Very cute and electric song fic! Taylor Swift is always very good! Love Al/OCs! It was a little confusing, but you did a good job! Loved it a lot!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I haven't been on in a while so I didn't see your review, sorry about that. I reread the fic and I'll go back and fix the errors that I caught once NaNoWriMo is over.
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Wow good job!! I was reading this on my iPad with sparks fly playing in the background. It really was very moving!! I love how in the song it says "get me with those green eyes..." it is perfect for Al who inherited Lily's eyes!!
You fit the story very well with the song, I enjoyed reading and keep on writing!!
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Its really cool that you have an iPad (super jealous of that).
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