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Review #1, by ohmymerlin Back to the Avengers…WANDS!

11th December 2012:
Hello again!

It's the laaast one (read that in the Dodo's voice from Ice Age when talking about the watermelon).

I loved all the detail and emphasis you put on with the wands! It was really great! :D

You can also find more about wands on Pottermore, when I first read it I was so happy, I looked like a cat with catnip. :p

Just one thing, you've written:
Thor whispered demandingly,

"How is it your wand spit out a jet of blue light?"

That line doesn't make much sense. Maybe if there was a comma, it might clear it up. Or instead of spit, you write spat? Or add a that before your wand?

Anyway, I think that was the only typo I noticed. :)

This was a really good chapter, it was really ~mysterious~ and I loved that! :D

Anyway, I can't wait for the update! :D

10/10! :D

HAPPY HOLIDAYS! :D

Author's Response: Hey lovely!

Yes, the last chapter until the next update, which I haven't had the proper time to construct. I've been so caught up these past few months, exhausting all my brain power on school work, catching up with my weaker scoring classes that I haven't typed anything at all for chapter thirteen, as well as further chapters to all my other stories. The fact that I won't be able to submit anything at all until next year also dissapoints me, because then I'd be falling waaay behind than I intentionally planned, but I guess it's alright.

And yesh, I understand the Ice Age reference. I friggin' LOVED that scene. To be honest, I haven't seen that movie in a long time. I need to go watch it again. I love Sid. He's so...awesome. :D

And Pottermore! I haven't visited that site in forever. I got my account this last summer, and I remember staying up till one in the morning just to get caught up in all the action. I didn't check much into the whole wandlore though. I'll go check it out sometime, when I have the chance to visit the site again.

hehe...cat in catnip... XD

Ahh! Typos! Thank you for pointing this out to me. I'll bear in mind to fix it again when I undergo my second round of revising and editing.

And I am really glad that you enjoyed this chapter! Hopefully I don't leave you hanging too long for an update. I'm starting to think a lot of the people who favorited probably believe I've lost hope and abandoned this story because it's just been so long. Hopefully I can get one up once the new year comes around.

And happy holidays to you too! *throws a butt-load of silver, green, and scarlett confettie everywhere while singing "We Wish You a Merry Christmas"*


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Review #2, by ohmymerlin Do What you Want ‘Cause a Pirate is Free, Fury’s a Pirate!

7th December 2012:
This is actually my favourite chapter so far oh my god it was amazing!

Can I just say that you got the trio SPOT ON! It was EXACTLY the way J. K. Rowling wrote them! :O I am jealous of your talent! :p

And Rose is me. I am Rose. I love Thor and my next favourite would have to be Captain America and she was fangirling like I'm fangirling right now. :p

And the song! AHAHAHAHAHAHA SUCH A GOOD SONG! :D and I loved James and Albus! And Teddy!

Okay I loved everyone! :p

And OH MY GOD I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THE "Fury is furious" THING! :D

I loved it so much! I think there's only one more chapter until I have to wait for updates! :D

So yes I adored this chapter. :D

472964618649174829/10! ;D

Author's Response: Oh haai gurlie! Fancy seeing you here. I just clicked on my unanswered review box thingy and yours litterally just popped up. I let out a little squeal and held a five second party, while doing the cha-cha on my seat :)

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter the most. I honestly enjoyed typing this out than any other chapter in the story, mainly because of the Potter kids :)

And I'm glad I was able to capture the Trio as close to perfect as I could get them. I was hoping they stayed true to their character when I just typed it all out, and it's nice to know I prevailed.

And yes, Rose can be like your Weasely twin. She's fangirling, you're fangirling, I'm fangirling. The world's just fangirling about anything and everything right now! (and fanboying, though I'm sure guys won't ever admitt it). And Thor's just one of those guys that would make girls and animals, and plants drop to ground cause he's beautiful. :)

And yesh! The theme song to this chapter was very much necessary. It wasn't even planned in the beginning, but then I thought, "what the heck?", and the chapter was born!

And puns, puns, puns! I think this was just as bad as the "MARVELous" one, but I'm glad that someone shares the happiness I felt from what I got out of it.

