Firstly, I love the title! It made me laugh and secondly I'd lime to thank you for favoriting me as an author! That really shocked me that someone likes my writing that much! So thanks a billion and a half miniature kayaks for doing that!
I decided to check out your stories and so far, I really like it! I love how Scorpius just knows her. It's really deep and emotion evoking! It's very different from the style that I write so it's refreshing to read stories that are so profound compared to whatever my nonsense is classified as Hahah. Anyways, I really think you should keep writing! I wound definitely read this if you did!! Report Review
You're secretly me a cat? Me too! Let's secretly be kitties together! Haha, your prologue title made me laugh which won you points right off the bat.
Great story! It was very emotional and powerful and I almost wanted to cry for Rose by the end of the chapter. Everything she thought and felt was portrayed so well!
You might want to try adding spaces between the paragraphs because that makes it a little easier to read on the computer, but that's just a little formatting note.
I hope you do end up continuing this because it's a great story! I want to see what else happens between her and Scorpius. It's a little unnerving that he knows all those things about her, but also kind of sweet. I want to see how their friendship/relationship forms. =) Report Review
Impressive. How cute ... Scorpius actually knows how she sounds like, when she's angry, when she's lying! I feel sorry for Rose, though. And you kinda made Harry's sons and daughter sound like sluts and stuff. And Rose's brother sounds like a miniature version of Percy. Report Review
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