This was very amusing! Great job!!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing so glad to hear you enjoyed it! Report Review
Hello, it's Siriuslover177,
Wow, I really, really liked this! I cannot believe that Ron would do that to Luna, I mean, having her go into Gringotts, even though she told him that she was afraid of the goblins!
And how he hardly even noticed how much she was freaking out, I thought that was very unfair for him to do for her.
But how you had in the end, how she was making fun of him for his fear of spiders, I thought that was a very fun, and creative thing to add in.
I really liked the flow, and everything of this story!
Great job, and good luck on your challenge!
~SarahAuthor's Response: Thank you! That means a lot and I'm glad you liked it! :D Report Review
RON/LUNA!!! THAT IS SOOO UNLIKE YOU!Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT! But I had to change things up a bit! XD Report Review
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