And yes, I think it is one more chapter. Gawd, I haven't updated in a month, to be honest, but I've been so busy. Hopefully I can squease a chapter in before the queue closes, but if not, then it should have to wait. I didn't get as far as I wanted to. I was actually planning a christmas chapter, but I guess that won't happen soon.

Can't wait to see you next chapter! :)

Thank you lovely for your support


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Review #3, by ohmymerlin Meanwhile, at Stark Tower...

7th December 2012:
sHE'S NOT A FAN OF HARRY POTTER?!

ahahaha no that's not what I took in. :p I just wanted to be stupid. :p

Anyway, I LOVED this chapter, I kinda have a weird thing about Fury, he's just so funny and perfect. :p

It's not like my Thor obsession, more of an idol-y obsession. :p

Anyway, I really liked this chapter and when I get on a computer I'll respond to your review soon! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Lol, yeah, Maria Hill doesn't have a clue about Potter-verse. How much has she been missing out on, the world may never know.

And Fury's just that kind of guy. He gives complicated vibes to everyone. Either you love him, or hate him, and I personally have a weird fonding for him myself. (Is fonding even a word?!?)

And I'm glad you liked this chapter. Thank you so much for the review. Your reviews make me so happy!


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Review #4, by ohmymerlin The Slytherin and the Hufflepuff

5th December 2012:
Okay I reviewed for 2 reasons.

1) For the actual review (it'll come after the second reason).

2) You need to back up EVERYTHING! HPFF is going offline for a few days and you should back up everything as a precaution! I'm not too sure if you heard but I just wanted to tell you in case you didn't know. :) Back up reviews as well, but if everything does get wiped *knocks on wood*, you won't be able to get the reviews back there. It's more for you to be able to see all the nice things people have said. :D

Okay now onto the review!

I LOVED this chapter! I love Clint/Natasha! It's SUCH a cute couple! :D

You wrote them really well! I loved all the interactions and such. :')

I don't really have much to say, sorry! I just really liked this chapter it made me want to go, "SQUEEE!" :p

Anyway, I'll hopefully be back soon! :D

Author's Response: Hey lovely!

Thank you so much for the heads up. I had no clue that was possible, and because I have extra time on my hands right now, I shall do just that!

And thank you, I'm glad to know that I had written them well, and pleased to see that you enjoyed this chapter. They are adorbs aren't they? I just want to rope them up together forever and call it quits. BUT, I'm not going to make their shipment sail by so easily, unfortunately.

And that is fine :) Your reviews are beautiful as they are, and I'm delighted to know it made you feel like going "SQUEE!"

And I shall leave you some reviews myself. I have the time, and I shall embrace the oppertunity! :D

Thanks lovely, for all your support and of course, the heads up! :)


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Review #5, by ohmymerlin The Tale of Gilderoy Lockhart and The Quarrelling Exes

3rd December 2012:
Well I decided to review the next chapter now because I'm just THAT amazing! :p *hairflick*

(I'm joking by the way, I'm not really that arrogant - something that we can't say for Tony. :p)

I really loved this chapter and I was wondering how do you pronounce "McKay"? Is it the way you pronounce the surname, either "Mc-kai" or "Mc-key"?

I'm just curious. :)

Also, NO STEVE! You're only allowed to like Peggy!!! D:

I'm sorry this is my canon-nut coming out to play. :p

Anyway, I don't really have much to say in this chapter because I really loved it. :D

So yeah, 10/10! :D

Author's Response: Yes, you are very amazing! And no, it's not arrogant at all, because it's the truth!

And you prononce McKay as "Mc-Kay". I was debating about what you meant with "Mc-Kai", but here "Mc-Kai" sounds like "Mc-Kye". So.yeah! :D

And yesh, Steve+McKay! Only Steve's going to have to face through heartbreak again, I'm afraid. Poor Steve :(

And It's okay, your reviews are always lovely, and I couldn't ask for more. They're perfect! And I PROMISE, like cross my HEART, swear, that I will come around to review your stuff. I just hadn't had the time to lately, because, well...life. A crappy answer but I promise, I will get back to yeh!


