oh! So very lovely! I hope to see more of this! Report Review
I quite like this story :) You are doing a very good job of characterizing James, and it is interesting seeing it from his perspective. It keeps you interested. I was a little surprised she accepted his offer, and their Hogsmeade trip will be fun to read about. Update soon!! Report Review
oooh i love it!
i like how its from james's point of view, that makes it different.
keep it up please!!! Report Review
Well. Unespected of her. I really do love this story- he acts just like the first James... But will he sucseed?
~sl Report Review
you really gotta write more! Report Review
Wow. This is a really good start on a story and I have to say that it made my day soo much better :) Please continue with this story.
~sillylionAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you! Report Review
I like the fact that it's a kind of 'how to' guide (that James kind of fails on making happen) it adds to the humour of it :P
I hope Nina does go for James :) Pretty please make that happen in the end. However, what Elle says at the end makes me think that might already be happening ;)
hpsauce Report Review
nice story, got me laughing profusely. Hope the next chapter comes soon! :) Report Review
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