I absolutely LOVE this story! It is very well written and always leaves me wanting more :) Job well done!!! I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter, which I hope you post soon haha Thank you for sharing! Report Review
YAY YOU UPDATED!
OH MY GOD
this was so intense! It was really well written also!
Good job! Im so excited to see what happens next omg
-shelli Report Review
Once again, why must you punish our feels?! I liked all the action in the chapter, even though it was short--it made it seem like a movie because it wasn't drawn out or anything, just pushed right through it. That moment at the end, OMR!!! So good and so how I imagined it would be--it wouldn't be something ridiculously romantic, just a simple touch and hug like they had. You write so well and your cliffhangers are just the best!! I wish I had your talent with description and plot twists! Great job as always, anxiously anticipating the next chapter!!! :D xx Report Review
truly loving this series! cant wait for the next one! keep it coming :)Author's Response: Thank you :) x Report Review
Oh my god! You totally had me on edge there! Seriously! Draco being yaken away was really unexpected! But I knew that there was something going on with that Ace character...you wrote him really well, in my opinion. And...I KNEW IT! SHE HAS FEELINGS FOR DRACO! STILL DOES AND ALWAYS WILL! I hope Draco gets saved soon! And then, Hermione and Draco get back with each other soon! (though obviously not straight away). I see you soon...on your other stories which I had been waiting to read for so long! ^_^Author's Response: Nobody seemed to expect Draco being taken away! Like actually! I thought it would be obvious!
Thank you ^^ Ace would've been charming if he wasn't a serial killer -.-
Thank you again and see you soon xx Report Review
You are finally back with this story! I am so happy, I was so happy when I noticed that this story had been finally updated! ^_^ So...Draco! What the hell did you kiss Hermione for?! He shouldn't have done that, we all know that he has feelings for her but that was really uncalled for!!! Hmmm...I am wondering about this Ace character...I dk why...but I find him interesting
..looking forwards to the next chapter! (: Report Review
THAT WAS SO GOOD
and so emotional
and everything was so well written
that was so dramatic
-ShelliAuthor's Response: Thank you :DD
I am going to go ahead and read all your updates now ahaha, i finally found time :') Report Review
Well darn, I knew it would be someone that wasn't family even though I said it would be! Now it makes more sense though! It was a very intense chapter and seems to follow the trend of many mystery/dramatic/action-packed movies/tv shows, etc! :D So I really want to know what happens next!! So freaking good, AS ALWAYS!! :) xxAuthor's Response: I actually get inspires from so many shows and movies, its mad :P Half the stuff i sit and write are inspired.
Thank you sooo much :') xx Report Review
OHMERLINWHATISGOINGON??? This can't be happening, it can't! I want to say that you won't make anything happen to our darling Draco but judging by EHFAR's ending, I can't be certain. I hope Hermione doesn't break down and rather manages to brave through it all and save him. Will it be that their separation will only bring them closer? I hate Ace sosososososo much, you better kill him off. And you just love "Sectumsempra", don't you? Anyway, great chapter and can't wait for the next one :)Author's Response: Hahahaha everybody still doubts my endings because of EHFAR dayummm. You'll get to know everything in the next chapter and yes I do love Sectumsempra haha :)
Thank you so much xx Report Review
I have just read this whole story after coming across the previous one. Loved it! you have me hooked! really can not wait to read the next chapter! Author's Response: Thank you so much :D Ill be updating asap! (: xx Report Review
Finally you're back!!! I missed this story. Ah I'm so excited :)Author's Response: Haha yes i am (: xx Report Review
:O that cliffhanger. You just love doing that to us, don't you? :P that said, I love this chapter. We finally see more action, and everything seems to be leaning towards the pace of EHFAR again. I can't believe that Draco did that, and I feel so bad for Hermione because of all her conflicted feelings. I think Ron might have been the one... Though I don't want it to. Oh, also, I forgot to mention that I love all the new pairing hints (Theo and Pansy, Irene and Blaise). Loved it, can't wait for more! :)Author's Response: Yes, I do actually haha :P
Thank you so much ^^ Yes, it shall start connecting back with EHFAR now!
