You had me sobbing by the end of this. A beautiful story inspired by a beautiful song.
Liana :) xx

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Wow this is really moving, I'm crying!

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I had an idiotic grin on my face as I read the beginning and the middle. I had tears running down my face as I read the end. No other story I've read on this site has affected me so much. I love your work. Thank you.

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Wow this story is amazing! So sad at the end and I was crying :'( your an AMAZING writer. Please keep writing James/Lily fanfics because I love reading them and 'Jily' is my OTP! Thanks for writing this you made my day xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Jily is my absolute favorite and I'm glad you enjoy my writing! Thanks for reviewing. YOU made MY day :)

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Wow that was really good. I loved the ending, I almost cried. I like reading the cute things couples do when they are alone.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I think this may be my favorite thing I've ever written.

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Woo-ow that was intense .
I loved it .

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That was amazingly written... Highly commendable... i give you a 10/10...

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Ahhh... One of the bestest Lily/James fanfics I have ever read.Surpassed only by stories written by Saval/dream_BIG (I'm sure you've heard of her)... Amazing and awe-inspiring. Simultaneously smile-inducing, heart-breaking, and lovely...an award deserving story...
Well, its seems i've run out of newspaper review style comments, but you will never run out of your fantastic writing capabilities. This is so different from your regular fanfics, and yet soo, soo similar. I guess because they've all been authoured by that stupendous mind of yours. :)
Keep up the awesome work,
Lots of love and cheer,
-Dizzy.

Author's Response: Of course I've heard of Saval! She's written about half of the stories on my favorites list! And the fact that you think only she is better than me... HUGE compliment! I'd never think I was even close to dream_BIG. She's my hero.

You're always so lovely. Your reviews just make me smile :) I always look forward to them. Thanks once again!

-Laura

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Awww. This made me cry it was so touching. Great job. :)

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Why tears. I'm at home alone and when I read the word "Halloween" is shouted "NO" outloud.

Excellent writing. The way that there is no dialogue but observations work very well.

Author's Response: Thank you :) It was a lot of fun to write and very different from what I normally do. I'm glad you liked it!

-Laura

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This was gorgeous, I seriously loved it. It was so simple, yet so effective. The last two paragraphs brought me close to tears! Very endearing. :)

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I'm not usually into one-shot, but I love James and Lily as a pairing so I thought I'd try this.
I would have liked to hear more about there arguing, but I get that this was supposed to be about their love. I nearly cried at the end - it was so sweet

Author's Response: Thank you! I considered adding the arguments, but in the end decided not to. I may go back and change it, though. I'm not quite sure. Thanks for reviewing.

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Naww cute :) Sad reading about their deaths though. 10/10

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