Another well written Chap. Only CC i have tabel. I think ya ment table ;) Keep on writng though- you are very good at it.

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Ah! Very beautiful job once again! I think there was one spot that present tense rather then the past as the rest of it was... at least I think so? Maybe I should use my constant viggalence (prolly spelled wrong..) a tad more Costistantly ;)

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Ahh! Good chapter and bravo with the foreshadowing... I found a few typos since my non-existant OCD creeped up;
1. I found a way to make my IPod run off at magic instead of magic so I could bring it with me.
2.Harry is fine but he is probably we that stupid arse Weasly. It's your turn to be quite on things you don't understand," I seethe. (I think you where going for With and Quiet?)
Other then that Lovely job.. Sorry for the CC..

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Hello again. I have to disagree it wasn't much of a boring chapter- meerly a filler for your next brillant idea :)

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So sorry dear I have no intentions of injuring it... That said I truely did Enjoyed it :) Sorry for that nit pick. Was a great chapter and I plan on reading the rest..

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this is really good, you should keeep on writing,
ur a really good author =D

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I play bagpipes too!!

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Hey I've been following this story from when it started and I really liked it but I wasn't sure where the plot was going after this. Now I'm super excited tho. Telling the story through Lucius pov was an interesting idea and it's cool we get insight into that keep writing :)

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Another really good chapter please find time to carry on writing this story.

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Wow this is getting really good... I would offer to help but I
seriously can't write stories so sorry :(... I hope you find
someone to help you cuz this story is amazing X

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Hey! If you remember me, I reviewed earlier on in your story and chided you about your grammar and spelling. I must say it's gotten much better. And since you say you need help, if you don't have a beta reader already, I'm interested! You can get back to me at redrubyhart"at"gmail"dot"com. (oh and very interesting chapter by the way!)

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this is amazing pleaseee try to keep writing :)

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im really enjoying this one please post more (:

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WHAT HAPPENS NEXT ?!

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The story is brilliant! Absolutly fantastic! I really want to read much much more! But would it kill you to proof read your stuff before you post it?

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is there any more because i am enjoying it and i hate being left in suspence

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This is really good! :D But at one point you mix up your 1st and 3rd person but on the whole its brilliant!

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Oh I hope they find Harry. Update soon!

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Thanks for updateing and another wonderful chapter

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Things are getting REALLY interesting now.
Love this story please update soon

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TENSION!!! CLIFF HANGER! All the worst things for the end of a chapter!! :p well done it was a nice book!! I hope you write more

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awww i really like how seamus was there for mia!!

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Oh wow. I did not expect that! SEAMUS?!?! Haha well update soon!!! xD

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:'( so i'm really confused so is this letter saying that she cannot be Mia Zabini, but is she?

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Awww draco came and comforted her . i think:/ anyway another great chapter upload soon.

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