Most exciting part, the climb into the clouds to capture the snitch.
Loved it!Author's Response: Well I am glad that you loved it :)
And thank you so so SO SO MUCH for reviewing. You seem to hit every chapter and I'm INCREDIBLY touched :D Report Review
Sounds like Al only asked out Hannah because he thought the girl he really wanted was tied up at the moment (so he thought) and he was looking for a distraction. Now he finds he is missing the girl he wants and feels regret now that he knows how she feels and the truth came out that she really wasn't seeing anyone. Enjoy your time alone Al.Author's Response: You seem to be angry with Al lol, which is totally okay because I'm angry with him, too. I mean, writing the last half of this chapter was fun, but the whole time I was just like "Oh, Al, you're so stupid sometimes."
But, anyway, thank you for the review! :3 Report Review
aaaw I love this chapter! it's really interesting and capturing an I can't get enough of it! please update soon! I'm really curious to see what it's all about with Albus and Hanna and with Deltas mother! update please :) :)Author's Response: I am still writing the next chapter but it will be up as soon as I am certain it is finished. Thank you so much for the kind review - it made my day haha :) Report Review
I'm sorry your sick but I love this story and I really liked this chapter as well...I'm surprised Al knew, you caught me off guard with that, but I'm actually kind of glad that he does. Now the whole group is in on the secret at least.
Happy holidays!Author's Response: It's okay, I'm actually starting to feel much better today :)
Yeah, I'm glad Al knows now, too. Writing the next few chapters will be interesting ;)
THANK YOU for the lovely review :D Report Review
So I take it that someone is a warewolf? What do moonflowers mean? that it's him?
Good chapter, hope your well soon, MerryChristmas :)Author's Response: My answer to your first question is perhaps ;)
Haha, I'm really bad at mystery sometimes... Oh well. Also, I'm not very knowledgeable about flower meanings, but after doing some searching online I've found that most websites say that moonflowers signify 'dreaming of love' which I felt was kind of/sort of appropriate.
In regards to who it is... Well, you'll see eventually. First, other things need to be addressed, such as the letter from Delta's mum and Luke's little secret and Delta & Al's friendship turning into a relationship...
Anyway thank you for reviewing and Merry Christmas to you, too! I hope you have a good one :) Report Review
This is a great chapter! I really like Delta and her relationships with everyone, especially Rose. And Luke is okay! That is good news! And Lauren will be okay but for now she is still in St. Mungo's. Exciting stuff. Haha. So Hogsmeade with Delta and Josh is the next chapter... Interesting... Stroke invisible Dumbledore beard... Anyway please update soon!Author's Response: Well that's good to hear because I really enjoy writing Rose. She's a lot of fun :) Also, I wouldn't have hurt Luke or Lauren if it weren't part of the plot... that will be fun later... ::whistles::
...Anyway, Hogsmeade is the next chapter, isn't it? I'm about to start writing it right now, actually lol. This will be fun. :)
Thank you SO MUCH for reviewing again! :D Report Review
Wait... how come no one tackled the fact that her dead mother is apparently able to send letters.
And therefore has no access to anything. right?
i dont get it? is she dead? or did she just leave the family and was proclaimed 'dead' but she actually just left?Author's Response: You know, I was wondering when anyone was going to point that out lol. Yes, her mother is dead, so she wrote the letter before she died and left it with someone she trusted enough to send to Delta when the time was right. In fact, this person will step forward and tell Delta this later, when things begin to get more complicated... Report Review
omg/: it's the werewolf, isn't it?
omg thats creepy. but i like it(:
ALSO what i do love, is the chapter image! im really proud of you for being able to do that yourself(:Author's Response: the werewolf? Maybe...
Okay, I'm trying to be mysterious, but I'm probably failing at it miserably...
Anyway thank you very much, that chapter image was kinda difficult to make (although the one with Lily was definitely the most difficult!), but I am very glad that you like it :) Report Review
awh you made the chapter image yourself(:
its nice(:Author's Response: well thank you! (: Report Review
Oh Al. Why can't you just like Delta already? Anyway what happened to Luke and Lauren? If you can't tell me in the review please update soon.Author's Response: Al just needs a bit of a push/shove in the right direction is all...
