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Review #1, by dtinch Chapter four

24th October 2013:
sorry about the last review it was because i was looking through my bookmarked stories which i have quite a few and going through them and to my surprise no one had updated and let me explain i have over 20 book marked you would atleast think one would have updated. any way about your characters i think you should dictate how they are portrayed however you kind of gave a little hint that James was trying to actually get to know violet even before he found out who she was if i were you i would continue that way but as i said before you should dictate how your story plays out. still is a good story.

Author's Response: It's completely fine, I understand what you mean I have a million stories favourited and it's frustrating when they don't update! Thanks very much for the advice I'll certainly do that! Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #2, by dtinch Chapter three

2nd October 2013:
it is now October are you going to add another chapter soon i also like this story

Author's Response: I'm currently half way through the next chapter for this story, I'm trying to make it a long one, so ill try and get it up in the next day or so :)

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Review #3, by HP will never die Chapter three

20th January 2013:
This is really good, except it's spoiled slightly by the grammar. Please don't be angry with me. I just think your story, which I like as I like the character violet, would be a lot easier to read if you improved your grammar. I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Author's Response: Aw I'll try to correct some of that for you, sorry about that. Thanks I've got loads planned for this story so I hope you continue to like it! :)

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Review #4, by Drunaforever Chapter two

21st August 2012:
This is great, love the new chapter!
XD Drunaforever

Author's Response: Aw, thanks very much

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Review #5, by Drunaforever Chapter One

10th June 2012:
Okay I don't see how this is rated mature, but oh well. It's a good story, I want to read more, find out who Violet's parent are and yeah. 10/10

Author's Response: hello, thanks for the review, you'll see in future chapters and yes their one to look out for :)

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