Oh no, this isn't good. This is very very bad. Of course crap had to hit the ceiling! Why wouldn't it hit the ceiling! I fear for Scorpius's life, Rose is probably going to kill Scorpius and if not that Ron will do the job for her (he'll volunteer).
Oh no, I cannot think of any other way to explain this except that's it's bad. WHAT WAS SCORPIUS THINKING! Report Review
Oh please tell me you're going to write a sequel to this story. Let them return to Hogwarts for their final year - as a couple. Please (begging on bended knees here). Report Review
thank you for her not being his girlfriend! but now... what? he is leaving? i am very curious. tks for sharing your story. Report Review
Please put up a new chapter!!! I literally read this in the space of about 3 hours, and I absolutely love it!!! Keep writing xoxo
~Squig Report Review
That was all so sweet. I loved Rose braving the storm and facing her fears! And I'm not really even that mad at Scorpius anymore...which is unusual for me, because I hate the whole cheating business. But I've forgiven him. It made a huge difference that he wasn't actually serious with Danielle and I'm really happy about that. And he clearly cares about a Rose a lot and plans to do right by both girls. I like how he said nothing would come of Danielle even if Rose hit him and left mad. So I've forgiven him for lying to Rose. We are all flawed and make mistakes. I think this is one he's unlikely to repeat :)
All the painting in this chapter was great too! Rose and Ron's banter was adorable and I like seeing Rose have these sort of sudden break throughs where she figures out what do and it's just like a rush of creativity. I can relate to that ;) Scorpius giving Rose his painting was really romantic, too. He sort of said he would like for them to be together for a while when he gave it to her and I love him for that.
I don't want this story to end! It's too sweet and romantic and wonderful. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter so please update soon! :) Report Review
AH the feels!!! This is amazing - in fact, it's incredibly, fantastically, epically amazing. It's beautifully written, as always, and crafted with spine-tingling suspense. I love your writing style, humour, characterisation, plot...everything!! I love this story so much that it hurts and I can't wait for it to be completed so that I can read it in its entirety over and over and over again.
You have no idea how many times throughout this story I've reached the end of a chapter like this and thought 'Wow this chapter is definitely my favourite!', only to be completely amazed by the next chapter you upload, and the next, and the next...
You have an unbelievable talent for writing. I can't possibly describe how much I love all of your fics, and this one in particular, but I just wanted to say thank you for updating so promptly and best of luck with the original novel I believe you're writing at the moment :)
Whenever you update one of your stories, I feel as though you've shared a precious gift with me and my day just becomes a whole lot better. Thanks for everything :)
xx Report Review
Please please please please please please please please please please update soon!! I really love this story and I want the next chapter!! I love this and the paintings sound amazing!! Report Review
I freaking love this story!
I love the way you write Scorpius; it's different and really refreshing.
I can relate to this story on a couple different levels. My sister is a painter, and I feel that you have described Rose's love for it, her artistic eye, and even her frustrations with her work incredibly well and very realistically. Well done.
I also happen to live in the Smoky Mountains. There's a place about fifteen minutes from my house that I can imagine this happening at, except that the houses are all cabins decorated with fishing and hunting gear-LOL. But seriously, great descriptions! I feel at home reading this!
You do an awesome job giving us just enough predictability with a ton of plot twists and cliffhangers!
I lalalalove this story, and I look forward to reading more as you update! This is definitely going in my favorites! :)
--Kate/RP Report Review
Loved this :) bit annoyed at Scorpy and I kinda feel sorry for Danielle ... Ahhh well :) cant wait for more!!! Btw I began your story last night and statyed up tl 3 to finish it ... Lok what your story has done to me .( my eyes are now very tired) LOL Report Review
Oh, please update asap! I'm into this story now and must, must know what happens with them! What happens with Scorp's dad? What does Ron say when Rose gets home? What do they do when they're both home again? Great job! Report Review
omg i love love love this story it's so good update soon Report Review
Hi! I have been reading this ever since you started writing it! This story is amazing, no lie! I have read so many ScoRose fan fictions but this one is definitely the best! I am so excited to read the next chapter! Please please PLEASE update soon! Report Review
Loved it! So glad they're finally together! Report Review
that was a nice chapter.tnx Report Review
I loved Rose's development with her running to Scorpius's during the thunderstorm! I am also very happy that Rose and Scorpius have settled everything. There were also a ton of funny/cute quotes in the chapter. Great job! I am excited for their date! Report Review
This is such perfection. I love how Rose faced her fears for him, and I LOVED the Darcy reference because it is SO true! :) Awesome chapter :) Report Review
Love it. This has to be one of the best stories I've read. Report Review
:D This made my day. No joke. Keep going! It's amazing! Report Review
*squealing like the deranged fan girl that i am*
Scorpius's letter was so sweet! ^.^ Especially the last, i just died of all feelings right there! I'm so glad Rose forgave him. It would have been rather unnecessary if she dragged out his mistake for too long!
Scorpius painted! I think you're trying to kill me all the romance-y stuff in the story! Funny part is, i don't mind at all! Keep those feels coming! :D
I can't wait to see how their date goes! Update soon! :) Report Review
It's really too bad Scorpius has a girlfriend at home :( he and Rose have bad some really sweet moments, and while that fact doesn't ruin them, it does sort of taint them, you know? Because they were intimate moments where they were telling each other their secrets and now we know he wasn't as honest and open as we thought he was. Also, I don't think there's any excuse for him cheating on his girlfriend. It would've been lame to break up with her in a letter, but he could have done it. Or just not kissed Rose.
I'm really hoping his letter is just about their relationship and Danielle, and not about his mom. I really want his mongo end up okay in the end. Either recovering or stable or something. Not dead. That may be a vain hope, as I'm sure you e ready decided what you want to do on that front, but I don't want her to die for several reasons. (One of them being that I'm simply not all that fond of reading about death. Since it's in like 90% of the books I've read. It's a major theme, and can be very interesting, but I don't really care for it.)
Despite the Danielle bit, Scorpius's journal was pretty sweet. I liked what was written about Rose in it. I'm so not very surprised that he keeps a journal, since he seems like a very sensitive guy.
I'm also a bit disappointed Rose didn't meet Mrs. Malfoy because I want to learn more about her character. Hopefully we'll see her later on?
And Ron is fast becoming my favorite character. He's just awesome. Update soon! Report Review
I love that Rose slapped Scorpius! It was great! I also really like that we are getting to see Ron, Hermione, and Hugo more. I can't wait to see what happens next! Report Review
You are such a good writer! Please update soon! I cant wait any longer! This is by far, the best fan-fiction I've ever read!! Keep up the good work! Report Review
I know you're writing as fast as you can but please UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I swear sometimes I check this site just to see if this story has been updated. I love it! Report Review
I'm absolutely in love with this story... I usually don't read Rose and Scorpius fics for some odd reason, but you just have me HOOKED!
I love Rose and her artsyness, and I also love Scorpius and his... Scorpiusness... Look at all these words I'm making up :P
It's okay for me to hate Danielle right? Even though she's pretty oblivious about Rose, I just feel so bad for her... But I guess it really is Scorpius's fault, as much as I so love him :(
ROSE JUST HAS TO FORGIVE SCORPIUS! SHE JUST HAS TO! THEY'RE JUST PERFECT! minus the lying bit...
Overall... I love your story :)
~Lily Report Review
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