{reviewid: 2788263, reviewer: 'Renah'}
22nd May 2013:
This story is amazing! I'm obsessed! The only reason I was upset was because there isn't more of it! :)
I usually don't bother keeping tabs on stories, but I'll be waiting for the next chapter!(;
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{reviewid: 2788107, reviewer: 'sidneyy_'}
21st May 2013:
OMG. WRITE. MORE. PLEASE. IT'S ADDICTING.
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{reviewid: 2787362, reviewer: 'potterfan310'}
17th May 2013:
Ohmygod, yay an update!!!
James is just the cutest when he sleeps, aww. I love that he tries to hide under her bed, "Why is there a foot sticking out from under your bed?" Haha, love it.
Aww, James and Vi at the scan = asdfghjkl perfectness. ♥ ♥
seriously they need to date not pretend date. I will be over moon if they date but they have to become a couple!!
Cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xxx
Author's Response: Haha thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I'll try and get the next chapter out soon! :) xx
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{reviewid: 2787293, reviewer: 'ladymontgomery'}
17th May 2013:
I seriously read through of all of this tonight. It was so well written it was kind of addicting. It frustrates me to no end how oblivious Violet is to EVERYTHING and how much people(James included) care about her and want to support her.
I love James's characterization, he's being brave about it but at the same time, his reaction is completely justified. It will certainly be interesting to see how the rest of this story goes.
Little interesting fact, in my James fanfic, he has a daughter(not when he's 17 though), and her name is Violet. So while reading it I kept having to remind myself, "Violet's the love interest in this one!"
Anyways, love the fic!
Author's Response: Wow honestly I can't believe anyone would bother reading through this entire story in one night, good for you! Thank you for the compliments, the truly mean so much to me :) Haha well Violet's a lovely name, it's no wonder we both picked it. Thanks for reviewing! x
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{reviewid: 2787247, reviewer: 'dinosaur'}
16th May 2013:
Ooh how long till they actually start dating? I just so want them together it's mental! Update ASAP please!!!
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{reviewid: 2787203, reviewer: 'Lol'}
16th May 2013:
Amazing love this story!
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{reviewid: 2787200, reviewer: 'LilyLunaPotter17'}
16th May 2013:
YUSSSHH ... FIRST REVIEWER! (Unless someone posts a review while I'm typing this -_-)
Haha, it's hilarious that James *discreetly* hid under Vi's bed, but they found his foot :P
Oooh, James and Vi pretending to date? I wonder where this will go! *coughcough*eatyourheartoutChastity*coughcough*
Aww, baby scan! I want to know if its a boy or a girl! OMG, twins? *gasp* Triplets! OMGOMG octuplets! Probably not, but hey, a girl's got to dream!
Another great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Summer x
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{reviewid: 2786811, reviewer: 'ginnyy'}
14th May 2013:
Awww the best ending ever!!! I love this story so much, please update soon, I can't wait!
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{reviewid: 2786437, reviewer: 'Alice%3A%29'}
12th May 2013:
Please please please hurry up :) I know it's hard to write such a good fanfic quickly, but waiting is driving me insane!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm trying really hard to find the time, I'm so sorry xx
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{reviewid: 2786205, reviewer: 'GnomiDays'}
11th May 2013:
OMG NOO DON'T MAKE THE BABY DIE! I will cry if you do. omg. Just. Don't.
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{reviewid: 2786088, reviewer: 'Lol'}
10th May 2013:
Ah OMG CAN'T WAIT 4 NEXT CHAPETER NOW JAMES AND VI NEED TO GET TOGETHER AND IT WILL B PERECT! LOVE IT SO MUCH
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{reviewid: 2785480, reviewer: 'lilylunalover'}
6th May 2013:
WHAT THE HELL IS TAKING SO LONG UPDATE NOW
Author's Response: I'M JUST FINISHING THE CHAPTER NOW, IT WILL BE UP VERY SOON! :) x
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{reviewid: 2785391, reviewer: 'Madi%20%3A%29'}
6th May 2013:
Hi!!
I absolutely love this chapter!! I waited everyday for it to be updated and you finally did!! Made my day!! Please please update quickly!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!! Love your avid reader! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm almost finished writing the next chapter. I don't want to make any promises, but hopefully I'll have it in the queue by this weekend :) x
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{reviewid: 2785193, reviewer: 'go%20hannah%20abbott'}
5th May 2013:
This is so beautiful! Please write more!
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{reviewid: 2784817, reviewer: 'vettinag'}
2nd May 2013:
I've been checking to see if you've updated, EVERYDAY...
The sheer lack of a 'chapter fifteen' is causing me to slowly fade away in to nothingness...
CURSE THAT EVIL MOM!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm working on chapter fifteen, don't worry! I'm trying my best to juggle writing with schoolwork but unfortunately I'm not a great multitasker :( thank you so much for sticking with my story xo
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{reviewid: 2784335, reviewer: '_huffleclaw_princess_'}
28th April 2013:
more more more more new more more more please please please
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{reviewid: 2783342, reviewer: 'Hope'}
22nd April 2013:
I love this story so much a read it all in a day and keep checking back to see if you have updated please do it soon I want to find out what is going to happen next :)
Author's Response: I'm trying to write the next chapter as fast as I can! Thank you for being so dedicated to my story, it means so much to me :)
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{reviewid: 2783141, reviewer: 'Anon'}
21st April 2013:
Make more. Like, NOW.
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{reviewid: 2782387, reviewer: 'MRasberry'}
17th April 2013:
Really like your story, can't wait for the next chapter!
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{reviewid: 2782232, reviewer: 'queenwombat'}
16th April 2013:
This chapter was absolutely pure perfection. I love this story so UPDATE SOON!!
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{reviewid: 2782054, reviewer: 'abby%20pond'}
15th April 2013:
AW! so cute Great job girl! this is by far my favorite chapter in the story! 5 gazillion and infinity out of 10!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really appreciate it! :D
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{reviewid: 2781972, reviewer: 'Anon'}
15th April 2013:
Is this it? I'm waiting for some action!
Author's Response: I'm sorry you feel that way! I hope you'll give me the benefit of the doubt and stick with my story; but if not, maybe try looking in the action/adventure genre for something more your taste? Thanks for reviewing anyway :) x
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{reviewid: 2781963, reviewer: 'Anon'}
15th April 2013:
Why won't she tell him? I know it must be scary, but it will only be worse if she does tell him! This is entertaining but slow going. You can do better than this! Come on!
Author's Response: Haha read on and you might find out more! ;)
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{reviewid: 2781846, reviewer: 'DayLily'}
14th April 2013:
I love this fanfic! Pls update! I'm going on a trip soon and I need some good reading material!
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{reviewid: 2781634, reviewer: 'emmabear99'}
13th April 2013:
*0* i just died omg best chapter yet
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