Well, Luke and Lauren went out to the Forbidden Forest in the middle of the night and were attacked by something and someone. I would say who&what, but it's a mystery... I'm sorry that I'm of NO help :(
Okay, okay, I'm just kidding - I give in! There's a bad guy in this fic and he happens to have some people with him that are synonymous to the Death Eaters (though they are a bit different from the Death Eaters, admittedly).
No, he's not like related to Voldemort or anything, promise. I don't particularly favor stories involving the son/twin brother/cousin/daughter/whatever of Voldemort.
There are also 'creatures of the night' lurking in the forest... if you get my drift.
Okay, so that's still a pretty vague answer but hopefully it's at least somewhat satisfactory for now. Maybe? haha.
Anyway, I have about 85% of chapter ten written already. The last 15% is giving me some issues... But then it shall be puteth into the queueth.
Thank you for the lovely revieweth.
Much love, Caitlin. Report Review
That was a good update, wonder how the date is going to end up?Author's Response: We'll just have to see how it goes, now won't we? ;)
I haven't written that far yet so I can't really let on either way hahaha. I'm actually behind on writing right now :/
Anyways, thanks for the review (: Report Review
I really enjoyed this chapter. Is the next chapter Hogsmeade or about Lauren and Luke? I think the Hogsmeade trip will end up being very funny. Please update soon!Author's Response: The next chapter will cover Halloween and Lauren and Luke will be in most of it, but I'm not sure if it will go into Hogsmeade or not. Right now I'm guessing it will be the next chapter... or even chapter eleven. I'll probably have a better idea after I write chapter nine lol. So I'll let you know then.
Anyway, thank you once again for reviewing :) I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Report Review
I liked roses pov... Would love to hear al's thoughts thoughAuthor's Response: Well I am very seriously thinking about using his POV later on. (;
Thank you for the review! Report Review
I normally don't like reading stories when they have someone else's point of view besides the main person, but I am glad you chose to. We got to see more of scorpius and rose. We also got to see how rose interacts with delta. Please update soon!Author's Response: I'll admit that the only problem I have with switching points of view is when it isn't necessary. I'll only do it if I can actually give reasons for doing so. Not to mention it's difficult for me to switch gears - it's like switching from the mind of one person to the next abruptly (it's just awkward!). So that's another reason why I may or may not do it again...
But I'm glad that you're glad that I chose to haha. ;)
And I have the next chapter written, but I'm hoping to have chapter nine at least partially written before I put it in the queue. Hopefully I can do that tomorrow!
Thank you for yet another review, I hope to see you in later chapters too :D Report Review
I'd rather have fudge :)
I liked this chapter. In the beginning I thought Scorpius got cursed or something because of the way he was talking to Rose. Good thing Rose understood him. I would have killed him! lol
See you next chapter, let us know when the Pic's go up, I like art work in fan fic Author's Response: Maybe I'll give away fudge next time? haha ;)
Yeah, Scorpius is an interesting soul. No doubt. He and Rose have been together (off and on, anyway) since nearly the end of their fifth year. So I was greatly under the impression when writing this that she would be able to interpret him a little better than, say, Delta would. (:
I will definitely let you know when the images are added - wouldn't want anybody to miss my hard work. For real, I think putting those images together is harder than writing and editing. >_< I think it's getting easier the more I do it, though. Problem is that I just don't have the patience sometimes.
Oops, I'm rambling now. haha. I'll shut up.
The next chapter should be up sometime next week. Maybe a little later, but I doubt it.
Thanks for yet another AWESOME review.
Seriously, reviews make my day - and make me feel like I must be doing something right. :D Report Review
so i just read all your chapters i like your story and the character delta i dunno why but i think she's quiet unique i've never read a story with a person having a gift like she does which makes her so much more interesting i like the way her character isn't like OTT on liking al but still it really adorable because she's always blushing and he's just unaware that she likes him...i like the character josh and i think its funny how awkward delta is when she's talking with him and other people other than rose. i can't wait to see her come out of her shell a little and i know that because josh likes her they will probably go hogsmaede or something but i'd like to see them as close friends. but i can't wait to see what you've got planned for the characters :D .
really loving your story so far update soon :)Author's Response: I have to say that everything you just said makes me so happy haha - although that's because I feel the same way about these characters (it's almost like you read my mind!).
