Amazing! James and Maylin are so perfect together! :-) Please post the next one soon, I can't wait!Author's Response: Thank you! Keep reading and reviewing! x Report Review
nothing to say other than; LOVE IT SO MUCH. uugggh they belong together im freaking ouut... love yaAuthor's Response: Nooo don't freak outtt Report Review
FAVORITE QUOTE OF ALL TIME. " Louis Weasley, a popular, athletic, seventeen year old boy, was obsessed with One Direction." i almost died because i would seriously marry this boy in a heartbeat if this happened. the back and forth of their feels for each other make me sad but i understand the reasons. i would like to slap the mother and i hope Neville and Luna get together 'cause they seem to be in love. im kinda addicted to reading this and will probably be up until the wee hours of the night like all week. Thank you for allowing me to read this amazing story. love you kiddo. 10 out of 10Author's Response: Awh thanks Beatrix Report Review
UUGGGHH MORE CLIFFHANGERS YOU EVIL CHILD. Chase and Louis are so beautiful together. The effects of the fruit tart that Lorcan gave Louis kind of remind me how you act everyday at school. I love the blossoming love of Louis and Chase and i completely despise your evil cliffhangers you beautiful child. so my fave quote starts with "Lysander Scamander is a strange boy..." and ends with "'Dad,what's wrong?'" because i loved every single freaking part of the chapter except for the cliffhanger. haha thank you for allowing me to discover this story with my eyeballs. i love you!Author's Response: Lol WHAT? Why does it remind you of me?? xD I mean, maybe the one that Chase gets... I mean, what? Who said that?
Haha it makes me immensely and ridiculously happy that you enjoy it. I LOVE YOU, MY LITTLE HARLOT CHILD. Report Review
GAHHH LOUIS IS SO IN LOVE. they are so perfect together. i know i say this every review, but i love you and your beautiful writing. i cant stop reading!Author's Response: Oh, you make me blush x) Report Review
UGH I HATE YOU SO MUCH FOR LEAVING CLIFFHANGERS. You evil person. i love you and this story so much. O MY GLOB LOUIS DIDNT GET THE FREAKIN LOVE POTION. I AM GOING TOTES CRAYCRAY. haha love yaAuthor's Response: I'm sorry, I'm addicted to cliffhangers ;_; it's a serious problem Report Review
this is an amazing story. haha I love it so much and I am addicted. thank you for allowing me to read it. I love you.Author's Response: Haha you should feel very privileged. You are literally one of the two people I know in real life that I allowed to read this. Love you Report Review
i enjoy the usage of "it" when describing the first year kid. bahaha this is a funny and beautifully written story that i want to read forever. i love you poppu, and i am determined to write a review for every chapter so brace yourself. but seriously, the story line is awesome and even though i am not a harry potter super-fan, i love this story and can still follow the characters. makes me want to read all night with your crazy cliffhangers. :) i give you 123456789 out of 10.Author's Response: Dude, I am so happy that you noticed the "it" part xD
Oh dear, I must be prepared for more reviews xD
It makes me feel superbombtasticallyhappy and it is totally tubular that you enjoy my story
Now I can just picture you starting to reference this story at school whenever you see fit xD Report Review
i love it so much. never doubt your amazing writing abilities poppu. love you and this story :)Author's Response: Yay :D thank you so much!
AND OMD YOUR NAME I AM DYING FROM HAPPINESS Report Review
I LLLOVVVE YYYOOOU AAANNNDDD TTHIIISSS SSTOOORRRYYY SSO MMUUUCH III MMIIIGGGHHHTTT EEEXXXPLLOOODDDEEE :) love you and you ar an amazing writer POPPUAuthor's Response: I love you too xD thank youuu honeypie Report Review
I my god if I had to quote my favourite moment it would have to be the whole chapter! I love it you make me laugh far to often and I even get the jitters when you are talking about Louis. WEIRD but that was a complement! Love what you have created so far and keep writing! Might steel some of these one liners for in real life; they are just to precious to be ignored. Also James and Maylin are adorable! Love a new follower!Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! It feels amazing to get such great complements from a reader. I'm SO glad you like it, I really love reviews like this so please keep reading and reviewing! x Report Review
Insomnia is so not fun, but on the upside it means you can do a lot of writing and reading :)
I swear to god I nearly started welling up when Rose said she was bleeding, but I'm so glad her and baby Malfoy are ok.
Oh god, way to lighten up the moment Chase. "Thatís a pretty nightgown,"
Oh my god, what!! I had to re-read this sentence at least three times, "Whoís a better kisser, Louis Weasley or Danny Boot? Or is Albus Potter a contender?" - Needless to say each time it made me laugh, just oh god...