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Review #6, by ohmymerlin First Period

3rd December 2012:
Bleb this is so late I'm sorry! D: I'm currently writing this because I have a free period and I swear, I've read this chapter a million times. :p

Anyways, this was a really good chapter! :D I liked all the interactions and such! :p

Although one thing, Hagrid wouldn't have been a Care of Magical Creatures teacher, he was still thought to be the one that brought the monster into the school and killed Myrtle. But it wasn't TOO big of a deal, I'm just a canon nut. :p

I really liked Clint and his arrow puns/jokes. :D I love puns and lame jokes so that's probably why. :p

And Thor, ♥, he's just perfect. ♥ I will marry him one day, just you watch! ;)

Anyway, loved this chapter and I will come to review again soon-ish, my last assessment is on the 12th so hopefully I'll have a bit more time! (although it is unlikely, my teachers just pile it on).

I'll be back. >:)

Author's Response: ERMEGHERD *random muscles spazzam ensues*

Hey lovely! Don't worry about being so late. I have honestly been lousy with my reviewing, reading, and writing these past few weeks. It's been more than a solid month and I have made no progress whatsoever, so don't feel bad.

But I'm so happy you're returning to writing. I can't wait to read some more stuff from yew! :3
I shall be creeping on here more often :D

And I didn't really put that into consideration when I worte that at the time. It was just something I felt like dooing. Oh well, I guess it can be labeled as alternate universe? No...okay, maybe not. But oh welps! And don't worry about being canon. We ALL love canon. :)

And Clint. Yesh. Puns and jokes and cheesiness all over the place. MEH-HEH-HEH

XD

Yeah, it's the christmas cookies getting to me.

And Thor. Thor shall be yours someday indeed!


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Review #7, by ohmymerlin The Assignment of Tutor Buddies

23rd November 2012:
Okay, I'm finally here!

*doves fly out from cardboard boxes*

This was such a sweet chapter ♥ I loved it so much!!

I understood the pairings completely, I hope Natasha and Lily become best friends 4 lyfe! :p

Sorry I've had cold medicine so I think it's made me a bit loopy. :p

ANYWAY, I reeeaaalllyyy loved this chapter! You seemed to have gotten the characters personalities spot-on! ;)

Although I found it a little odd that Dumbledore just let them have their lessons off, but ah well, the story wouldn't have been able to move on otherwise. :p

I will be returning to read the next chapter (hopefully) soon! :D

Author's Response: Why hell-ll-ll-oo-oo there!

*catches a flying dove and rejoices*

Huzzah!

I'm glad you liked this chapter. I thought it was kinda adorbs too, with them partnering up. Like study buddies! And they'll study together in the Room of Requirement, and, and.yeah! Big comfy bean bags for everyone! :P

Ahhh, I'm feeling tingly inside, with the sudden warmth of happiness... Oh gawd, this is getting weird. But I suppose with your cold medicine, we can be loopy together :)

And I hope you feels better! *Passes over a warm bowl of soup and saltine crackers*

And that's good that I've got their personalities spot on. I aim to keep it close to who they really are, so it's a relief they're turning out okay. But yes, good ol' Dumbly-dore. He does seem a little laid back, doesn't he? I totaly get your perspective, but I think I lazed up there quite a bit, and chose the easy way out. *bows head in shame*

And don't worry deary, take your time. No rushes. :)


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Review #8, by PotterBlack7201 Back to the Avengers…WANDS!

23rd November 2012:
This is one great story.I can hardly wait to find out if Harry and the others can recreate the time turner device.Then the problem will be how to get the Avengers back to their own time.Hopefully you can let them keep their wands.It would be really interesting to see The Hulk using a wand.Please update soon.Thank You

Author's Response: PotterBlack7201

Hello, new reader! I'm pleased to see that you like the story so far, and that it's still attracting new readers like you.

And yes, it seems like both future and past are scratching heads on this one. As for the wands, I will let them keep their wands. Maybe...It's been something I've been pondering on.

And as far as updates go, I've been absolutely horrible with them these past few weeks. I've been juggling with all my other fics, as well as doing my mountainous piles of homework, and it's Thanksgiving break, so I've been haveing family interractions all week. I don't know when the actual update for this story will happen, but I assure you, withing this month (hopefully), or next, you will have a chapter or two.

