Okay this is amazing! I love the way you portrayed everyone ! I literally always imagine them like this, completely in sync with each other and caring for each other.
You know how I feel bout Marauders fics so I'm super super glad I read this since it totally goes w my head cannon :)
Snapes so harsh, Avery just hates, poor Jamsie!! Aww Sirius! Babyy :( LILY!! Respect woman! Good for you, standing up for your man ;)
This was really good Claire. So good I literally couldn't see any errors since I got too caught up in the story haha.
--MyaAuthor's Response: yay! I really glad that I portrayed Lily right. I always thought that Lily is a very complex person deep down inside, and I think an that finally loving James is central to the key in her personality because let's face it, how can someone like Lily love the person that James was? It's an interesting development that I think says a lot about Lily (:
IM GLAD IT FITS YOUR HC :D
I always love to hear that because I always want to strive to write canon lol
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Hey, Santa here :)
Awww! That ending almost made me cry! It was so sweet. I love Jily, they're just so amazing together, and you write them so well! I loved Lily's thoughts and how they were like teetering back and forth about the decision. It was very fitting to her character.
Poor James! I think that is the worst of Snape's spells. It's just horrible :(
I cannot get over the sweetness of this. It's amazing. Your writing style flows so well too, I love it. And I love the "Until the very end" quote...it's so perfect for them. You're swinging the votes for Jily as my OTP (there are about three that I have to decide between) Great job on this one-shot, and I'm definitely favoriting it once Secret Santas are revealed! Gahh 100/10
Happy 2013!Author's Response: I LOVE JILY TOO! xD
Yes, I feel like even though we know that Lily's an incredibly brave, selfless, and kind woman, she is a human with human characteristics. I feel like her initial apprehension suits the side to her that is still human with fears.
I've always felt that "Until the very end" is an underappreciated and underloved quote as compared to "Always".
Hehehe yay for favoriting!!!
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Lily's face broke out into a wide smile as she whispered, "You’ll stay with me?"
"Until the very end."
Yes! Yes, we can all melt right here, right now.
This is absolutely fantastic, just in case you haven't realised that! I really like the way you unfolded the events of which Lily Evans finally realises that she can't live without James Potter. ♥ So sweet.
I thought you did a really good job with the overall thing. This is just so sweet. Little moments of James/Lily like these makes me want to have a guy like James. *dreamy sigh*
Anywho, this was an absolutely fantastic story! :D
Slytherin For The House Cup 2012,
Izzy xxAuthor's Response: aw thanks so much for this review! (:
it brightened up my day so much. thanks for reading hehehe
lol i love Jily so im glad that you liked this (;
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I enjoyed this story it was fun! One critique is the presence of the Creevey character when the creevey boys are/were muggle born. this bugs whenever I see stories trying to add potentially canon characters that cannot fit canon such as an older creevey or a too old tonks for example.Author's Response: erm... the creevey character? i know that colin and dennis were Muggleborn (though dennis's wife could be of any blood). i don't think i've mentioned a creevey character? o.O i looked it through and when i do mention a creevey, it's not for several chapters and it's just a small mention o.O but im a major canon person, so i know what u mean...? Report Review
aw you used "until the very end"!! that quote was placed perfectly. i really like how you put that in, it was adorable! well doneAuthor's Response: haha yeah thats where i got the inspiration from. i mean, snily fans are always going on about "always" so i decided to make "until the end" for jily. which, im glad you think it fits perfectly. thank you so much! Report Review
There are so many James/Lily fics out there, but this was definitely one of the more original and realistic ones I've read. Beautiful story, I loved it :) xAuthor's Response: thank you so much for that compliment! im a major canon-freak and whilst imaginative fanfics are fun, i much prefer writing ones where they seem more believable. thanks again! Report Review
I loved this, ugh I read I wonderful Snily and a wonderful James and Lily and I love both now. Why does everyone have to be such a good writer?
This was amazing, and it's making me ship James and Lily so much. I...I loved this.
I thought it was so perfect.
LizzieAuthor's Response: aw thank you so much! haha im a major jily fan so i try my best to convert people LOL Report Review
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