{reviewid: 2784680, reviewer: 'sarsh'}
1st May 2013:
I really loved this story, completely different to anything else i have read and I just loved it to bits! thank you :)
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I strive hard, especially when it's a plot that's been used before to try and make it new and different. Not always easy, and sometimes I am not sure if I truly succeed but thank you!
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{reviewid: 2784599, reviewer: 'Holly%20Elena'}
30th April 2013:
OMG! Ending made me cry! I was so sad, I cried so much! It was extraordinarily well written the plot was good as well but there wasn't a big enough point of climax (sounds like I'm describing something dirty) but something like really bad happening, you know a big issue, but apart from that I really loved it, could you please do a sequal of them in heaven and having to fight some great evil or something please, just a sequal would be great x
Author's Response: You know, your not the first to suggest a sequel, and I am considering it after I'm done with my current story. It's story 13 I believe, just google my name and eventually and probably this year you will see me post a sequel to I'm a What.
Also, this wasn't a major adventure, angsty piece. It was always just supposed to be about the drama of them finally being together without all the problems and stress hanging over them. I have written a few of those, I just wanted this to be softer, kind of like a very long detailed one-shot. No serious drama or danger.
Thanks for your feedback, it's much appreciated!
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{reviewid: 2783127, reviewer: 'sdfcgvh'}
21st April 2013:
Thank you for this beautiful story, i was depressed before i started reading but now I feel so much better! Thank you Thank you Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you for such a lovely review! If my story cheered you up then that makes me so happy.
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{reviewid: 2781426, reviewer: 'Kylie'}
12th April 2013:
Amazing
This last bit almost had me in tears :)
Author's Response: I balled my eyes out as I wrote it! I hope you enjoyed the story!
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{reviewid: 2771069, reviewer: 'Padfoot%20and%20mooney'}
16th February 2013:
WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO TO MY FEELS!
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{reviewid: 2766688, reviewer: 'watsongirl4f'}
28th January 2013:
omg!! that was beautiful!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I love this story!
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{reviewid: 2761876, reviewer: 'Nefer'}
4th January 2013:
Such a beautiful story!!! you made me cry real bad at the end. Congratulations, you are very talented!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
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{reviewid: 2760680, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
I was a little sad with this chapter honestly:( Arthur and Molly's death was a little over the top too:/ but I did like this story a lot. It could use some work, but it was a nice read. Overall I'd give it a 6 or 7 out of 10.
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it, and thanks for all your reviews. I will try to apply them where I can in future stories!
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{reviewid: 2760679, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
I really like that her name is Emmalyn, and nickname is Emma:) I especially liked this quote, "All he had done was lean over to try to kiss her forehead to show his support as she pushed so hard and what did he get for it you may ask; well his sweet little wife tried to rip his face off! She grabbed on and squeezed his face so hard there were fingernail marks on his face." Hilarious:)
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{reviewid: 2760678, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
You have gotten much better with Dracos snarky- ness as the story has progressed:)
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{reviewid: 2760676, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
I'm too upset about not reading about their wedding. Too mushy! Lol I like how you did it.
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{reviewid: 2760674, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
"Also, I don’t think Mr. Potter or Mr. Weasley would hesitate at all to help me find you, and they are powerfully magical." The powerfully magical part made me laugh:) such a muggle thing to say lol
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{reviewid: 2760672, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
I loved this chapter!:) adding Susan in the beginning was very smart, keeps us on edge:P
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{reviewid: 2760669, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
I'm so excited! Can't wait for next chapter! Fuck a duck and save the matches! Lol I burst out laughing at that!:)
Author's Response: Glad you like that, I love saying it and had a way to add it!
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{reviewid: 2760664, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
I don't think you explained the whole game that they were playing well enough.
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{reviewid: 2760649, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
I like how you said that she might be his mate, I doubt that will happen, but it got, me interested if it had ever happened before. Good chapter:)
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{reviewid: 2760646, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
I really liked the chapter:)
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{reviewid: 2760641, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
You should put your BTW in the story. We don't know unless you tell us.
I like this chapter though. It wouldn't be realistic if it was all sunshine and roses.
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{reviewid: 2760639, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
One major piece of advice is to write out scenes. Don't skip scenes so quick. The drawing room thing is a really big deal and should have been written out more.
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{reviewid: 2760637, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
I think you should add that Draco has always had a thing for Hermione to add to the credibility of how far the relationship is moving.
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{reviewid: 2760618, reviewer: 'Emma_%20granger'}
29th December 2012:
The life debt is a good twist. And I already have the sinking suspicion that he will be a Veela too. :)
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{reviewid: 2760616, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
Best chapter yet! Lol Loved it:) I really like the friendship of Fleur and Hermione, also.
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{reviewid: 2760612, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
Good idea to have Fleur there with her:) I'm excited to see how everyone takes the changes.
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{reviewid: 2760608, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
Im going to review every chapter with my honest opinion, whether its good or bad, because I can see you really want reviews:P On that note, I thought it was a little dramatic that that she vomited:/ maybe a small panic attack would be more realistic, or her feeling like she was going to throw up rather than actually doing it. But besides that, good chapter:)
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{reviewid: 2760601, reviewer: 'Emma_granger'}
29th December 2012:
Hermione turned 18 in the beginning of her seventh year, so she would have almost been 19 during the final battle and would be turning 22 now three and half years later.
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