oh tension. Haha, I really love your story. I wasn't expecting a couple of the major plot twists ( Albus's son, people want to kill her etc etc) and I actually thought it was going to be a straight up and down romance story from the summary. but I was really surprised. Flora is hilarious the way she talks and thinks, and I think she clashes perfectly with Albus. I can't wait to find out what happens next, so update soon please ;D ~F

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Oh My Gosh!
Flora has no tactics, does she? I actually face-palmed when I read that. Why on Earth would she disclose the fact that she knew about Noah?! Noah is a really nice name :)

Anyways...I just can't help but shake my head at her tactlessness. WHYY?!

It's really adorable how much Albus and Flora have grown closer, though it isnt all that obvious. Although Albus doesnt seem very accomplished at comforting Flora, he still did a pretty good job. When he kissed the top of her head/forehead, I spassed! I was like "Woohoo! Alora moments!"

I can just imagine Albus raging at her.oh Flora, what have you done?

"It started to get a little weird when you started to run the base of your foot up and down my calf, though. It did help that you wear the ugliest pyjamas, though. I'm only man, sweetheart. If it wasn't for that flannel disaster you had on, you might have never made it to alter in white."

That was hilarious! Loved it!!
I love Albus and FLora :D

Alora seems like a good ship, they are so different from each other and they have so many cute moments xox

On a more sirius note, the hooded figure was plain creepy. When Flora decided to go poking her head through the hedge, I was actually holding my breath, hoping nothing bad would happen...

Please update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next, the suspense is killing me.

Love,
iatevoldysnose xox

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ACK!
OMG THIS CHAPTER WAS SO INTENSE...I really didnt expect her to be a lady...Lady Flora Dainty.

The note is actually quite scary if you think about it. I can't wait to find out who wrote it...and who trashed their house...

And omg her social life...i actually expected her to be a virgin.wow

WONDERFUL CHAPTER ONCE AGAIN!

Love,
iatevoldysnose xox

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Woah, woah, woah...WHAT?!

He's her body guard?! What?!

Omg this story is so good! I just cant believe it! Every chapter I'm just left wanting to read more and just so intrigued. You have a very wonderful writing style and the characters are so interesting! I ship Flora/Albus (would their ship name be something like Florus or Alora?) !

Great work once again!

Love,
iatevoldysnose

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OH MY GOD!
I did not expect that! Albus has a son! omg.
Great chapter!
I love Flora's reaction when Wallis told her that they thought that her and Albus where an item. Woah...reading over that sentence, it makes me confused. Anyway...

I had the same reactions as Flora did when I read that Albus had a son. I'm still shocked!

Wonderful work !

Love,
iatevoldysnose

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Woah! That was such an awesome chapter!

I really liked it. It's just funny how Flora and Al have such opposite personalities. And I have to agree with Flora, is Albus bipolar or something?

The Marigold simulator was such a great idea. I wish I could go on it...but Albus was a bit mean, even if it was for a laugh. She could've had a heart attack just saying.

I like Flora's character, not because she's snobby and uptight, but because its a very original idea. Same with Albus. Pretty much I love all the characters at the moment.

The road trip, I think, is going to be very 'fun' and not at all boring. I can see that already. I liked the museum:)
Just wondering, but who's Edward Marigold? Is he like an actual character from the books and stuff, or did u make him up?

Wonderful chapter and great work!

-iatevoldysnose

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This was a nice opening chapter:) I like how you portrayed Flora and I like your idea of her being a snob. It's a very original idea. And also with Albus, his character is very different to how I imagined him to be. It's a good thing though. His surly attitude is very nice:)

Great chapter and I'm going to keep reading this story because it seems interesting:)

-iatevoldysnose

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omg, cute! I hasn't realized how personal they'd gotten.. bun-kisses? attempted cuddling? outrageous! haha funny as chapter though. and wew, let's meet Noah!! that could be interesting.. :D

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Hey there!

