Beautiful imagery and a wonderful background for Luna! I love it! Report Review
I really love this! Luna is so awesome!
I thought that you did a wonderful job characterizing her. She is quite the character and always puts a smile on your face. I also thought you did a great job on the other characters as well.
I loved the descriptions and how you balanced them out so it didn't overwhelm the story. It painted a wonderful picture in my mind. I also thought that the story was well paced and flowed smoothly.
Keep up the awesome writing! =)
Recenseo 2012Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I have been working on the story, off and on, for about a year, now. I have all the chapters written, but not polished quite yet. I will be posting the first three or four chapters as fast as I can get them validated, but I have some work to do on the remainder.
Check back in occasionally, and I hope you enjoy reading the remainder of the story as much as I enjoyed creating it.
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