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Review #1, by Leena Chapter 1

17th October 2012:
Love it :D But I didnt like the part tht Ron will die..:[ I always wanted the 3 best frnds together..

Author's Response: Yay! You reviewed xD

Well, I wanted someone to die..xD And it was just an idea.. I didn't want him to die either but I wanted to write from the dead person's loved one's perspective :) And I chose Rose, cuz I've never really written from her point of view before.
Anyway, I'm glad you loved it! :D
Thanks for reviewing again!


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Review #2, by SereneChaos Chapter 1

8th October 2012:
Oh no! Poor Ron! And poor Rose and Harry! You did a good job keeping this succinct--I think any longer and it would have seemed like too much, and any shorter and it wouldn't have seemed like enough. It's so sad that Rose's last words to Ron were so angry. :(

As criticism, I would say only this: watch the dialogue. Some of the speech sounds just a tad outdated in the vocabulary usage (remember Rose is a 16 year old, and Harry is not quite as intellectual as Hermione).

Otherwise, good job!

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much for reviewing!:)

Oh okay, sure! Thanks a lot for the constructive criticism..:3 I will definitively keep it in mind:)

Thanks again!

~NightStar


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