Thank you for reading and reviewing, and I hope you do stick around for more. This is not abandoned. :)

With all gratitude,

PhoenixPulse


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Review #9, by ohmymerlin The Reality of a Dream

11th November 2012:
Thor, Thor, Thor, Thor, Thor, Thor, Thor. ♥

I have an unhealthy obsession with him. You write him so perfectly! :D

Also, Natasha shouldn't be too upset about being in Slytherin, it's a house of ambition! And cunning-ness! Just because she's in Slytherin doesn't mean she's evil! D:

(I'm a Hufflepuff by the way, not a Slytherin - I'm just being Hufflepuff-y. :p)

I have a bad feeling because Clint keeps getting pushed aside - not really pushed aside, but I feel like he's going to be forgotten or something. D: Maybe it's just because I love him so much and not seeing him the whole chapter makes me sad. :p

AND JILY AGAIN! ♥ Although, I think Lily is being a BIT unreasonable! She's being quite rude to James!

NO, LILY. YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO HURT MY JAMES. HE'S TOO MUCH OF A SWEETHEART.

:D

Anyway, I loved this chapter! I'll try and read the rest soon! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Haha, oh Kayla! Your little obsession for Thor is so adorable. If I could, I would so send you a box of Thor plushies and action figures. But thank you for complimenting me on my portrayal of him. It makes me happy when my character(s) seem somewhat realistic.

And don't worry. Natasha will definately adjust to her house. She'll sort of gain that pride for being a Slytherin later, because I agree, she is ambitious and cunning -- which is what makes her beast.

And don't feel sad about Clint. I have a whole chapter dedicated to him and Tasha, you just haven't read it yet. ;)
Don't worry, he's far from forgotten.

And yesh, JILY! Lily's just undergoing sexual tension with James...she's still...conflicted(?) But don't worry, she'll come around sooner or later. She has to right?

And thank you for the lovely rating as well as the review. Hope to see you soon. :D


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Review #10, by ohmymerlin Sorting, Houses, and Everyone in Between

11th November 2012:
ily Thor

omg when you first described Barty Crouch Jr, and you hadn't said his name I was like, "OHMIGOSH THIS IS BARTY CROUCH JR I AM SHERLOCK"

Jokes Robert Downey Jr and Benedict Cumberbatch are the Sherlocks and RDJ is also Tony Stark.

ANYWAAAYYY, I really liked this chapter! I like all the interactions. :D

Especially this line:

"Brother dearest always gives people the creeps. And I must say, he's bloody good at it."

Did I mention I love Thor? :p

He's just so perfect omfg ♥

LILY/JAMES SHIPPING LILY/JAMES LILY/JAMES YAY JILY, JILY, JILY, JILY, JILY

ILY JILY

ILY THOR

ILY THIS STORY

I do apologise for the strangeness of this review. I had five packs of Maltesers so I'm a bit loopy. :D

and ahahahaha lil Reggie tried flirting with Natasha! :p What a newbb

AND THERE WAS SOME CLINT/NATASHA ACTION YEWW

SHIPPING IS GREAT ♥

ANYWHO, I'm going to just slide off and read the next chapter because who needs English essays? :D

Author's Response: Lol! Aren't you Thor's little stalker?!? You're so adorable with your fangirl-ness:)

And don't you worry about your review being strange. I enjoy reading strange reviews. They add a little spice to my life.

And yes. Reggie is a newb. But he's adorable in his own sneaky way. Natasha better look out for him though, just as a little forewarning...

And yes, who needs english essays? Speaking of English essays, I need to do mine as well.

Thank you for stopping bye to review! It's so lovely reading all your reviews. I hadn't had the time to update anything though, or stalk your stories, but next week, time should clear up due to Thanksgiving break.


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Review #11, by ohmymerlin Eavesdropping and Making Friends

9th November 2012:
yo.

Kayla is here.

Okay, I'll stop. I really liked this, it was adorable seeing the Marauder's act brotherly. :')

Also, THOR WILL BE IN THE BEST HOUSE EVER (AKA HUFFLEPUFF) AND THEN WE CAN GET MARRIED AND HAVE CHILDREN TOGETHER.

Or, he could be in Gryffindor. :p

and omg gotta love Loki. So narrow-minded yet still loveable! :p

Anyway, I really liked this chapter, it was nice seeing them all interact. :D

Author's Response: EEK! Kayla! Good to see ya' gurl! Totaly brightened my day to see your sweet review sitting in my review box. :)

And yesh, the Mauraders are sweet, aren't they? They're the best-est!

