this chapter! I'm so sorry it took me so long to review! I SWEAR I reviewed it! D: Maybe I dreamed it...
ANYWAY, loved the chapter, can't wait for more! :D
10/10! :DAuthor's Response: Hey lovely:)
It's okay, don't worry about reviewing "late", I'm glad you liked the chapter none-the-less.
And it does seem like I've dissapeared for a while doesn't it? I truly haven't. I've just been so caught up with school, it's been interfering with my creative writing muse, so for these past few months all my writing projects have been put on hold. I'm currently constructing a chapter to the story I've dedicated to you by the way, but it's coming slowly.
And yesh! Hugo. I personally enjoyed how Hugo came out. I don't know why, but I always picture Hugo being the gay one, if any of the Weasley/Potter family was to become gay that is. I don't know, maybe it's the name? Hugo just sounds like a name I would give to my stuffed teddy bear. He's adorable though, none-the-less.
Thank you lovely for your review. Updates will come eventually, I PROMISE, but as for right now, everything has been put on a slow-mo status. Report Review
waht why did I not review this?!
This was so cute, I like seeing them all bond and be cute! :p
Denny is a bit crazy, I love her! :p
Sorry for the short review, I want to review 'Of Superheroes and Wizards: 1978'! :p But I need to finish bio, so it may end up being a little later!
Can't wait for the next update! :D
10/10! (Fun fact, I accidentally typed 20/20 instead of 10/10! :p)Author's Response: Yes, they are a cute group of three aren't they? Even though they're 16 and too old to be acting "cute", oh welps! :p
And yesh, Denny. She is a bit crazy, but this is the friendly side of her. I plan on making her a bit wicked later on when Michelle shows her purty little face. But that isn't for a while.
And the short review is totally a-okay! Your reviews always make me happy, so don't worry about it. :)
And thank you for your fabtabulous rating of 10/10. I find that flattering, and actually quite an ego boost.
Can't wait to see ya around lovely! :D Report Review
THIS WAS SO CUTE!
I love reading about James II and now that you've written about him just makes it that much better! :D
I really want to know why Fred got the bruises! Was it Denny?! Was it not?! That is the question!
I'm very sorry, I'm in a very odd mood today! :D
Anyway, I loved the telepathic conversation between James and Michelle! :D It was adorable! :D
Also, what is Lenny's full name? Or is that her full name? Or is Leonarda? Leonardriette? Okay feel free to ignore me! :p
The only thing that I thought was a bit off. "He loved James brotherly". I think it should read "He loved James like a brother" or "He loved James dearly". It's just a suggestion though! It just felt a bit 'off' when I read it.
Anyway, I can't wait to read more of your work! I think the its the Avengers cross-over next!
I LOVE AVENGERS I'M SO EXCITED FOR THIS! :D
So, I really liked this! I'll be adding to my favourites and I can't wait to read more! :DAuthor's Response: YAY! Another review from one of my most favorite people in the world! Huzzah! *happy dance*
Anywho, I'm really glad that you liked what I've written so far about James II. I wanted to give myself another go with Next Gen, because the first story I wrote about them was just pure awful, so I went ahead and deleted it a long time ago. I'm glad to see take two is working just fine.
And yes, Fred did get the bruises from Denny. She isn't exactly the sweetest of girls, and she does have a really bad temper, as in BAD but I'll let you see for yourself later on.
And yesh, the telepathic conversation between husband and wife. It's an intriguing concept really. It's strange because sometimes I'll see couples just staring at eachother making faces and they know exactly what's going on in the other's head. But yesh, they are an adorable couple!
And why would I ignore you? You're too awesome to ignore! Lenny's full name is Leanne.
As for the part that seemed a bit off, I know what you mean. I have no clue why that sounded good to me when I typed this up. I'll fix it once I get chapter images going and such. But yeah. I guess I was feeling in the mood of weirding things up and combining "like a brother" and "dearly". Don't ask. It's...odd. I used to love screwing with my English teachers in the past by writing this essay that they thought was really good until they read towards the end where I'll jack it up on purpose just to see how they react. I don't do it anymore, but sometimes old habits die hard. But yes, I'll definately fix that.
Thank you so much for your reviews so far! They mean so much to me, and I can't wait until you read the Avengers crossover of mine. They still need a lot of cleaning up to do, but I hope you'll enjoy them all the same. Hopefully they won't be a let down. Can't wait to see ya' around for that! :D
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Aw! James as a dad! I love it. Also I like stories about him ending up with a muggle :D
Update soon? Pretty please?Author's Response: Jamesie Poo,
Yep, I honestly think he'd be a great father! And I'm aiming on making this story slightly different than most James II stories. A lot of people depict him within the same aspects, so I wanted to bend the norms. Hopefully this story won't be so cliched. And as for chapter two, it's under construction. I'm planning on taking my time with this project and not be so rushed with it.
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