I like potato. I go for potato. POTATO!!!Author's Response: potato indeed. not completely sure what you mean, but thanks anyway! keep reviewing xoxo
~Squig Report Review
I totally adore Sirius's point of veiw!!!Author's Response: Haha, same!! Probably why an awful lot of the story seems to be his POV... know that I love you for reviewing :) Report Review
Yay next chapter!
Sadly rather short though.
I love Sirius.
Mila was a bit mean to him.
I'm sad Bree is dead and I wish she wasn't.
I want Sirius and Mila to get together.
Sorry, squiggly-pie, it's 11.30 and I'm thinking disjointed thoughts and I can't be bothered to write it out properly so I gave you HARD FACT. I was in fact about to go to sleep but I saw you'd updated and I was so excited I read it in about thirty seconds and I'm reviewing as well!! I'm that dedicated. You lucky... Erm... Pie?
9/10- my only request is longer next time. Hahahahaha I can't be bothered to space this review out. Sorry. :-)
*edits*- fine, I'll space it out then
Please update soon! I love this story.
Live long and prosper!
Hahaha... Spock.Author's Response: Dear Moneypenny/Spock-like-being:
Loving the use of my friend's nickname, she'd be quite impressed ;)
I totally agree with you on pretty much everything there. Because I am a lazy bugger, I can't be bothered checking. But what I remember, I agree with.
I will definitely make the next one longer, but while that one was kind of short, it was JAMESBONDACTIONPACKED
Sorry, I just watched Skyfall...
Sidetracked again :'( I really need to get an attention span.
Once again, thankyou--
P.S. REVIEW PLEASE! Report Review
Yay!!! So cute!!!
Brilliant story, I loved it.
Loads happened in that chapter, BTW!
I love Steph, she's amazing, but Mia is definitely my favourite. But I'm kind of confused... nothing's been said about her sister apart from Mia running off, the Sirius going looking for her! Also, did he FIND her?
Love da story though, Cole seems cute. Pettigrew's weird.Author's Response: Why thankyou :3 sorry this took a while, have been very busy--and I really need to stop that.
*Sadistic pirate laugh* You'll have to read the next chapter won't you! Even though you have already 'cause I got you review for that one...
Never mind :D
Thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou forever and ever amen etc.
Much love--and keep reviewing please!
~Squig Report Review
PLEASE do the next chapter it's awrsome so far. Sirius Black and Remus Lupin are two of my fav characters. Keep up the good work :]Author's Response: Thankyou so much!!! I'm probably going to focus more on the boys in later in chapters, not sure yet but I want to. This was my first review, so I will treasure it forever! *smiles cheesily* No, seriously though, keep doing it, i will respond (even if it takes forever and ever ad ever amen) and it helps me come up with ideas :D You are extremely awesome for reviewing, know that I love you...
PLEASE do the next chapter it's awrsome so far. Sirius Black and Remus Lupin are two of my fav characters. Keep up the good work :] Report Review
Hey! Your writing is very fresh and easy to read, and I especially enjoyed Sirius' voice in this! I like Mia as a character, and think that you did a great job mixing your proportions of drama with her dead parents and playfulness with her friends.
In terms of the song lyrics--I would try to avoid adding them in unless they actually relate to the story. What you're probably reading are song-fics, which are stories themed around a certain song. Also, for your story summary, I would refrain from saying your summary isn't good. As a general rule of thumb, don't post anything you feel isn't actually good, plus you want to give your readers a chance to come to their own conclusions. :P
Otherwise, you have a great start! Good luck with the rest of your story!!!Author's Response: Thankyou!!! I love you so much right now, reviews are awesome :D thanks for the tips on lyrics and my summary, I have looked at my summary and changed it. I didn't know what song-fics were, but I'm not going to add lyrics anymore, seeing as this isn't one..
Please keep reviewing, everything helps!!
xoxo Sqig Report Review
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