{reviewid: 2099882, reviewer: 'maurader%20fan'}
18th April 2009:
Nice chapter, lots of potential!
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{reviewid: 2099881, reviewer: 'maurader%20fan'}
18th April 2009:
Great intro! Keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 1996614, reviewer: 'AussieAnatomy627'}
27th November 2008:
the typos make it hard to understand and I don't understand why Lily is mad at James and James at her.
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{reviewid: 1996608, reviewer: 'AussieAnatomy627'}
27th November 2008:
You have a bit of Lily's family mixed up. But the plot is good.
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{reviewid: 1564713, reviewer: 'Paloma%20Patil'}
9th August 2007:
Adorable - you should keep going! P
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{reviewid: 1564712, reviewer: 'Paloma%20Patil'}
9th August 2007:
Great use of a great song. P
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{reviewid: 1430789, reviewer: 'kiani679'}
| Review #7, by kiani679 | Found |
24th May 2007:
loved it, now im in suspense. cant wait to see what happens next, keep writing!
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{reviewid: 1237057, reviewer: 'Noelle4U'}
22nd December 2006:
cute i love it. can't wait to read the rest.
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{reviewid: 1021693, reviewer: 'bigglespotter'}
| Review #9, by bigglespotter | Found |
13th June 2006:
aww james the bigger. i hope lily kicks his arse
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{reviewid: 171486, reviewer: 'Mad'}
16th June 2004:
James doesn't have green eyes, Lily does, and Sirius doesn't have hazel eyes, James does. Honestly.
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{reviewid: 170795, reviewer: 'Dot'}
15th June 2004:
Uh hello? Lily is muggle born, her father can not be an auror, it's impossible.
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{reviewid: 58970, reviewer: 'liz'}
4th August 2003:
I relly like your story please keep post ing I want to kknow what happens next
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{reviewid: 49432, reviewer: 'mads...%20again...'}
7th July 2003:
wow! i really cant wait till you write more!
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{reviewid: 41428, reviewer: 'sarahriverhill'}
7th May 2003:
pleaseeeeeee continue!
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{reviewid: 39425, reviewer: 'Reas'}
10th March 2003:
this is very good, please keep writing, thanx.
love it, cute!<_>
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{reviewid: 37512, reviewer: 'IrmaFuchs'}
7th February 2003:
Very good-where\'s the rest?
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{reviewid: 35612, reviewer: 'Stacey'}
3rd January 2003:
write more please
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{reviewid: 33632, reviewer: 'Sk8er%20Gurrl%202002'}
22nd October 2002:
Very good so far but doesn't Lily have a sister named Petunia? And if she does what happend to her?
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