{reviewid: 2756333, reviewer: 'hp17'}
4th December 2012:
I am crying. Oh my god that was the saddest ending ever. I am mad. And sad. And frustrated this is over. Thank you for this beautiful story.
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{reviewid: 2749712, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
1st November 2012:
That was harsh. They were both so mean. I love your story and i hope you add more soon. I really want to find out what happens next.
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{reviewid: 2746869, reviewer: 'Milli%20Mead'}
18th October 2012:
No! Why are you deleting? I wanted to see if hermione and draco made it back together again :( i admit, sometimes it was predictible and the chapters seemed quite short, but it was good!
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{reviewid: 2746693, reviewer: 'Guest'}
17th October 2012:
Im not trying to be mean but your story is too cliche and predictable and occ. It is not that bad but if you add more plot, it could be better. Also, it takes time for people to fall in love especially if they hated eachother. It sounds too girlish and junior highish.
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{reviewid: 2746232, reviewer: 'RowlingsGirls_22'}
15th October 2012:
I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. But this is gonna sound so harsh even though it's not meant to be!
It was rushed and I think that even though it pushed the story along, it wouldn't have been too bad if you made a chapter for one or two of the events each.
Again I'm sorry if this sounds harsh but I'm attempting to help you improve your writing so that you can BLOW PEOPLE'S MINDS WITH YOUR WRITING. Every little bit helps right?
- DracosCookie
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{reviewid: 2740997, reviewer: 'mniataran'}
19th September 2012:
amazing ff...continue son
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{reviewid: 2736622, reviewer: 'berta'}
1st September 2012:
update soon please. I'm hooked. I wanna know why hermione left. Update soon please!
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{reviewid: 2734504, reviewer: 'MiSTY_VoLPe'}
25th August 2012:
oh good chapter please update soon!
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{reviewid: 2734502, reviewer: 'MiSTY_VoLPe'}
25th August 2012:
naw cute chapter! keen to read more
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{reviewid: 2734498, reviewer: 'MiSTY_VoLPe'}
24th August 2012:
good chapter! story is very interesting so far!
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{reviewid: 2732646, reviewer: 'granger_'}
18th August 2012:
Aaargh can't wait for the next chapter update soon X
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{reviewid: 2732505, reviewer: 'bookworm530'}
18th August 2012:
What?? Are they going to erase Scorpius' memories of his parents too? He is suppose to go back to the future and save their marriage! Update soon!
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{reviewid: 2730380, reviewer: 'granger_'}
11th August 2012:
Oh my gosh that was such a cute chapter...
Loved it please update soon
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{reviewid: 2730298, reviewer: 'MiSTY_VoLPe'}
11th August 2012:
good chapter! love the story so far
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{reviewid: 2729971, reviewer: 'Char'}
10th August 2012:
Please post another chapter soon!
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{reviewid: 2729833, reviewer: 'Nikki%20Howard'}
9th August 2012:
So adorable! I loved it!
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{reviewid: 2729631, reviewer: 'bookworm530'}
9th August 2012:
If she said she loves him, shouldn't she call him Draco by now? I think it was perfect timing for a kiss, but the "L" word may have been a little too soon. It is a very cute chaoter though and it made me smile. Are they going to be a couple now? Are they going to help Scorpius get back to the future to save their relationship? Update soon!
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{reviewid: 2729438, reviewer: 'Nikki%20Howard'}
8th August 2012:
So amazing! It was great!
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{reviewid: 2729204, reviewer: 'granger_'}
8th August 2012:
That's really sweet update soon
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{reviewid: 2729018, reviewer: 'XxintothemoonxX'}
7th August 2012:
Such an amazing story so far. I am really excited to read the next chapter. I hope they can work everything out. Can't wait :)
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{reviewid: 2729009, reviewer: 'bookworm530'}
7th August 2012:
My one complaint is that these chapters are too short! I am glad that Draco finally admits that he likes Hermione and that she is Scorpius' mother. I hope they figure out how to return Scorpius to his present time and that he can help his parents stay together in the future. Update soon!
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{reviewid: 2727847, reviewer: 'bookworm530'}
4th August 2012:
Happy for an update but this chapter was way too short! Update soon : )
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{reviewid: 2722360, reviewer: 'LunaStar'}
19th July 2012:
OMGSH IF YOU DONT POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON I'LL... I'LL... I'LL BE BUGGING YOU WITH MORE COMMENTS! jk... I won't but please write more! This is a really interesting story :)
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{reviewid: 2713729, reviewer: 'Elizabeth'}
27th June 2012:
So... In the dark they can tell who the bushy, brown haired girl is but not who the white-blonde haired guy is? lol
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{reviewid: 2713096, reviewer: 'dramione_luv84'}
26th June 2012:
yay! so sweet! :] loved it aw but cant wait to read the reaction of harry & ron lol! update soon!
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