YOU SHOULD WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON OR I'LL BE DIE BECAUSE OF CURIOSITY!

Really, it's an amazing story! I've read facing fate and then chasing fate for the last two hours, and I must admit I really hate to see it stopped here! I want more! Give us more! Give us more! :D

What I love about your stories is you don't always give us readers what we want, you could always write happy endings between Draco and Hermione but you didn't, and I'm really glad you didn't, because if you did then there would be no chasing fate, and I wouldn't so curious and mad that I have to wait for the next chapter.

I'm waiting for the next chapter! Please write it soon, and please, do not ever, EVER, abandon it!

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Dala ;)

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Hopefully you can update soon it's a great story. I love it.

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I am really enjoying your story. I have also favoured your first part. You asked last chapter what we would like to see happen, quite honestly I can't see Hermione leaving Dean unless he dies or ends up cheating on her with a healer. That being said I like the whole lead up with the "Master" and the dark and mysterious of who he is. I think it is Lucuis Malfoy, or Lestrange. However another thing I would like to see happen would be Hermione actually kidnapped and Draco be the one to find her. Or Draco and her find Romeo and Juliette again, without the dying part. I think in this story Hermione should end up with Draco's baby, and him not believe her at first that it is his to add to the drama of the situation and danger(getting kidnapped while preggers).

Again I would to end this with a keep going I love your story so far.

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Oh my goodness please either update this or seven moments or both!! I'm practically dying here!!

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you know your a great writer...i want the end 2 come quickly becuz i wnna c who she stayz with but then again i dnt want the end 2 come becuz i dnt want it 2 be over...i think shes gnna be with Draco i mean u culd tell they were totally in love.at least i want her 2 be with Draco...anyway ur a great writer and this is a great storty...

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Please add more chapters!!! I read both of these in two days and I NEED more!!! It's a really incredible story!!

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Omg i love your story can't wait to read more

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spent the whole day reading facing fate and this!! absolutely brilliant, please write more asap :) It's actually really well written and very believable, love it!

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Please hurry with the next chapter haha :) Awesome story so far.

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I hope you write more of this story. It is really good and I want to know the ending.

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Uh. Draco is so awesome! I wanna date him. :).
Good old Harry, always doing the wrong thing! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I will go do that now... :).
BTW, I love this fan fiction!

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All I can think is poor Hermione. So much drama and chaos. I love your writing style. Keep it up!

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So many twists from the last story! Can't wait for more!

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PLOT TWIST! And I have read both stories so far and I must say I appreciate the lack of typos. You are one of the few I read with minimal typos thank you so much for that

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I can not believe that i am going to say this... but i don't want Hermione to leave Dean. LOL and I am a huge Dramione fan! lol it's the only ship I like. But you make Dean seem like some freaking saint and I just love him. LOL great story.

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cant wait for the next one...

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omg i cant wait for the next update...i love this story...great work

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Keep going this is literally one of the best fanfics i have read!! Xoxox

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Loved it. Can't wait to read more. I really find it annoying that everyone, nearly everyone is lying to her. She deserves better than that. Update soon! :)

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Wow this is really turning out to be love triangle... or square. Another amazing chapter please update soon.

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God Ron needs to get over her! Loving this story and the continuation from Facing Fate. :) Update again soon, loving the drama with Hermione and Malfoy!

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Overall, I give this story a 10/10.

Although this chapter was a little disappointing. I was expecting a little more Draco/Hermione and unfolding of the plot. Although that curveball of Astoria being pregnant was pretty good.

I am going to guess that Draco is not the father, because the mother is refusing to cooperate for a paternity test that would ultimately prove if Draco is or isn't the father. Unless you're writing Astoria to be mysterious when it comes to proving whether Draco is the father or not.but I still will go with my first thought.

Draco is NOT the father; final answer!

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Is Greengrass lying about the baby? Please say she is! Draco would never in any way want to be so close to Astoria that she would become pregnant. I really hope Dean will be alright, though. Poor thing. I can't wait for some more Dramione action, to see the two working together on the case. :)

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Why is HG being such a doormat to Ron. He is such a jerk! Get him off her please! It is ruining the storyline when reader becomes annoyed! Your storyline is too good to be ruined like this.

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can't wait for more!

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