Need more. Please update this story is just too awesome also if don't get many reviews it is probably because no one wants to interfere with you writing because it perfect the way it is and they don't want to destroy the plot line also I have a question, I've been thinking of writing a fanfiction but I don't know how to start it have you got any tips? Or suggestions on how I could start its not for harry potter but if I were to describe who it would be about the relationship I think is closest to my idea would be a dramione how it's a forbidden love kinda thing anyway if you have any tips or suggestions on how to start it I would be so very grateful :) a fan since the beginning XD

Author's Response: thank you! next chapter will be ASAP but im trying to get everything done and im about to go in to my mid year exams!!!
to start a story I would suggest writing down the plot line and even writing parts of the story that you know you want and go from there. I found starting my stories extremely hard to start but they do work once you've got a solid story line and some of your main parts of the story it will come to you! I've already wrote my epilogue but not from now on!! But i do have a story line. Did I help?? I hope so :)
Thank you!!

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Oh my god oh my god oh my god EXCITEMENT! It would be perfect it was a boy and a girl so both Mae and James got what they wanted and awww! Just so much awwwing in that chapter! But then there's that luncheon thing- can't wait for that! So update, because that cliffhanger is practically choking me!

Author's Response: thank you for your review! next chapter is coming along slowly as I have to write both new chapters for my two other stories, Passion and Revenge, then the next Catching James Potter chapter! Good thing is I know whats going to happen and some chapters are almost finished! xx

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WHY? Must you do this I'm a big fan of this story and although I love the suspense it is killing me not knowing what's going to happen or read it. I have read this story around 5 times and I need to know what happens. Also how often do you post usually because if its about once or twice every 2 months ill check once a month because right now i check once to twice a week so please tell me?? Also in how many chapters will there friends be told (the ones that aren't apart of the wotters??)???
A big fan keep up the work and if you ever get a bit concious because no one reviews don't get worried because they are probably like me and are waiting for the next chapter and see no point in telling you how amazing this story is (but I felt the need to tell you (: ) so please post soon :)

Author's Response: thank you for your review! i really appreciated it! I actually dont know how often I update as I am just trying to get it written as quickly as possible along with my other stories. School is also quite crazy at the moment, but its holidays so I'll try to speed it up! :) I'm thinking in about 2-3 chapter times the other friends will be told! Next chapter to come soon! xx

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Omg I can just imagine on twin being a bit and the other a girl :) anyway can you please continue with catching James potter it is my FAVORITE next generation story :) can't wait for next chapter :) love ya work xoxo

Author's Response: thank you for your review! i am definetly continuing with this story, i have written the rest of the story in my head and it about to go down on paper! next chapter up soon!
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Hey, I love your story!! It was one of the first fan fictions I read so please update soon!:)

Author's Response: thank you so much for your review! i am so happy that I was one of your first fan fics and that you loved it! Next chapter is waiting validation :)

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Epic story, seriously. Love it.

Author's Response: thank you! next chapter is almost finished and going to be posted soon.
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hey! when are you going to pput up i chapter?!?! i need this story its really good!!

Author's Response: next chapter to come almost straight after the next chapter of Passion, so very soon!
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heyy,
was I the only one to enter the comp?? Wow
Great chapter and i hope you update soon.
Lyss xxoo
10/10

Author's Response: yes you were! i've got so many ideas for your fabulous quote already! update coming soon and thank you for your review! x


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hury up and write 10 more chapters and theeen i'll give you a proper review ;)

Author's Response: theres atleast ten more chapters to this story so keep reading and i can't wait to read this review! thank you for your review! x


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yay Dom and Mae made up finally! and now James' cousins and siblings know about Mae being pregnant. can't wait to read the next chapter!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I was so happy to write this chapter! I was planning to have mae and dom make up a lot later, but this seemed to work! next chapter coming soon and thank you for your review!
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Quote competition
Mae (or anyone else who will fit)
"Calm your farm...sheesh"

Heyy Griffindorlion15,
purlease update soon!!
i really like this story!!
update revenge soon!!
read my story and review please!!
Yours Truly,
Lyss xoxo
10/10

Author's Response: thank you for your entry!! both to updated soon! almost finished writing Catching James Potter and then Revenge to come! xx

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wow! this is turning into something very interesting! Rose and Scorpius now know about Mae's pregnancy, Ryan broke up with Dom and I'm loving reading the bits of James/Mae! they're a great pairing and I can't wait to read the next chapter!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: thank you! next chapter up soon!