The fact they even have a bet, oh god. I can't handle this right now.
Louis and Chase = Awww. ♥ ♥
CHASE IS JUST AWESOME SAUCE, I LOVE HER SO MUCH AND RIGHT NOW SHE REMINDS ME OF ME BECAUSE I AM IN AN INCREDIBLY WEIRD MOOD!! SO YAY!!
James and Maylin, how the hell did I not see that coming??
Can't wait for the next one, Chase just give it up and get with Louis already!!
Soph xx :)Author's Response: I write from experience when I say that insomnia is NOT fun, but I can say that it's resulted in many of the chapters of this story x)
I heard somewhere that it's normal for pregnant women to encounter bleeding around the eight weeks stage, and I thought "Wow, that must be so scary" so I really wanted to write about that.
Lol I'm honestly not sure WHAT inspired me to write Minnie and Poppie as such a crazy pair, but it just kind of worked out that way.
I'm glad you can relate to Chase :D
I can't wait to write the next one! Haha thanks for being such a faithful reader, keep reading and reviewing! x Report Review
This chapter is just one big bag of fluff, which is so good!! ♥
Aww Chase and Albus (Chase and Louis are so much better though) so awkward, bless them. Although I'm glad that Louis is jealous!!
"Donít they know that that kind of activity as a teenager can lead to pregnancy? Leave it to overly hormonal kids like Molly and Ollie not to think about something like that. I know that girls like Rose and me are far too smart for things like that." - Oh god, the irony, although somethings do tend to have a habit of coming back to bite you on the ass so maybe it's just Karma :)
Oh god, I love James' story. Such a cocky twleve year old boy, randomly asking the first girl he sees to kiss. Sorta reminds me something Sirius would do or even James when he was trying to get a kiss of Lily. Haha oh the irony of Maylim being Cho's daughter, pure brilliance. At least it was as awkward as Harry and Cho's though. I think it's sweet they became friends after wards :D
Rose's middle name, if it was Hermione who suggested it, I bet Ron had a fit or it could work out the other way as well.
"I'm buying a pet elephant, Malfoy." - I might have to pop to a bookshop now, I never knew they sold elephants :D Lol
I think Rose/Scorpius is quite cute. Especially since it's sorta got a Romeo/Juliet theme to it where they hate each other but go for it anyway. ♥
"Hugo, the easily distracted kid he is, falls over and starts rolling around in the sand for no apparent reason." - Hugo is one of a kind isn't he :D This sentence reminds me so much of my one friend since it sounds like something she would do :) Then again I get easily distr- Is that a penguin?
Louis and Chase = perfection ♥ Their kiss is just perfect, I mean sun, sand and the beach it's just so romantic. I have to say their is my favourite by far.
"Smiling, I do what I always do. I chase after her." - This just about sums up Louis and Chase I think. It's so sweet and aww.
Nothing major but I spotted mom again, at the start of James' story and in Louis'.
Soph x :DAuthor's Response: Yes, if you couldn't tell, I was in a serious mood for fluff when I wrote this, haha.
Irony is fun x)
Haha I wanted to make James's story kind of sum up his friendship with Maylin, since she's going to be a more prominent character in the story overall.
I thought that, after what happened to Lavender at the battle of Hogwarts, both Ron and Hermione would develop a deep sense of respect for her so I wanted to show that in the best way ^_^
Hugo is kind of based on my cousins... which I suppose is slightly unfortunate, lol.
The basic purpose of all these stories wasn't just to show the character's first kisses, but to represent their relationships with each other. That's why I needed Chase and Louis's to be cute and sweet and fun.
I swear, if it weren't for your cc's I would have a LOT more grammar problems, so for that I thank you and apologize.
So happy you liked it, keep reading and reviewing! x Report Review
"Albus wasn't perfect; he hated cussing and couldn't climb trees for cra"
^haha so deciding not to cuss makes someone imperfect? ;) I suppose that's a very Chase thing to say...:D
"I make a sound of disgust. Don't they know that that kind of activity as a teenager can lead to pregnancy? Leave it to overly hormonal kids like Molly and Ollie not to think about something like that. I know that girls like Rose and me are far too smart for things like that."
^hahaha the irony omg yes.
the thing Scorpius is most afraid of in the whole wide world is dust bunnies hehehe, nice pick Rose
Awww. Chase's first kiss was a bit of a flop, wasn't it? Just highlights how much better a match her and Loulou make :D
Hahaha James's first kiss... kinda random. But it's cool how it mirrors the first Potter/Chang kiss! :D Maylin seems nice.