And I see you have a fling for Thor, eh? Fandom characters are the best to dream big about. My honest favorite would be Steve, but that's just meh. And I'm sowwie, I didn't make Thor a Hufflepuff. ;( (Please don't be mad)

And yesh! Loki. I want to just squeeze his cheeks.

Glad to see you liked the chapter. Thank you for reviewing. :)


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Review #12, by ohmymerlin A Night to Remember

4th November 2012:
Hello again! :D

This was another amazing chapter, however there were a few mistakes but I think it can just be cleared up if you read the story aloud.

Also, I was confused when Hagrid was leading the Avengers to Hogwarts. But this might be because my cousins were attacking me and my attention wasn't really focused. :p

And I saw your last response, that you felt it was still er... I can't exactly remember what you said, but I think you were a bit worried about the whole thing. If you want you can join the forums and ask for a Beta, I would love to do it but I've got far too much on my plate. :( They're really helpful! :D and we could be forums buddies! :D

So this was another amazing chapter, I loved it! I loved the food fight! James and Sirius were hilarious.

Is Ajax an English name? Because over here in Australia it's a type of cleaner thingy. :p It made me giggle. :p

So this was another amazing chapter! I can't wait to read more! :D

10/10!

Author's Response: Oh hello there! :D

And yes, typos! I tried to fix it up once when editing the first five (?) Chapters, but Microsoft Word doesn't catch everything that I don't catch, so I'm going to have to undergo edits...again.

And about you being confused about the Hagrid scene, I'll go back and look over it. I may just have to re-edit it or something, but I'll get to fixing everything up once time slackens. Your cousins sound so sweet though. :)

And I would love a Beta, however, I tried joining the forums before, but as I was signing up it said my email was invalid. I tried refreshing the page and closing my browser, but it kept saying the same thing. Hence why I don't have a MTA's page yet. I don't really like creating a new email either, because then I lose track of it, and as of right now I have a total of four different emails due to lost passwords and I can't remember my security questions. But other than that, I would LOVE to join the forums.

And I'm glad you like the food fight. It was my favorite part when wri...er, typing this chapter. :)

And Ajax. Honestly, I was thinking of something "different", seeing the series had some uncommon names. Ajax is actually a Trojan Warrior in mythology, killing 28 people and eventuallykilled by Paris and Apollo, but that's not really important, just a bit of background. So yeah, Ajax was a pretty strong and tough dude, wich I thought, explained the Woods pretty well, so Ajax it was! But yeah, I can see the comedy of it. Ajax is a type of cleaner here in the states as well. :)

Hopefully the story doesn't loose it's touch, and I'm eager to what you say on your next review :)


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Review #13, by ohmymerlin I Guess You can Blame it on Thor

1st November 2012:
I'M FINALLY HERE!

OH MY LORD THIS SEEMS AH-MAY-ZING! :D

By the way, I loved the pun in your summary, 'MARVEL-ous banner'! That made me very happy! :D

I just loved this so much! It was so good! And all the Marvel characters were in canon and Natasha/Clint ship! fdhhghdfxjhdfk

Only one thing you spelt 'hypocrisy' wrong, it was in this sentence:
"Are you saying that two gods can appear out of the sky but time travel is impossible, because if you do, you know that's hypocrocy."

That was the only error I saw, but other than that oh my golly gosh, this was amaze-balls!

Plus, you did Hagrid's voice/speech perfectly!

Anyway, I absolutely loved this! Now that I've reviewed, I won't be as long any more! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: EEK! Hurrah! I've waited for you for so long! *looks at you with googley eyes*

Anywho, I'm glad you like my little pun there. It felt very much necessary, and it fitted quite nicely in my opinion. It was one of thoser lightbulb moments. :)

And I'm happy that I managed to keep them in canon, despite that fact that I've never read a comic book concerning them. And yesh! Clintasha ship. I'm planning on building on that some more later on.

