Okay I love your story, please update soon.
I love the new banner, how did you get it?Author's Response: haha of course! I'm currently working on the next update. and the new banner is courtesy of the wonderful abendrot at The Dark Arts Forums Report Review
Amazing absolutely amazing for the whole thing! Please write more!? I love it so much! xAuthor's Response: haha yes, the next update is in progress! thank you so much for the wonderful review (: Report Review
Such a mess !! Asdfghjkl there were so many lies and problems unspoken !! Bella shut herself in a shelf, James is to freak out, Ethan... Finally Ethan!!
I liked more the other banner, but this is still cool, and YES the wait was to long!!!Author's Response: This is a huge mess; all of them need better communication, and Bella needs to realize she needs to talk to the others! Hehe, yes, Ethan is finally coming back after him being alone for a while.
I'm glad to hear you liked the other banner (: I really liked that one too haha
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More more more more!Author's Response: hehe thanks for reviewing! the next chapter is in progress (: Report Review
YES, go Lucy!
I love that she's the one who is going to get them talking again. Hopefully.
OHMYGOD! PUDDLEMERE UNITED! THEY'RE GOING TO BE QUIDDITCH FAMOUS!!! :D
I like they're plan a lot. I just hope Bella talks to James soon. She has too, they're perfect for each other.
Jella ♥ ♥
P.s One sentence didn't sound right, "howlers is the least" - I'm not sure if it's just me but perhaps change 'is' to 'are'Author's Response: haha, well, Lucy is the most dramatic. I considered Rose because she can seem far more diplomatic but it's Lucy who is more likely to have a dramatic explosion xD
YES! Puddlemere United!! I've always loved them after GoF when Oliver started playing for them loll
oohh, yes you're right. I'll change that. Thanks for pointing that out! (:
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FUCKING BITCHES. WHAT THE ACTUAL HELL? WHO DO THEY THINK THEY ARE? STUPID STUPID STUPID BINTS. I AM SO MAD RIGHT NOW (not at you deary, Ruby and Sapphire) DON'T THEY KNOW HOW MUCH DAMAGE THEY'VE FREAKING DONE? I HATE THEM SO MUCH RIGHT NOW.
Please update soon, I really really really need to see what happens next.
OH MY FREAKING MERLIN UGH!!!
xxAuthor's Response: haha careful xD reviews have to be 12+ but I understand your frustration. the next chapter is in the queue already. Ruby and Sapphire have done quite the damage, I'd say. thanks for reviewing (: Report Review
Yay!! I was right for saying a girl !! ♥ ♥
"Naming his child James Potter the Third" - Haha, I'm in agreement with Lucy, I deffinetly could see James doing that :)
Hating on Sapphire for her betrayal, she's one evil cow as is Ruby.
I loved the begining, so happy and cute and then end turned slightly darkish what with the evil witches plotting. As much as I don't like the Woodley and Smith, it was great to read even if they did bash the Weasleys and Potters. :(
LOVE IT AND CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! I'm dying to see everyone's reactions, especially James' since he didn't seem to be in the hall.
I'm wondering were James and Ethan possibly making up friends considering both of them were absent or was that pure coicidence??
This may seem utterly random but my theory is that Ethan could possibly be in love with James, that's why he went mental about Bella being pregnant. And with both of them absent from the great hall, maybe they were making up or James was trying to explain things. ;D
Sending big hugs to Bella since she needs them xx
Soph xx :DAuthor's Response: you're right! I wanted James and Bella's child to defy all stereotypes lol
I do feel like somewhere down the lines though, that James Potter the Third is going to happen xD
I always imagined that it would be hard for some to accept the fame that Weasleys and Potters would have in the next generation because there are always people like that. Im glad you liked it
Mm!! Good prediction; but you'll have to wait and see why James was missing in action xD Ethan is coming up though haha so watch out for that!
thanks for reviewing!! (:
Asdfghjkl OMG poor Bella!! This history is to good to be left hanging like this, plis update soon!! Need to see their reactions, and her parents .-. ... Ethan !! How are they gonna pass throug that ?!Author's Response: yes, right? Bella is certainly going to have a tough time with this. her parents still love her, no matter what. but this will take on quite a strain upon everyone. Ethan... you'll see (:
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This was an enjoyable chapter... not much to think about but kind of relaxing to read.
After your A/N I'm quite excited and a little apprehensive about the next chapter.
Thank you for a fast update and good luck with the next one!Author's Response: haha we definitely needed a fluffy break from what's been happening so far. im glad that you're pumped up for the next chapter! it'll be QUITE interesting (;
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LOoOoOoOVED ITtTtT! THAT WAS BLOODY HILARIOUS! GREAT! Now all you need to do is post the next chapter :DAuthor's Response: LOL i'm glad that you found that funny! today and tonight has been and will be so busy but tomorrow, the new chapter will go in the queue! Report Review
Whoo another update :D
Omg, awkward. Can't believe Bella fancied Louis!!! and James' first impression of Bella, lol :)
The last little bit, cuteness overload. James is so so sweet xxx I want him.