Yusss I want the new ships to be brilliant ^^
Thank you again xx Report Review
Omg that was great!!! And ur finally back to this story ;) yay haha this is shelli but I'm on my sisters iPod bc I'm touring colleges:/
This was great!Author's Response: Thank you ^^
Oooh I need to respond to you mail, dammit, I'm so sorry :S
I loved this chapter! I can't wait for an update!Author's Response: Thank you so much xx Report Review
NO NO NO NO NONONONONO! I really hope Rose is dead, or RON! NO! OR will it be Hermione he's going to kill?!?! This cliffhanger is going to be the death of me, I swear! (hehe, see what I did there? It's punny (; ). Anyway, fantastic job! I'm excited for the next chapter and to see how Hermione deals with Malfoy coming on so strongly, if he does it again, and what that'll do to her and Ron's relationship. Phenomenal chapter!! Loved it, excited for the next update! :) xxAuthor's Response: HAHAHA YOU HOPE ROSE IS DEAD? WELL thats something i have not heard before although i really don't like her either :P
Nice pun, quite awesome ^^
Thank you so so much :) xx Report Review
I loved the entire chapter it truly is
amazing Can't wait for more xAuthor's Response: Thank you so much :) x Report Review
I've read several of your stuff and I love it all! Can't wait for an update!Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Report Review
Omg this is great you have to keep going!Author's Response: Thank you so much, I will be doing so soon- it's kind of on hiatus right now! x Report Review
Ooh I really loved the format of this chapter with all the different scenes with different people. Rose and Scorpius... Sigh. I like their pairing, but I guess this had to happen, huh? The Lysander-Stacey thing is so cute and I LOVE Hugo. Eek! The case! Don't make anything happen to Hermione, I beg of you!!! Loved this chapter, can't wait for more, and stay amazing!Author's Response: Thank you so much :') Good, I'm going to develop Hugo then :D I only started him because people began asking about him haha
Let's see ;) Thank you again x Report Review
Ahh, hello again! I liked the refreshing of everyone's storylines, I think it helps us all remember what's been going on and what will eventually happen to bring them all together. :) I want to know what happens to Rowen!!! And if anything will happen between Blaise and Hayley? And/or Theo and Hayley? Ohh, I don't know! You give us just the smallest of hints that may or may not give us the right hunches! It's frustrating but also a sign of exceptional writing. Phenomenal chapter! :) xxAuthor's Response: Hellooo (:
YES I HOPED SOMEBODY WOULD COMMENT ON THE SHIPS HAHA YESSS. Im going to develop those ships and more around them so madly :D
Hahah thank you. :) x Report Review
Aah! Gosh it was going so good so so so good and then bam right there that final paragraph ah! You made tears come to my eyes FeltonLewis tears! And I never cry ! You should be proud I really like what you are doing to the story and can't wait to read more !Author's Response: Thank you :D Omgg haha yesss I'm proud!
Thank you again and see you in the next chapter x Report Review
That was so goood!!! The last part with hugo was so sad and amazingly written!
Sorry I havnt been on my email for a while! I promise ill check it soon! Update TOR soon tho!!! :) good job
-shelliAuthor's Response: Thank youuu (: no problem, don't worry about it. I will! :) x Report Review
Thank you so much for finally updating! ^_^ I absolutely love this story! It had so many different stories joined together so perfectly. I don't know what else to say...all the ships that you have put into this story are so good! ^_^ I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon! :DAuthor's Response: Thank youu (:
I love all the ships the most haha ^^
See you soon! x Report Review
I've been waiting for this chapter for so long! Thank you so much for finally updating it. :)
I can't believe that Draco is paying for Irene. That's so sweet of him. I really hope the Dramione escalates. They are completely made for each other. Why can't they see that?! It's so frustrating! Anyways, it's good that Drake is finally giving Stacey's friendship with Lysander a chance.
Update soon! LOVED THIS CHAPTER! ^_^Author's Response: thank you so much (: It's so DRACO, is it not? :P
It shall soon enough! Oh there shall be more Drake/ Stacey/ Lysander very soon!
thank you xx Report Review
Amazing chapter! One or two things though, in the Herbology scene, it would probably be better to address Neville as Professor Longbottom. I thought he was a student for a bit. And what happened to Hugo? Maybe my memory is just failing me, but has he been in this story so far? I remember I liked him in EHFAR. Theo... I don't see anything wrong with putting him in, I quite like him already. And I feel so bad for Irene! Please let Rowen be okay... I loved the whole chapter, keep at it :)Author's Response: thank youuu (: Yes, I think I might change that- I was getting a bit confused with what to call him.
He shall enter soon with more about Troy (: Thank you for reminding me tho haha
Im going to do my best working with Theo!
thank you so much xx Report Review
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