You've gotta tell us what happened soon. I'm going mad!! Also, it was kind of weird how Dee just walked in on Al while he was in bed.. Report Review
i really like your story but im really confused by it, i hope the plot becomes clearer soon. Report Review
Please hurry up with the next chapter! Report Review
Ok, so I blatently blasted through all the chapters of Exchange and then this. I know - really bad form - I should have stopped to review on every chapter (because this is simply amazing) but I didn't want to slow up my reading process in any way.
I meant what I said above, though, this is amazing so you're a pretty talented writer. I've read quite a few next generation stories and idk usually the Potter/Weasley mob are depicted as saints and saviours, - ofc you haven't told us the big secret yet - but I'm far too much in love with Dee's character to ever truely hate her.
Al on the other hand - well I've had my moments.
Anyhow, I hope that you're life become less hetic so you can update some more. This is a joy to read so don't give up on it (:
~ZyiiAuthor's Response: So this review made me very happy :) I'm glad you blasted through the chapters, because that means I'm doing a good job. I'm so glad (and a bit surprised XP) that you think I'm talented :). All writers want to hear that, so keep up the good work!
As for the Potters/Weasleys - I just made them like I think the regular person is. Sure there's a little hint of famous in their lives, but they aren't perfect - no one is. I see it happening less and less around the forums that the Potter/Weasleys are perfect children that are beautiful and amazing and do no wrong (but maybe I'm just not reading as much as I used to XP) as writers begin to notice that that's not the story most readers want, but there's still a rather large group of them and I didn't want Exchange to join their numbers. Of course, Dee has had her moments with me (Al more so, but Dee has been especially uncooperative lately) but I'm glad at the same time that they aren't doing what I want them to because that means that they have life.
I hope my life is less hectic soon as well - clearly it's getting there since I just wrote that long-ass response to your beautiful review, but I still need spring break to catch up. I think the next chapter of H&S will be up then.
~Delia Report Review
No please please add another chapter soon, please I'm begging youAuthor's Response: Another chapter is on the way, trust me:) Report Review
NOOO YOU HAVE TO UPDATE PLEASE I CANT LIVE WITHOUT IT PLEASEEE I LOVE IT YOURE SUCH A GREAT WRITERAuthor's Response: :) Thank you! I promise I'm already working on the next chapter, and it's pretty intense. Report Review
Can I just say that this a brilliant story and it's my favourite, please post soon I am dying for the next Chap!
Your AWESOME!Author's Response: Thank you! I am almost done with chapter 5, I promise :) Report Review
Sorry typing from a crappy phone meant to say have*Author's Response: That's okay ;) Report Review
I've read through Exchange and yave read the 4 chapters posted for Playing Hide and Seek and can't wait for the next installment! Looking forward to reading more of your work! :)Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Haha! Her life is a disaster! Is it a problem that I am taking pleasure in this?
I love this story and all the characters in it. And, of course, all of the drama too. I mean who doesn't love loads of drama?
Anyway please update soon!Author's Response: Trust me, I take pleasure in it too :) It makes for a much interesting story. And who doesn't love drama? Report Review
woohoo! Great chapter, update soon, I'M SO EXCITED TO FIND OUT THE PLOT BEHIND HER INABILITY TO BE MAD! AND ALSO THE AIDEN THING!!! :DAuthor's Response: I promise I'll update ASAP. I'm glad you're excited, it should all unfold soon:) Report Review
Next chapter soon please?? It's really good. Cinda is awfully mean though. I never imagined her that mean. I'm glad she is finally talking to Rose. Aiden is her cousin he should care about her more. Update fast!!Author's Response: Yeah, Cinda became meaner. I guess we don't really see the 'nice' version of her anymore, but life does that to you. I actually think that I switched Cinda and Arianna in personality, but, again, people change. I'm glad she's talking to Rose too, it took her a while. I promise we'll see the reason why Aidan is so mad later in the story. It's not for no reason :) Report Review
Hey, could you update more often, because I really like your story. Thanks :DAuthor's Response: Haha December is the month I plan to really tackle this story, so you're in luck :) Report Review
oh em gee please update! So funny how she blows off the prince of England as he's to perfect!Author's Response: I promise that an update is already in the queue :) I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
NEED MORE PLEEASE!! I just love this story Author's Response: Update is in the queue, I promise :) I'm glad you like it. Report Review
Yay! I'm glad the Prince is out of the way, Al and Dee forever! haha, awesome writing as usual, hope you update soon :DAuthor's Response: Yes, I'm a total Al/Dee shipper (well, obviously) but the prince is far from gone, trust me. He's the prince, after all :) Report Review
Sounds really good. Please post the next chapter soon. How much longer till the next chapter?Author's Response: thanks! I'll try to get more chapters out around the break. Report Review
LOVE IT please keep writing :D been waiting so long :DAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping that I'll get more chapters out around winter break. Report Review
What an. Awkward date? Is that the right word? It was just awkward I think. And he did everything wrong, which I think is pretty hilarious. Plus he saw them disappear. And Rose and Scorpius were there too which made it more awkward. And Scorpius slapped her! I laughed so hard at that part (I can't lie). Anyway please update soon!Author's Response: Yes, awkward is the right word for it, I think :) Thanks so much for reading XD Report Review
YESS!! you updated!!! Now. Chapter four. Come aliiive.
It's awesome how more Al showed up, but not too much about his reaction. Grrr. I still feel that Dee should be furious with them. Not run from them! She should- I don't know, curse them into obliviation! And what happened to her cousin...?
"He tried to kill you, Deandra, and then he got mad at you for wanting revenge! A normal person would be angry!" -Cinda
And I'm like, Yesss. I still find it unbelievable that she fell for Al. He does NOT deserve her, what-so-ever. Do NOT know why he doesn't feel any guilt at all. Hmph.
I REALY hope:
a) Dee comes to her senses and blows up on Al.
b) Al starts feeling GUILT. I tell you. Hard. Core. GUILT.
And the biggest question of all, is, WHY did they start tormenting Dee in the first place!?!?!? Meh. I guess that will be explained later on.
Hope chapter four comes up sooner than this one.
-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~ Toodles! ~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-~-Author's Response: Thank god someone is still reading this underupdated story.
And yes, I know underupdated is not a word. But it is now.
I promise that Dee will get angry. I swear. It's part of the story. Al will feel guilt. I promise. There would be no point in this if there was no guilt or anger or finding out why all these events went down in the first place. Pinkie swear. Report Review
Whoa talk about action packed...
CleAAuthor's Response: Yup. This chapter was fun to write :) Report Review
HUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHUHU. UPDATE! UPPPDDDAAATEEE!Author's Response: :) :) hopefully soon :) Report Review
This is really good! When do we find out what happened? Please update soon!:DAuthor's Response: Soon. The story line will mostly be about figuring out why Exchange went down in the first place. Report Review
I need another chapter!! :( Update soon pleasee :DAuthor's Response: Haha hopefully an update will come soon. Report Review
Update pleassse? :D Author's Response: Maybe :) :) Report Review
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