Wow!! I never really understood horse races but this was amazing! Obviously Malfoy's horse probably just ruined Astoria's.
I doubt she's going to let this go that easily! I can't wait to see what happens.
One thing though, just a suggestion really, I think there might be a lot of people who don't really understand horse races. So for those people, could you, just for the progolue like just spell out who the horses are the names and who they belong too?? I kinda got confused by the end by whose horse was who?
Great start! I would love to read more =)Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Draco's horse has caused quite a lot of damage and Astoria's certainly not going to let it go without carving out her pound of flesh.
I will have to take a look at the horses/owners near the end and see what I can do :-) I definitely donât want people stuck trying to figure out which horse goes where instead of being able to read through smoothly.
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