I AM SO SORRY THAT IT HAS TAKEN ME FOREVER TO REVIEW ONE CHAPTER OF YOUR STORIES AND YOU REVIEW LIKE A MILLION OF MINE!
Anyway, I'm actually here and I'm here to start my review! (FINALLY!)
THIS WAS SO SWEET ERHMAHGERD!
I hate Bellatrix with a fiery passion, she's so evil! And so was Dolohov the stinky rat! D:<
I feel awful because this review is so short and ugh. Anyway I was wondering if there was going to be more because it said WIP on the story info? I assumed not but I'm not good with guessing and such. :p
Anyway, I loved the way you wrote Remus and Tonks, you wrote them really well! And their emotions were so anguish-y! I loved it!
Anywho, this was AMAZING and I will be back to review your other stories very soon (hopefully!) so expect me in your Unanswered Reviews! :D
10/10! :DAuthor's Response: YAYZERZ-WAYZERZ! ohmymerlin has entered my unanswered review box! *breaks out in a random spazztic convulsion*
Anywho, getting back to reality here, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And don't you worry about taking your time to review my stuff. Take as much time as you need, there's no rushes. :)
Ahhh, Bellatrix. In all pure honesty, I love her. She's one of my favorite characters in the books. I don't know why, I'm just drawn to her cyniacle behaviour. She's badass and she knows it, although I do hate how she targets the people I also love. As for Dolohov, I couln't care less about the rat! It pees me off how I let him go in my story unscratched, but this isn't exactly the kind where you'd expect there to be a perfect ending. But I honestly hated letting him leave alive.
And don't worry about your review being short. Your reviews make me smile and brighten my day, so even if it was just one sentace I would've sqeaked with joy. Every review to me counts, so don't apologise for it being "short". It's a wonderful review as it is :)
And as for the WIP status, I keep forgetting to change it to "Complete". There really isn't another part to it officially. It's a one-shot, so that is officially the end.
And Anguish. I'm so glad that I was able to pull it off just fine. I have trouble sometimes conveying raw, powerful emotions, so to hear that I managed to get that goal right allows me to relax.
And a 10/10! Thank you! *chases you for a bear-hug* Report Review
First of all, I love your song choice. I love Rise Against too and this is one of my favourite songs of theirs. I love how you applied the lyrics to this situation and this couple. Also your writing is lovely and it really did pull at the heartstrings. I just wish it had been longer!Author's Response: EvannaBlackthorn,
Thank you so much for the lovely compliments! I really wanted to do a songfic for Rise Against, because so much of their songs are politicaly lyriced, it's usually hard to pull off. So I'm really glad that I applied this song accurately towards the couple. And I'm also glad I was able to pull at the heartstrings. It's usually hard for me to pull out raw emotions I intend for readers to feel in my writing, so I'm very glad I accomplished it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
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