And really, just one error? Despite the fact that even after revising and editing, I still feel as if my chapters are rough and needs more editing. I will keep that in mind though and fix that error once I go through my second round of revising and editing. Thank you for pointing it out. :)

And yes, Hagrid needed to be incorporated! I'm glad I captured him as close to perfection as I could get him. I know he'd probably be at the welcome feast instead on the grounds, but this is in the 70's. We can say he's taking Fang on a walk. :)

I'm just so happy that you like this so far. I was scared that this might've been a let down, because you've been so anticipated for it. I'm glad you don't feel like that. :)

Thank you so much for the lovely rating and review, and I can't wait till you tell me how you feel about the rest of the chapters. :)


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Review #14, by john Back to the Avengers…WANDS!

26th October 2012:
so far i like it let me know when you post the rest of the story

Author's Response: John,

Hello! Glad to see that you stopped by to read and comment. It means a lot more than you know. I'll try to let you know when the next chapter will be up, but I'm afraid I don't exactly know how, seeing that the only form of communication I have with you is through responding your reviews. Just check every now and then in the next few weeks. I should have something up by then. Hopefull you come swing by again!

PhoenixPulse


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Review #15, by LittleMissPrincess Back to the Avengers…WANDS!

26th October 2012:
Oh darling, i feel so terrible for not reviewing earlier :(

and yes, this chapter turned out wonderful. i can understand all the research gone into this chapter and no, its not boring - it does stretch a bit - BUT THATS OKAY! this was a crucial chapter, and learning all that wand trivia was rather interesting(:

so update soon, kay?

Author's Response: LittleMissPrincess,

Hey there lovely!

Don't worry about not reviewing earlier. I appreciate your support through and through, and for me, it's never too late for a review. I open any at all times, so don't feel bad!

I'm glad that you thought this chapter was wonderful. It makes my heart happy to see that I've accomplished much with this chapter, which I have to say, it the chapter I worked the HARDEST on, believe it or not. And yes, it does stretch a bit, doesn't it? But fanfiction is weird, and honestly, I feel that I would've rather stretched the subject a bit, rather than be vague.

I'm glad you found this chapter interesting, and though I can't promise a soon update, I will update eventually, so hang on tight. There's pleanty more to look forward to.

PhoenixPulse


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Review #16, by NightStar Back to the Avengers…WANDS!

25th October 2012:
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AAAH YOU UPDATED!:D

Oh my god, this was GOOD! I really liked it! Researching and all was TOTALLY worth it! It was well-written, a bit monotonous but then again, your story is more of fluff so its alright:)
It was nice to see a good, long chapter :) You should do this more often.

I just have one concern. The story's turning out to be fluff, fluff and fluff. Did you intend to make it like that? Like just a general story with various types of genres and all? I don't mean to be rude! I'm just asking:) The story also seems to be going nowhere. Its just round and round and round. You've been taking it day by day and it seems a bit long but maybe that's just me because I've been waiting for each chapter to be uploaded and all. Don't take me seriously, you're doing an AMAZING job of writing this story. I'm just hoping your plot is strong because you've got a wonderful idea as a beginning and I'd love to see the story grow and bloom :)

All in all, DO WRITE MORE! :D Long chapters are good and don't worry, this chapter wasn't "grueling, boring or just pure unrealistic" xD I actually liked it :D

With loads of love,
~NightStar

Author's Response: Hey Nightstar, good to see you lovely!

And thank you for those kind words! I love how I was able to pull off a well written chapter with the immense research I put it. I aplogise it for being monotonous, but hey, I tried, and I'm pleased so far with all the positive feedback I've been getting.

And as for the story getting no where, the whole thing just started off as spontaneous. It was an idea that pestered me and I really needed to get my creative juices flowing, because it was durring the summer and we were on our summer holidays. No School = Braindead, so I just used this as a little excersise. And then I wanted feed back so I posted it on here. There was no original planout, except for the first four chapters. School's been getting in the way, and so for now, I'm afraid this might have to be put on hold...for a little bit. That way I've had time to extract what I've learned in english class and make this story better. That way I'd also have more time to plan things out properly. I know it seems scatter brained, but this was all for fun and warm-up. No strings attatched, just approached with great gusto.

With loads of returned love,

PhoenixPulse


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Review #17, by padmoonyfoot7 Back to the Avengers…WANDS!

23rd October 2012:
This chapter was really good! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Keep up the good work!!

;D

Author's Response: padmoonyfoot7,

It was good? Phew, I was always a bit sketchy about this chapter. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Stay in tact for the next, and I'll see ya' around. :)

PhoenixPulse


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Review #18, by Crescent Moon  Back to the Avengers…WANDS!

