OMG what a scary chapter!! I am so worried for Dominique now! I can't believe Parker is being so cruel. This is truly terrible!

Great chapter as always though. Packed with tension and action, I loved it. I am so eager to read the next one now. Great going!

10/10
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OMG, what is going to happen next!?!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Good job! =D

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Oh dear, poor Clancy! I feel so sad for her, she got caught up in everything for nothing. I wonder if Nolan has any redeeming qualities in him though. So far the story is going great. I am really excited to see what happens next, and kind of anxious too. I am surprised at the low number of reviews you get on all your chapters, this is a superb story and deserves a lot more recognition!

Anyway, keep writing. Great job!

10/10 as always,
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Hey! You update pretty fast, yay xD

Wow this was a powerful chapter. So James finally came to know the truth. Poor guy, I feel so sad for him. And even Ginny knows now. *sigh*

I wonder how things will turn out further. Great chapter as always!

10/10
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I am such a fan! cliff after cliff!

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oh , thank god Harry finally told him! so much drama! that scene was better than I could have possibly imagined - absolute cringeee at james cutting, omg - very very emotional, I can't accuse you of making this story boring, that's for sure.

the story might not have been moving very fast but the updates certainly have, which more than make up for it! good luck with your finals! :))

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Wow what a mind-blowing chapter! I loved to see this fierce protective side of Harry's! His love for his children is so strong and it definitely is reflected here. I liked how he was clever enough to bring in Pansy. And Pansy let slip many things after all. I just hope they're able to catch Parker soon, and get a phoenix. Oh and I liked the part about Albus in the hospital wing too - you described his feelings and thoughts well.

All in all, another awesome chapter! Great going!
Keep writing!
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woww. hot damn.

I was not expecting harry to go for pansy! I thought the phoenixes would be priority.. what are you doin Harry? go get them damn phoenixes and stop obsessing over your revenge.. Getting namken isn't going to save albus, now is it?

Harry's swearing there seemed a bit out of character.. it was such casual swearing too, not even emotional? just an opinion

love that you update so regularly. i will always be here!

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OMG I am so scared for Harry and his family now. Oh dear, what's going to happen next! I hope Harry can find a phoenix soon! And I can't believe Namken had the guts to actually say "game on"! This is all so devastating. A very well-written chapter as always. I am curious to see what happens next.

Please update more soon.

10/10
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oh my god, so much SUSPENSE! DUN DUN DUN! AS IF HE WOULD GO TO SCORPO'S FLAT?! it's a bit random actually, why scorpius? BUT OMG GAME ON OH HOT DAMN IT'S ON! I'm really excited and I'm not sure why. I've been checking up on this chapter so often since you said it was in the queue, that's probably why xD AND IT WAS AWESOOME WO! poor albie, but they have to get a Phoenix! THEY HAVE TO! I TAKE BACK ANYTHING BAD I EVER SAID/THOUGHT ABOUT ALBUS, HE CAN'T DIE NOW!! maybe dumbledore.. no that's silly, Fawkes wouldn't be alive.. right? :( poor albus.

chapter seemed short and we didn't get very far but I'm happier that you're not rushing through things. good stuff! :D

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Oh god I used to love Nora but I can't believe she would do that to James! I don't think what James did should make her mad, I don't know how she could have cheated on his birthday! :'( keep writing though I still can't wait to see what parker is up to

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm sorry you feel that way about Norah! But all that trouble with her and James is officially over. I think I can come out and say that they're together for good now. No more troubles, no nothing. :) But at the very beginning of The Seer even, I had decided that when the two of them got together, it would be at the end of the series. It would show how much they would have to go through to be with one another and to prove how much they love each other and wanted to be with one another. So that's why this one started out the way it did, but then I couldn't fight it anymore. I had to put them together. :P

But thanks for bearing with me on that! And thanks for remaining so faithful to this story! I hope to see you back soon!

Thanks for the review!

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haha, Parker namken is an intelligent one! Where oh where will Harry get a Phoenix?

This story feels like its really coming together how is, can't wait to see more! Woohoo! :D

Author's Response: Yes he is! And I don't know. ;) Guess you'll have to wait and find out!

Yes, it's finally coming together! :D Thanks for the review! I hope to see you back for the next chapter!

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OMG NO!

Where did the phoenixes go?! Parker can't be so cruel as to steal them. Oh no I don't want Albus to die! NO :(

This was a very dramatic and intense chapter and oh god I am so worried for Albus now. Please update the next one soon!

10/10
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OMG what a scary chapter. James is having the dreams noo! I am so scared (and excited) to see what happens next!