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Good start, was looking for another next generation fic to read and with this promising start I know I'm going to have a lot of fun reading your story ~Zyii

Author's Response: thank you for your review!
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Its really good and I need more

Author's Response: more to come!

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I just read this whole story in one go. I really like it. At first it was a little too similar to Mean Girls, but then Freddie cheated and everything changed for me. I got really into it and excited about the plot.

A couple of inconsistencies that I noticed or maybe just misread. Did Mae have auburn hair in the beginning and then all of a sudden, her hair was blonde? Also, I think during the press conference, James said that he was taking the basic NEWTs to be a Auror, but every other time he says he wants to be a Healer if quiddich didn't work out.

I'm excited for the next update.

Author's Response: she dyed her hair blonde, and the press conference was a mistake! I am about to go through some editing!
next chapter awaiting validation.
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i have a question why was it called gone and please post next chapter im a huge fan xoxo :) ily your stories :)

Author's Response: this chapter was called gone meaning tired as when you are tired you are gone, if you get what I mean. It is kind of like a matter of speech. next chapter awaiting validation!
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Have you considered finishing this as a book or novella and sending it to J.K.Rowling and asking for her permission to publish this as a book because this is really good and if she said yes i would buy this book and read it over and over because you are an amazing writer and one day you will be famous also i love the plot :)

Author's Response: thank you! I have never thought of that! I actually do plan on becoming an author one day! xxx

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Oh Lol, tell me about it. I was like, so dang focused on every single chapter that I decided to write up on the final one. And wow, just, wow. Didn`t think they would go as far as that, but I just so so so LOVE this story! It`s sweet and cute, and all passionate. I hope Dom and Mae would be bestfriends again, SO VERY SOON.. I missed them having girl time.
Oh, and there`s a part that I coun`t really get myself to stop laughing. It was when Lily blurted out that mini-James and James had the same head size. LOL. That was just SO random and hilarious to come out of Lily Potter. I love that girl!


Anyways, please update soon! i would like to read more of this! :)


-Failed_and_Forgotten

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Next chapter up ASAP, almost finished writing it, but I do have exams soon!
I love Lily as well!
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This is a great chapter! I love this story! Please update soon!

Author's Response: updating soon!
thank you for your review!
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aww I love reading the moments between James and Mae! and Mae and Dom's friendship is slowly being repared! though I can't wait to see when they find out if they're having a boy or a girl!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: all to be revealed soon!
updating soon!
thank you for your review!
xxx

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aww I see some regret on Dom's part! I bet that she's regretting how she acted towards Mae's pregancy but I can't wait to see them being best friends again!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

P.S: if you want me to make you a banner, check out my hpff page. there you'll find my TDA username. ^_^

Author's Response: Dom's feelings will be shown a lot more soon!
thank your for your review and will update soon?

ps. TDA username? sorry, im so clueless with this site!!
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I hate Alessandria now! why did she and Justine had to hurt Mae and mini James? this is being very interesting so far and I hope that Dom will realise that she and Mae have to talk again. going to read next chapter now!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Alessandria and Justine are really rude now, it will be revealed soon!
More Dom/ Mae to come!
thank you for your review!
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Hey! Great chapter again! I loved seeing James' point of view in this chapter because I never know what is going on in that kid's head! Anyway please update soon!

Author's Response: there will be more James P.O.V!!
updating soon!
thanks for your review!
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Hey! Good chapter! Mae went a little crazy there during the fight. And James was crazy too. I mean carrying his pregnant girlfriend while sprinting up to the hospital wing. He must be very fit. Anyway great chapter and please update soon!
Becky

Author's Response: they went bit crazy! James is very fit, but also Mae is quite fit and she's only seven weeks so it makes it easier for James.
thank you for your review and the next chapter will be up soon!
xxx

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Hi, I love this chapter, it's so great.
From Me (Sarah)

Author's Response: thank you for your review!
next chapter out soon!
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