21st October 2012:
I really like this chapter.
I loved how you went into details about the wands and what they meant about the owner. Really well done :)
I also think you wrote Ollivander really well, very true to JK.
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Please update as soon as you can.
P.S. I've actually managed to review soonish, I'm surprised at myself!

Author's Response: AH CRESCENT MOON HAS ENTERED MY REVIEW BOX! *does a little happy dance*

Hey lovely, I'm glad to see you so soon :)

Thank you for complimenting on the whole wand ordeal. I'll be completely honest, the whole subject frightened me, and I was picky about the whole thing. As I typed it out, I kept on erasing, re-typing, erasing and re-typing. So this review really relaxed my nerves.

And thank you on your compliment about Ollivander. He seemed like an easy character to write, or should I say, type about. He's a mysterious bloke, but I always liked the old fellow.

And hopefully I don't leave you hanging for too long. This chapter was excruciating for me to write, so I'm taking a little break. Chapter thirteen probably won't be up until a couple of weeks. Hopefully you can stick around until then.

Thank you for the support. It means so much to me. :)

PhoenixPulse


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Review #19, by Crescent Moon  Do What you Want ‘Cause a Pirate is Free, Fury’s a Pirate!

18th October 2012:
I'm so sorry!! It's taking me ages to review at the moment even if I read the chapter as soon as it comes out.
I loved this one, the next gen kids were so funny. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next with them. And if the Trio are going to manage to figure out how to get them back.
I'll try and update soon next time, so sorry!

Author's Response: Hey Crescent Moon!

It's great too see you reviewing again. But really, don't stress about reviewing on time, I don't hold deadlines for reviews. :)

I'm happy that you liked the next-gen in this and that you're anticipating for more. Hope to see you around for the next chapter! :)

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Review #20, by NightStar Do What you Want ‘Cause a Pirate is Free, Fury’s a Pirate!

6th October 2012:
Hey ;)

First of all, DO THE MARAUDERS AND AVENGERS COME BACK NEXT CHAPTER?
I really am missing them xD

This chapter was alright.. It was a tad bit boring because it seemed very filler-ish. I also think Fury's reasoning for getting the The Golden Trio work with SHIELD should have been a bit more stronger. Also, how does SHIELD know about the wizarding world's existence? It would have been interesting if you would have mentioned that somewhere :)
You could have emphasized on Hill's confusion. I mean the magical world actually exists! She should be quite flummoxed (I'd be THRILLED! :3)
The best part of the chapter definitely has to be the Pirate singing xD. Pure genius! I could totally play out James strutting and walking around speaking like a pirate in my head and the whole scene was hilarious.

Gud werk there matey! 'S could 'ave been better 'hough! Yer doin' well!
Lookin' forwar'd to the nex' chappie, indeed lassie xD


^yeah, that sucked :P
See you soon! and glad to know you haven't forgotten 'Slytherin Much?' ;) xD
But its alright.. Real life IS annoying.. Take your time :)

With loads of re-returned love (xD),
NightStar

Author's Response: NightStar,

Okay, to answer your question, yes. The Mauraders and Avengers ARE coming back the next chapter. So don't fret. Hopefully it won't dissapoint. I've already finished it, but I haven't had the time to actually re-review it so I could post it up. I'm sort of nervous though. Wandlore is confusing, so I just did my best with the topic.

And I'm sorry this chapter wasn't what you expected. Everything was at the spur of the moment, so my ideas were probably all out there. And the vagueness. I apologise. But yes, it was supposed to serve as a filler. And as for Nick knowing about the Wizarding world, he's the only one. I think Fury's very secretive, so it's not something the whole organization knows about. But he has his ways, I suppose. To be honest, it was a spontaneous idea that came to me at the time, and I've hardly thought about it. I mean, I've thought about it before, but thoughts just come and go, if that makes sense.

And as for the whole James mocking Fury scene, I have to say, that was the only part that I had the most fun to write. I mean, I enjoyed writing this chapter, but it was mainly because of the Potter-Weasley kids actually meeting Fury. They're kids, so it only makes sense for them to take things childishly.