Wow, I cannot believe Flora just spilled the beans about Noah! Despite her upbringing, she can be rather tactless sometimes, can't she? Although I would like to meet Noah, and I definitely think Albus needs to as well.

The hooded figure in this chapter was so creepy! This suspense about why Albus is Flora's bodyguard and why someone is after her is practically killing me! I hope we find out some more info soon.

Great chapter.
Courtney:)

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obviously awesome, an amazing read

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aig! you must write more! thank you for writing this though.

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Ahh finally Albus and Flora were getting along (sort of) why did she ruin it by asking about his son? D: And blargh the hooded guy was so creepy :O Update soon!

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Hi!
I just found this story and I love it! :D
Please update soon, I want to know what's going to happen!
Ines

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Uh oh... Aw, and they were getting on so well! He's really angry, little bit worried for Flora, not gonna lie. Oh God, I hope Wallis doesn't get into trouble, or too much trouble with Al at least.

I feel so sorry for Flora though, her parents are awful, I don't think she was ever treated with affection, her father has her whole life planned out for her and I could go on. I think Al and Flora would be good for each other in different and kind of opposite ways; I think Flora will help Al be more mature and stable in a way and I think Al will help Flora loosen up and find herself somehow. They have a really, really long way to go though!

Anyway, fantastic chapter, as per usual! Absolutely loved it! Please update soon, now Being Summer's finished this is now my favourite out of your stories, but I do love them all!

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no, i liked this chap!

i think it was kind of silly for flora to go and bring in the whole /son/ thing esp since she wasn't supposed to know, and they were getting along so well!

ohwell. update soon!
actually, it's alright if you don't. you're taking your GCSE's this may, right? so am i. i understand that you have to study (:

bye ellie (:

OH AND OMG THE WHOLE HOODED FIGURE GUY, THAT WAS SO SCARY I MEAN WOAH. also, flora likes to cuddle in her sleep? :P

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CLIFFHANGER!!! ARGHHGHGH! I like this fic because its original and I find the characters really interesting. I don't know if its just me, but I find Albus confusing but in a mysterious way. (I don't know if that makes sense) Please update soon! I don't know how long I can wait

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OH MY GOD.
Okay. I'm very intrigued. I want to meet Noah. And Al totally has to tell Flora what's going on soon, because it's getting frustrating. I DO NOT UNDERSTAND - ARGH.
As usual, I love it :)

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Another fantastic chapter! Reading this story at midnight did give me some chills when i got to the part about the hooded figure!!! Oh my, Flora spilled the beans on Noah.I wonder how that plays out!

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You cannot leave me hanging there.
WHYYY? How could you do such a thing?
I guess you'll just have to update quickly. PLEASE?

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Aww, they were sort of getting along there and then she had to bring up his son.
10/10

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Oh my God Flora, what is wrong with you! You don't just ask that from a guy! Especially when that guy is Albus Potter and he obviously seems to have some issues! Nothing but chaos can come from what she's just asked. Albus is going to start yelling, I can just tell.

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AHH this story has taken an amazing twist...so intrigued! I am on the edge reading this story!! Can't wait for more

Author's Response: awh, thank you so much. the next chapter of this is coming along nicely, so it should be ready soon :D

ellie :) xx

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AAGGHH!! SHE'S DEAD? WHAT? WHAT IS THIS THREAT? WHAT? *CONFUSION* WHAT? WHY? WHY IS THIS HAPPENING? I DONT UNDERSTAND?! ALBUS -WHAT?!

also she's not a virgin? lol, that was unexpected.

BUT WHAT OMG THIS JUST GOT SO MUCH MORE INTERESTING YOU #ACTUALLY HAVE TO UPDATE SOON NO SRSLY ACTUALLY.

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okay wow this is sooo exciting for life CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER

but literally, this story has finally picked up some great plot, flora is being less of a pain in the ass (can i say that?) and albus is being less jerk-y and wallis is being nice and everything is super so yay!

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please write more! it is SO good!

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