You write well and I found this first chapter very gripping. There are so many complex relationships and underlying concepts behind the Black family, I think anyway, as well as the true pure blood families. Saying that, this perspective of a Slytherin pureblood back in the day of the first War is very intriguing!
Update soon! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it and the Black family is definitely an interesting one, which I haven't really explored before. Thanks for the review and I hope to see you back for the next chapter when it's up :) Report Review
I'm interested in where this is going!
I found it quite interesting that she loves Lucius... That's a pretty uncommon feature in fanfics!
Keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thank you! I don't like the idea that Lucius and Narcissa were an arranged marriage - I think there's plenty of evidence in the canon that they did love each other. Thanks for reading and reviewing this one! Report Review
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