And your pirate immitation wasn't that bad. It passed in my book! :)

And I promise you, I really, REALLY do, I will get my arse to read 'Slytherin Much'. I might be able to read a chapter today, but I've got to read my History Textbook and take my online quizzes first. But I promise, I WILL get there.

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Review #21, by LittleMissPrincess Do What you Want ‘Cause a Pirate is Free, Fury’s a Pirate!

5th October 2012:
YAYAYAY! i absolutely LOVE this! i was so excited for this, and it totally lived up to my expectations(:
I LOVE HOW THEY'RE ALL HATING ON FURY. and like, its so perfect(:
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON.
LIKE YOU JUST HAVE TO.
LIKE, I WILL EXPLODE IF YOU DONT.
and i dont want to explode:(
so update!(:

Author's Response: LittleMissPrincess,

Well hello there lovely! I'm SOOO glad that this chapter lived up to your expectations. It's great to see that you enjoyed reading this, just as much as I enjoyed constructing it.

And yes, they're all hating on Fury. Fury's just that rotten cabbage that everyone likes to prod with a stick :)
And to be honest, I feel that when the Next Generation was introduced by Fury, that was the best part.(At least, I enjoy that part the most, on my behalf). Fury just doesn't like kids. :)

And I'll update soon. Possibly next week. Keep an eye out for it! Don't explode :) Keep it cool. :D

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Review #22, by NightStar Meanwhile, at Stark Tower...

1st October 2012:
Woah woah woah.. Short chapter indeed xD
Left me wanting more :P but well written as always.. And Nick Fury swearing.. Hmm.. You never swear too much in this story and I was surprised xD
Hill was portrayed well.. I can't say much because SHIELD makes just a few appearances in the comics so I have no idea.. And I wonder what the Potters are going to do in the future considering they have nothing to do with this! But I'm pretty sure it's going to be quite interesting to read and see everything unfold later.. As always, love the plot, good work of the characters and well written!

With loads of love,
NightStar

Author's Response: NightStar,

Yesh! I had to make this one short. I didn't know exactly how to expand upon it, so I felt comfortable to leaving it at that. And I'm glad to see it left you wanting more.

And as for our dearest Nick, I felt he had a rather scurvy tongue and course language. His intimidating look sorta gives off the vibe, ya know. Besides, it's what Samuel L. Jackson does best. :)

As for Hill, meh. I'll be honest, I didn't know how to write her, and I was a tad scared at first, but I had too, because she's a character like anyone else. It wouldn't feel right if I left her out. Her character was like a tiny chunk to the puzzle that felt awkward if tossed aside, ya know?

And yeah, about the Potters. I wanted to drag them in. At first it was debatable, but the burning desire to inside me won. I just couldn't say no.

Thank you so much, I want to say, for keeping up with me for so long. And I just want to let you kow, I haven't forgotten about "Slytherin Much". I'll bring myself to read another chapter soon, once I got the time to devote myself towards the story only and devise a lovely review you deserve.

With loads of returned love,

PhoenixPulse


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Review #23, by michaelasaurus A Night to Remember

30th September 2012:
Those sneaky Marauders :)

Author's Response: michaelasaurus,

Them sneaky marauders indeed! I love them, and I have to say, I'm proud about how I've written Lupin. He has a mischief streak in him, so I felt like it was only right to have him partake on the fun.

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Review #24, by michaelasaurus I Guess You can Blame it on Thor

30th September 2012:
I love crossovers, so I was obviously SUPER STOKED when I saw that someone had written an Avengers/HP crossover! I'm excited to see what you do with it!

Author's Response: michaelasaurus,

Well, welcome aboard to the Avenger/Harry Potter Crossover Express! I'm glad to see that I attracted another reader to this story.

And you use the word "stoked" too? Haha! Excellent word choice my friend, I'm in love with the word as well.

And glad to know that you are STOKED to see where this goes. Hope to see you on future chapters. :)

PhoenixPulse


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Review #25, by malfoygirl101 Meanwhile, at Stark Tower...

29th September 2012:
brilliant...i love this to pieces

Author's Response: malfoygirl101,

Awh! Thank you for complimenting the brilliance. It means a lot, it truly does. To be honest, this was one of my least favorite chapters I written. I found it flat and rather boring, a small filler I suppose. But I'm glad you liked it. :)

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