This was a really great chapter by the way. I loved how you gave us a glimpse into parker and his mother. Pansy really? wow. The son-father moment between Harry-James was really sweet too though I feel like smacking Harry. He should really tell James the truth before things worsen.

Anyway, great job as always. Going on to the next!

10/10
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Hey! Wow this was another amazing chapter (and the previous one too, I read both of them now).

I am so eager to see how things turn out. Poor Albus. And oh Ghosh the dreams have started for James. Don't know what Parker will do next. It's all really exciting. I can't wait to see more of what happens.

Keep writing!

10/10

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nonononono, why did it stop there?! WHY?!? GIVE ME MORE NYANGHSFLKD
that was such a good chapter, weoow! ALBUS IS NOT DEAD although you made it a tad obvious there.. but I suppose if he does actually die it'll be more of a surprise xD lots of fluffy stuff, all lovely but it's sort of getting a bit boring..? that's not really what I mean, it's just a bit slow when the fluff gets going, it's doesnt really get you interested and dying for more, you know what I mean? IM SORRY I'm trying to be constructive but I just sound mean.
and likely no one else thinks that and you can just ignore me :P

YAY CHAPTER 10 75% YAY EXCITEMENT

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Awesome story with the followup sequal. Dont like that you keep using Al as a pawn for Parker to try and get to James. Hopefully Harry will have access to a phoenix and Al recovers and the whole family Potters/Weasleys go after them and Harry comes clean and tells Ginny about the horacrux.

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Wow! This was simply amazing! I love that finally James and Norah are finally back together. Poor Albus though, I feel so sad for him. And oh, I am so worried for Harry and his family now. Who is going to bring his downfall? Ghosh, this keeps getting more and more interesting. I can't wait to read the next chapter! I think you're doing a great job writing this! I am enjoying the plot, your characterisations, and your narrative. Great job!

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Author's Response: Yes, they're finally back together! :D FINALLY. And I know. Poor. Al. :( The future won't be too kind to him either.

I'm so glad you are still into it, and thanks for always being such a faithful reader and reviewer.

Thank you so much! I hope to see you back for the rest of the future chapters. I know I can always count on you. Thanks, AD! :)

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yay for James and Norah! it was a very quick makeup, but what with James' "mood swings" and all I dont think it'll be such smooth sailing for long... and of course albus! poor albus :( would love to see more of him and what he's going through!

Very sinister situation with creepy old macnair! definitely a bit of foreshadowing... how far will they get before Harry stops them? oooOOooo.. xD

yay for quick updates! always appreciated :DD

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WHAT IT HAPPENED AGAIN!!
but this time I copied it ;)

ALBIE ALBIE ALBIE OMG for serious?! Norahs mighty unfaithful in this story, and it's only chapter 6? next she'll be doing the mailman.. or the floo-man.. har har, but really, calm down love! although she has always been a bit of a slave to her hormones, now that you've brought up how bad she was to albie when she wanted James homg I remember that, that was naaasty!

omg I totally forgot that Harry knows about the mysterious itchy wrist! OMG! THE DRAMA!! and of course he's not going to tell James right away, cause that would be the right, sane thing to do, and that's no fun right?! ;DD

lily/scorpius reoww, although lily hasn't make much of appearance in this sequel and tbh I don't remember her much in the first.. Does this mean we'll be seeine more lily? I do love lily, she's probably one of my favourite characters :)) id love to see where you go with that ;))

ever looking forward to the next!

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oh my flying sht, I am so devo.. just wrote the best review ever and it got lost SJDLSKDNJDLS omg brb dying.

OKAY SO let's do this again!

just casually reading through your authors note and I see me! ME! I actually died right then. not really.. I nearly dropped my phone on my face though.. same thing. you my love, are absodoopalutely wonderful and Im so glad my silly rambling reviews mean something to you

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OH MY GOLLY GOSHNESS, SO MUCH LOVE

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good chapter :) the Albus thing confused me a little. but I'm sure you're going somewhere with this!

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Wow, awesome chapter (as always)! This was very interesting, especially to see James and Parker interact! Poor James though, his wrist must be hurting awfully. I still think that Harry didn't do right though, by hiding his scar.

I loved the sweet (and passionate) interaction between James and Norah. Finally we get to see them sort their differences. Its nice to see James happy too. I hope their dinner goes okay.

All in all, this was a nice chapter and I liked reading it. There was progress definitely!

Looking forward to read the next,

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I love this story, another great chapter and you're just teasing us with bits about James' scar! :D
keep writing

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