I really like this story! I've never been very good at constructive criticism, so I'm just gonna rant on how good the story is. I really like the Marauders era stories and I think the oc Willow is perfect for Sirius. Keep it up!! :) Report Review
Hey! It was really good... as usual :)
Well done in the badminton, by the way :D Report Review
Haha, okay, I was really happy when I saw you'd updated. Like really happy. You should update more often, then I could be happy more often!
Poor Willow, she's under so much pressure, what with dating Sirius and having the hearing and recently finding out her parent's deaths weren't accidental... Jeez, I would have collapsed by now. :(
But it would be epic if you put an awesome prank in the next chapter!
As always, please update soon! Report Review
I am freaking out inside!!! OMG!!! They actually kissed!!! RAWR!!! Report Review
Thank you for updating a bit quicker this time :)
... and I saw you writing in Physics while Brian Cox was on ;) was it this maybe... Report Review
ANOTHER CONFESSION!!! It's about time... Report Review
Aww... I GOT MENTIONED! Thank you! I'm just so excited now.
Right, down to reviewing. So, thanks for not dragging all the uncertainty out, it was very nice of you and don't worry; it doesn't detract from the story at all.
Willow and Sirius are so sweet! And they kissed! Really, all I want to do is jump up and down on my bed squealing, but I'm mature, so I'm resisting temptation.
Nasty Regulus. Hmph. Willow must be so sad, but I'm empathising more with Sirius at this point. I mean, he let his anger get control of him, and he beat Regulus up! He must be feeling so bad...poor Sirius. Yes, Regulus deserved it, but still.
Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
Must...resist...temptation...Aw, who cares? *Jumps up and down on bed squealing* Report Review
This one was amazing... I'VE BEEN WAITING AGES!
But i don't hate you :)
Can't wait for the next one! Report Review
RAAR, EVIL AUTHOR THAT LIKES CLIFFIES!!!
But Willow knows now, so she can just tell him. Right? RIGHT?
Please don't make this one of those angst-filled teenage pity-fests. Please?
Speaking of please, please update soon!! Report Review
Please please update soon! I really wanna know what happens! Report Review
keep writing please it is really good! Report Review
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Hey this story is really good I love it. Its like the only one I'm reading so please hurry and write more!Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update/write as quickly as I can :) Report Review
Woohoo I totes love it!Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
That was really good :)
I'm glad that Sirius Black is finally realising his feelings for Willow... it took a while! ;D
Keep up the brilliant work! Can't wait for the next chapter...Author's Response: Thanks, yet again :)
The next chapter will be up soon! (hopefully) :D Report Review
I think this was my fave chap so far! I loved how Willow finally opened up to Sirius...and yay, he's finally realising his feelings for her!! Please update soon! And i wud luv to read more in Sirius POV :)Author's Response: Thank you again! (third review!) I'll update as soon as I can and there is more Sirius P.O.V :) Report Review
So amazing. ;)
UPLOAD SOONER! I want to know what happens... I'm gonna bug you in P.E. nowAuthor's Response: Haha :D As always, thanks loads :) Report Review
I don't like reviewing until I've read the entire piece and wow great job! Fantastic content! You had a few little spelling and or grammar errors I would suggest having some one look over it and fix them as they read it, helps if you don't do it yourself, trust me. Also did you forget about a little 20 gallion deal at the end of this chapter?Author's Response: Thanks, I really appreciate it :) I'll re-read it and make any corrections, thanks for pointing it out. And yeah :/ I did forget, I'll add it in when I can so thanks for reminding me! Report Review
Really, really good! Please put up more SOON!Author's Response: Thank you!! :D Hopefully next chapter will be up sometime in the week? :) Report Review
I rly lyked how u portrayed sirius n regulus's relationship...how sirius feels guilty n all... n of course the bet :)
I m waiting desperately for sirius to realise his feelings for willow ( and vice versa)..
Nyways...another grt chap.pls update soon! :DAuthor's Response: Thanks :) Sirius's feelings will definitely be realised before Willow, but that's all I'm saying ;)
Will update as soon as I can! :D Report Review
Hey! I really like this story! Would like more of interaction between Sirius and Willow, though. Can't wait for the flirting to start! ;)
Anyways, please update soon! :DAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks :) Don't worry, there will be arguing, pranking and flirting between Sirius and Willow ;) Report Review
AH!!! ...that chapter was really good ;)
Are the Marauders going to find out Willows secret? You have to tell me at school! KEEP UP THE AWESOMENESS!Author's Response: Thanks :D And I can't tell you any spoilers ;)
Will do! Report Review
I like the little bit of Sirius POV very enjoyable:) Update SoonAuthor's Response: Thanks loads :) I will, hopefully Report Review
please put the next chapter up!Author's Response: I'll try and update as quickly as I can :) Report Review
I like how you wrote the story! I espesaliy love year four :)Author's Response: Thanks :) Fourth years was probably my favourite too! Report Review
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