I LOVE the valentines game, it was a great way to know more about each of them especially Jella ♥♥
Soph xxxAuthor's Response: haha the queue was really fast.
YEAH!! well, Louis is quite handsome; young Bella of course was easily seduced by his good looks LOL
im glad that you liked the Valentines' game! it definitely is a good way to get to know each other. thanks for your review! (: Report Review
I would most defiantly want to be Louis in this chapter... This was very funny and made me laugh quite hard for a good part of it. Nice writing! Update soon!Author's Response: LOL glad that you get a kick out of what Louis is doing. im glad that it made you laugh! Thank you so much! (: Report Review
This is so cute! i thought they might have known more stuff about each other though! please make ethan be their friends again! PLEASE! and ethan and lucy are meant to be together, k?;)Author's Response: haha well, goes to show that Bella and James still have some ways to go in learning more about each other! Oh, Ethan will come around. He just needs to get it in his head that James and Bella are an item. (:
im glad you ship Ethan and Lucy!! I ship them too! thanks for your review! Report Review
Glad to finally read the update... Ethan's reaction seemed ott but its not that big a deal.
I would have thought James would be more upset for Lucy.
The last bit was great, James & Bella's relationship is coming along nicely.
Thank you for another good chapter (even if it is short lol) Can't wait for the next one!Author's Response: Ahhh Ethan is overreacting a bit, but he's a guy. they're prone to that sometimes.
being upset for Lucy would be something that James would think about but the fact that his best friend hates him sort of overlooks that a bit. and, James knows that Lucy is a big girl; she can take care of her love life.
thank you so much!! the next chapter is in the queue lol Report Review
good chapter update soonAuthor's Response: thank you for the review! next chapter is in the queue! (: Report Review
"Itís not up to you what those two get up to in their spare time!" Nice one Lucy, way to make it even awkwarder. :)
Ethan being mad at Lucy is pretty stupid, it's not like she was going to betray one if her friends. He really needs to get over it.
I love the end of this chapter! ♥ It's so freakin' adorable when James says he loves her! Shipping Jella all the way!! ♥ ♥
P.s Just one teeny tiny thing - Brit picking. When Louis says ".change a babyís diaper" You might want to change diaper to Nappy. :)Author's Response: Lucy sometimes tends to lack tact and does what she wants lol
Ethan is being unreasonable towards Lucy but he has fancied her for so long; he got a lot of hope after she asked him to dance and to have to face this type of shock is huge.
awww!! What a cute name! Jella (:
and thanks for the brit pick haha
I try not to make my American-ness show but thank you!
this was a wonderful review, thank you! Report Review
I'm not really sure what to think of Ethan's reaction. It was a bit much but at the same time I know that is how some people react to that sort of news. Very well written.Author's Response: Ethan's a bit dramatic but I can't really blame him; it's something huge to take in. thank you so much for your wonderful review! Report Review
Oh god this is so good !!! I love it, but Ethan is being a jerk >.< but at the same time is reasonable, but still a jerk, Bella and James ... They are so cute together
Plis update faster is to good to be left hanging and wondering how it will goAuthor's Response: hehe yes, Ethan's overreaction does make him a jerk but don't judge him too harsly just yet! thank you for the wonderful review! i'm putting the next chapter in the queue right now actually! thanks! Report Review
Oh Ethan. Ethan Ethan Ethan. I hope he recovers from the shock and eventually makes amends but he is being silly. Being mad at not being told for a little while is understandable but being mad forever is just plain silly and I hope that he gets over it. It's silly to be so foolish. Anyway, keep up the great work and keep writing. Can't wait to read more!Author's Response: it is a harsh blow when you realize that this big of a news regarding your best friend and your little cousin has been hidden from you for so long, but Ethan will eventually get over it. He just needs time to process everything and realize what's more important.
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So when can we see the next chapter for this... I am dying to know, please don't let it stop here, I beg of you!Author's Response: it definitely won't stop here. sorry the updates are taking forever! school is remarkably busy. thank you for reviewing though! Report Review
omg such a good chapter update soonAuthor's Response: thanks for reviewing! (: Report Review
Ah! How could you be so cruel as to use a cliffhsnger now! Please, post fast!
XOXO, NikkiAuthor's Response: ahaha sorry about the cliffie!
but sometimes it has to happen xD
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I'm clearly dying here, but this history is fantastic, I'm pulling my hair here because I'M DYING TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN ! please UPDATE FAST >.< !!!Author's Response: hehehe I'm glad that you are anxious! thanks so much for reading! the next update should be out soon (: Report Review
I'm glad her mum is going to be there for her, Bella really needs her.
I reallt hope that Ethan is there for her, he might possibly kill James but I do hope he's there, Bella is family after all.
I really like this chapter and I ca't wait for the next one. And hopefully we'll get to know the baby's gender. My bet is a girl :D
Soph xxxAuthor's Response: ah, well Ethan's still a guy, and an overprotective cousin. We'll just have to see! xD
I'm glad that you liked this! Thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
Oh this was gorgeous. I loved it. keep up the good work xx :)Author's Response: you're too sweet (: thank you for reading and reviewing! Report Review
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