Of course Scorpius would cry when he gets dirt on his pants.
"Tag," Chase laughs at me, "You're it," she runs off back into the waves.
Smiling, I do what I always do. I chase after her.
^Dude. That is just... so sweet/adorable/perfect. :) Definitely my favourite of these first kisses simply because it was so sweet, even if it didn't really count! :pAuthor's Response: I in no way believe that not cussing makes people imperfect, but it definitely does not make them the perfect love interest for Chase ;)
I really love irony xD
As we all know, Scorpius REALLY hates dirt. haha.
Well, what Chase THINKS was her first kiss was kind of a flop, since technically Louis was her first kiss ^_^
James's first kiss wasn't really anything special, but it was kind of my way of introducing Maylin into the story since she's going to become more of a character in the story.
I'm happy you liked the Louis first kiss story, I myself was quite excited about it!
Keep reading and reviewing! x Report Review
Aww Louis's first kiss was so sweet!Author's Response: Haha isn't he a sweetheart? Keep reading and reviewing! x Report Review
Ah so gd xxx amazing cant wait 4 update they hav 2 get 2gethorAuthor's Response: The next chapter just went up ^_^ Keep reading and reviewing! x Report Review
"beautiful young mattress-tulip" - Luna, what's not to love!! :D
*Grins manically* Me thinks I have and idea who Gabi's father is!!! But who knows, I might be wrong :)
Aww Louis, so much love for him right now. All his feelings for Chase, just awww! Can they get together already! They're so perfect for each other.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Soph x :DAuthor's Response: Hehe, Luna is such an adorable oddball x)
Guessing is half the fun ;D
Louis IS a sweetiepie, isn't he?? haha
Glad you enjoyed it, keep reading and reviewing! :) x Report Review
Im so so impressed with this story. The plot line, while being a classic story, has many original scenes making it very unique. It moves very fast, but it works for the characters in the story. The dialogue is fantastic and hilarious. Definitely one of my new favorites! Keep writing!Author's Response: Wow, thank you! This is a great review. It's awesome that you like the story, keep reading and reviewing! x Report Review
GAAHH WHY'D CHASE HAVE TO REJECT HIM?!
Luvverly story by the way :)Author's Response: Thanks, I'm happy you like it! Keep reading and reviewing! x Report Review
Where's next one? Hurry up!Author's Response: The next one was just validated! (: Report Review
Plz update I hav been waiting for ages! Please don't turn into one of those authors who never finishes stories!! Please updateAuthor's Response: Working on it, I promise I'm not giving up! I'm just trying not to force anything at the moment. I WILL update some time within a week or so, hopefully. Thanks for the review, they always help motivate me. Keep reading! x Report Review
OMG I love it when is the next update? I can't wait to read it I hope that it is soonAuthor's Response: I'm working on the next chapter now ^_^ this one might take a little while because I'm trying to find inspiration, but when I do please keep reading and reviewing! x Report Review
Ah I love your story, it's AMAZING please update. I like the way you hav sort of brought neville and luna together I also think that chase should end up pregnant with Louis child xx so far AMAZINGAuthor's Response: I'm happy you like it!! ^_^ not quite sure she's going to get pregnant with anyone's baby anytime soon, but I LOVE suggestions so thank you!!
Keep reading and reviewing! x Report Review
I very much enjoyed Hannah's letter. She called him... Nevvy. heh. Why would she take all the furniture though hahah oh hannah
Neville deserves someone like Luna! I feel for him! Though I really really like the father/daughter relationship of Neville and Chase :)
oh and it made me laugh how neville took up swearing after the war to keep up the badassitude! :p
Great chapter x
p.s. i enjoyed chase sleeping in louis' bed :3
^that sounded creepy oopsAuthor's Response: Ya... For some reason whenever I think about Hannah as an adult I picture her being a strange hippie... Don't ask me why xD
Personally, I thought that the Neville/Luna relationship was actually a book-to-movie change that the movie got right, it's just pure awkward cuteness, haha. And with two people as cool as Neville and Chase, I figure that they had to have some kind of quirky father-daughter relstionship, lol.
I'm glad you liked it!! Keep reading and reviewing!! x
p.s. sometimes the truth can sound creepy whether it is or not, but that usually doesn't stop me so bravo to you ^_^ Report Review
:-) Hurry up and write the next chapter, I can't wait for it! :-)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the story! Keep reading and reviewing! x Report Review
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