Oh dear, I gotta say that I love Lav-Lav. She's such a fun character to read and you gave us very good view to Lav's inner musings.
The letter was so great. I can imagine, how after Ron got it, he probably freaked out and started to beg Madam Pomfrey for permission to leave before Lav-Lav decides to become the nurse's little helper. =)
There was one small little error that I noticed. When Parvati talks about her sister and the Yule Ball, I'm suspecting that there should be my sister instead of your.
Other than that, your writing was very enjoyable to read. I really have to check your other fics after this. This was so fun, that I'll put in my favorites.
And by the way, thank you for all your work in the House Cup! Report Review
GO PREMA!! is she actually the older sister or did you make her up?Author's Response: I made her up. JKR never mentioned anything about them having anymore siblings, so I figured I'd be good giving them an older sister. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
Poor Lavender--if only she had listened to Parvarti. She was the big sister that Lav so desperately wanted. I think that when a person wants to know something so bad, it's best to find out right away. The longer you wait the worse the pain is. This is one of my favorite parts from the sixth book and movie.Author's Response: She would've saved herself quite a bit of heartbreak if she'd listened to Lavender. And you're right, Parvati could definitely serve as her big sister. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
What a delightful story. I enjoyed this very much. I could so picture Lavendar like that. She closed her eyes to any clues that Ron was actually in love with Hermione.
You did a good job. Keep it up.Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I've never written Lavender, so I'm glad she seemed realistic. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
LOL. Love the 21 brother and farting with armpits, the character that was so Lavender, everything really in this one shot. Very funny.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Haha, that part was amusing to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
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