Oh, and I have a lot of things planned for these characters! Seriously, it's almost ridiculous. :)
And I will have chapter eight in the queue by Sunday or Monday I hope. So the next update should be pretty quick.
Thanks a million for the lovely review! (: Report Review
Creepy is a good word for the ending of this chapter, though I loved it the same!
Hm, does Joshy Woshy have a crushy wushy on Delta?? Hm??? Because I have to say, they wouldn't look bad together. Not as good as Al and her though.
That sly Hufflepuff! Lauren has a sixth sense for appropraite nickname for sure!
UPDATE SOON PLEASE! I REALLY DO ENJOY READING THIS STORY!!!
1,000,000/10Author's Response: Considering creepy is what I was going for I am glad to hear that :)
Secondly, Joshy Woshy might just have a 'thing' for her. But we'll see for sure soon enough. xD
You are pretty much spot-on with Lauren. She has a bit of a gift when it comes to nicknames ;)
The next chapter should validate very soon and then chapter eight will follow shortly after!
1,000,000 out of 10?! ::melts into the chair::
thank you :) you are too kind :P Report Review
Loved the Rubberband war, makes me think of home and we also used to fling bottle caps off our fingers by snapping them. Those hurt the most! Parents stayed out of the basement if they started hearing OUCH! lolAuthor's Response: hahaha yeah. I'd be lying if I said that my guy friends flicking rubberbands all over my house didn't completely inspire that. Personally, I can't flick one without swatting my own hands with them several times. heheh. So I usually just watch. :D
Thank you for the review :) Report Review
I loved this chapter! The whole Albus/Scorpius dynamic is interesting and I'm actually glad you don't have them as best friends like alot of people do. Everyone seems to try and make him the next Sirius Black but I prefer him when he's a Slytherin.
Great chapter...update soon :)Author's Response: well thank you - and yes, I feel weird when people make those two best friends. If anything, they'll at least be able to stand one another by the time this story is over haha.
Anyway, I shall update soon! :D Report Review
This story is really good. I am really interested in how she puts up the wall to not know what other people are feeling and how she can put down some of it. Is there more information on that coming up? Please update soon!Author's Response: I'm going to explain it more thoroughly in one of the upcoming chapters, either through an author's note or through dialogue between delta and one of the other characters. I will briefly say that was she does is actually called shielding, which is done with the energy within your own body. Anyway, im currently writing chapter six so it should be up soon! Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
I LOVE YOUR NEW BANNER! And this FANTABULOUSLYEPIC EPIC story of yours!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I SHALL BE WAITING!!!Author's Response: Thank you times like four haha :)
Well, I'm currently in the middle of chapter 6 and it should be up very soon!
:D Report Review
I'VE BEEN WONDERING THOSE THINGS! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW!Author's Response: I will be giving hints throughout the story until the reveals! So guess away when you have a theory! :D Report Review
UGH, YOU MAKE ME FEEL SO BAD! I keep going on to the next chapter, but then I feel bad because I didn't leave a response to this chapter. First of all, I LOVE YOUR CHAPTER IMAGES! This chapter image definitely my favorite ;). Oo, buying brooms I see. Let's see what happens next!Author's Response: Yeah, this image is my favorite too - he's sooo pretty haha :) I really love your reviews lol! Report Review
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER TOO! I was so hoping for Al and Delta to get together. But I guess it's much too early. Like in some stories it takes 25 chapters, talk about slow burner. And I really want her to tell Al that she's an empathetic or something like that.Author's Response: Yeah, they're going to take some time to get together, I'm afraid :O I'm not entirely sure how long though :D anyway, she will tell him at some point! Report Review
OH MY BLOODY CARROTS!!! I LOVE THS STORY AND I'VE ONLY READ ONE CHAPTER!!! Im SO curious as to what happens next! I'm off to read another chapter! Ta - TaAuthor's Response: Lawl, carrots haha:) I'm glad you like it so much! Report Review
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