I really liked it!! =D Love how you had Lisa and Hermione met at the Quidditch Cup, and cleared up how Hermione didnt know Lisa was a witch. I was wondering about that. Very good chapter, cant wait for more! :)
~LunaAuthor's Response: Thank you =) Yeah I've been focusing more on details =) And yeah... Hermione didn't really know anything. I thought it would be boring if she did xD Report Review
Well, kinda of amazing tale, talking about another version of a non-mainstream character is really needed... The unique recommendation is... Well, the same as before, a little more descriptions of the place and emotions, so the one who is reading also feel those things very deep in theirs, but just a little of that... For the rest, amazing :3Author's Response: Gotta keep that in mind!! Thanks a lot :* Report Review
Loved it!!! =D Wow, Lisa is Hermione's cousin!?! I didn't see that coming at all. I like it though, very different. :) Keep up the great work, I cant wait for more!!
~LunaAuthor's Response: Thank you!! Good you liked the Hermione thing ^.^ I'll do my best for the next one =) Report Review
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