That was really pretty. It was so well written and it was a great story and it made me really happy. Thanks for that.

Author's Response: Thanks! It was written for the intent of being happy and relatively drama free - so I'm glad it came across that way :)

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Amazing... SimPly loved it :) such a simple story but amazing. I loved the fact that its written from scorpius' view seeing as thqts ery uncommon. Loved it :)

Author's Response: Awh, thanks so much :)

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Wow. Very beautiful...loved it all!!! And so glad through her story, she explained the broom gift :D

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for letting me know, it just makes my day! :)

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Wow! What a wonderful and captivating story! Now I get to read the rest :D

Author's Response: haha, totally ! Thanks!

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I thought this was a beautiful story and I loved it. It was really sweet and I wished there was more.

Keep Writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)

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Loved it but what happened to the second part you posted?

Author's Response: Well, it's coming! They just have to validate it. . . so hopefully any day now!

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That was really really good. i loved how sentimental it was. I was looking for something nice to read and that's exactly what it was: nice. i really hope you continue to write it. Also i like how brief it was, you didn't go into extraneous detail which made it easy to read and the writing flow nicely. i thought it was perfect

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it ! :) There is one other chapter coming - with the other 3 'parts,' so the next one will be up hopefully pretty quick!

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Makes me wonder how many people in the world had their lives turned around because of someone like Rose?
Very thought provoking story
Well done :)

Author's Response: Thank you ! There is still one more chapter to go though, so stay tuned ;)

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