I love this! I really hope you continue it! :) Report Review
Ah!! it sooo good! love it! i've totally fallen for bad boy harry ;)
pls, pls keep writing!!
Thank you xxx Report Review
Who did he kill??!!! I must know!
So glad you updated, and I wish for a speedy new chapter. Thanks for sharing :) Report Review
Nooo!! Not a cliffhanger. Don't do this to me!
I was really wanting to see how James and Lily felt about their sons kidnapping, and I'm super glad that I got a glimpse!
Keep up the awesome work, and update quickly :)Author's Response: Glad you enjoy! Report Review
Question time! In the books, Snape turned double agent because of *spoiler spoiler Lily dying spoiler spoiler*. Why is he a double agent here? Is there a secret motive we haven't been informed of yet? I do love a surprise!
Another epic chapter. Everything is really well written and I am def' hooked. So glad I ran across this story!Author's Response: Don't worry Snape's motive will be revealed later in the story but I'm glad you enjoy the story! Report Review
Really interesting story, and original too! I can't wait to find out what happens! I also love the nickname "The Dark Prince". It's really cool.
I DO have one little problem though... All the lines are really far apart, so for a fast reader like me, it's constant scrolling. However, it's nothing big enough to stop me from racing to the next chapter!Author's Response: Sorry about that I'll try to get that fixed, but I'm glad you enjoy it! Report Review
I'm absolutely in love with this story :)Author's Response: Thank you!!! The next chapter should be up very soon! Report Review
The flow could use a little work but I think the plot of the story is really interesting and I am really excited to see where this leads. Report Review
It needs work, but it's alright!
I don't think it flows, and you should work on your action scenes.
I felt that there wasn't enough description going on. :(
Your spelling is awesome, but there were some grammar mistakes in there.
The idea of Harry being adopted by Voldemort and having a brother is brilliant!
You make me want to know if Harry knows his origin, how old Voldy's doing, and what happens next.
Keep writing, I know you can improve with more experience. :) Report Review
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